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  • Callan's Avatar
    2,721 posts since Jan '00
    • Making a difference to my life,
      Illuminating the crimosn sky,
      Surfing across up high,
      Saving the boring night.

      Thinking of you made me breathless,
      Igniting my heart flameless,
      No end is my thoughts of you,
      Yank me close to you.

  • Miss Tiny's Avatar
    6,415 posts since Feb '08
  • seotiblizzard's Avatar
    28,979 posts since Apr '06
  • Callan's Avatar
    2,721 posts since Jan '00
    • To answer your question Miss Tiny,

      Cyber Imagination

      Deep in the tunnels of my mind,
      images abound,
      Silky Hair and Sparkling eyes,
      tempt me like the devil.
      Was that pair of eyes yours?
      I sure hope it is,
      for none charmed me like it did.

      Words flow like streams of clouds,
      into my mind they went.
      fogging my thoughts no end.
      A vision is finally form,
      and how beautiful you look.

      I pondered, if this was you,
      but why the heck I care?
      This is how I want you,
      and how you will to me.

      Till we meet shall it perish,
      or maybe it will stay.
      "Nonetheless" I told myself,
      you are beautiful this way.

  • Miss Tiny's Avatar
    6,415 posts since Feb '08
  • Callan's Avatar
    2,721 posts since Jan '00
    • Originally posted by Miss Tiny:

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      did u write all these urself?? icon_lol.gif

      Why would you doubt it? Many have copied my work, but I have never copied others.

  • Miss Tiny's Avatar
    6,415 posts since Feb '08
  • Daisuke-kun's Avatar
    19,078 posts since Jun '07
    • Dive into my heart please

      Always being difficult to get

      Infect me with a disease call caring please

      Sinful, I have been but it was all worth it for you.

      Until the day comes, I'll still wait for you.

      Kindly there for you

      Ending the journey to attain your love

      -
      K
      ill me with something

      Unified me with the bodies of those you have killed as well

      No matter what, please keep my heart to yourself

  • Bak la va's Avatar
    3,585 posts since Apr '08
    • Originally posted by Daisuke-kun:

      Dive into my heart please

      Always being difficult to get

      Infect me with a disease call caring please

      Sinful, I have been but it was all worth it for you.

      Until the day comes, I'll still wait for you.

      Kindly there for you

      Ending the journey to attain your love

      -
      K
      ill me with something

      Unified me with the bodies of those you have killed as well

      No matter what, please keep my heart to yourself

      Wlau, Dai, now i know Y u got so many flings...icon_lol.gif

  • Daisuke-kun's Avatar
    19,078 posts since Jun '07
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    3,585 posts since Apr '08
  • thehappybunny's Avatar
    6,814 posts since Aug '07
  • Callan's Avatar
    2,721 posts since Jan '00
  • thehappybunny's Avatar
    6,814 posts since Aug '07
    • igniting my heart flameless....isn't it like a one step forwards and one step back kinda thing?

      igniting a fire, yet when you use flameless...

       

      oh never mind, just some opinion on my side.
      props for the poems

  • Callan's Avatar
    2,721 posts since Jan '00
    • Originally posted by thehappybunny:

      igniting my heart flameless....isn't it like a one step forwards and one step back kinda thing?

      igniting a fire, yet when you use flameless...

       

      oh never mind, just some opinion on my side.
      props for the poems

      It is very much an oxymoron. When you ignite something, you cause something to burn, normally with fire. But in this case, the heart actually got ignited without a flame. IT represents a state of confusion and wonder, a palpitating heart filled with excitment ready to explode.

      In acrostics, you are only given a few sentences to express alot. Thus to preserve the poetic nature of the work, the feelings in the poem are mostly hidden and not entirely exposed. It's not like you are writing a composition. The need for it to be linguistically beautiful is still there.

      Edited by Callan 04 Jan `09, 12:28PM
  • Daisuke-kun's Avatar
    19,078 posts since Jun '07
  • Callan's Avatar
    2,721 posts since Jan '00
    • Originally posted by Daisuke-kun:

      see mine no problem icon_lol.gif

      This is a open forum and I hate to be marking your essay. (Note the word essay.) But expressions towards poetry should be started young and thus I should not be dousing thy flames.

  • Daisuke-kun's Avatar
    19,078 posts since Jun '07
    • Originally posted by Callan:

      This is a open forum and I hate to be marking your essay. (Note the word essay.) But expressions towards poetry should be started young and thus I should not be dousing thy flames.

      my essay at the Hideout arh? icon_lol.gif

      dat 1 is plain rubbish that i wrote lar icon_lol.gif

  • Nata|ie's Avatar
    6,471 posts since May '03
  • Callan's Avatar
    2,721 posts since Jan '00
    • Originally posted by Nata|ie:

      Woah... is this a love poem?? icon_lol.gif

      It's just something to burn my braincells since they are overwhelming me at night.

      Nothing much but a little something to make a pretty face smile.

  • Nata|ie's Avatar
    6,471 posts since May '03
    • Originally posted by Callan:

      It's just something to burn my braincells since they are overwhelming me at night.

      Nothing much but a little something to make a pretty face smile.


      That's nice... :)

  • fairlady_xoxo's Avatar
    13,349 posts since Jan '07
  • Nata|ie's Avatar
    6,471 posts since May '03
    • Originally posted by fairlady_xoxo:

      Heh...reminded me how the bf and i exchange poems


      Wa!!!! So romantic.. kekeke

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    13,349 posts since Jan '07
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    6,471 posts since May '03
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