Originally posted by DeerHunter:
Twist and turn is not my style,
Forthright and straightforward,perhaps dull,
Using only facts, truths, reason and logic, i'll mull,
To present it best, and render others' lie null.
If you are too stupid to accept reality within your skull,
And believe in lies, half truths, and cunning wiles,
confusing your rationality and common sense, they lull,
Then suffer yourself, regrets will be too late, your life sour .
Your wider audience has seen your 1% inspiration has faltered
as your 99% perspiration show your last rhyme has faulted
Do you need to twist and turn with your lowly inspired style
when your uninspired mind thrive only from your bile
With little intelligence to discern reality and facts from lies and propaganda
all a 'dearHunter' can do is fill his brain with bushels of banana
Even a chimp can be trained to exercise reason and logic
can your 1% inspired mind possess any potent magic
Only a deluded 'dearHunter' will see reality inside his skull
when others will have theirs from a wider world cull
Why will he persist in seeing lies, half-truths and cunning wiles
could it be that his 99% perspiration cannot hide his Mentor's vile
Is the 'dearHunter' no longer confident of his audience intelligence
that pushes him continuously to indulge with his indiscretion
only the fool will insist in his indiscreet wilful ways
vainly believing to hold everyone in his sway
With little reasonable arguments to fall back on
the 'dearHunter will repeat the same lines thrashed and torn
With little evidence left to be shown
all he can do is more distraction thrown
When our truth surface as the sun must rise
we shall see how the 'dearHunter' pretend to be wise
Can we continue to trust the 'dearHunter's political interpretation
when recorded historical facts cannot be subject to his wilfull confusion
It is best that we continue to thrash the dearHunter's nonsense
in the best ways that we can smash the facts into his senses
If he can only see lies, half-truths in the facts of history and records
we shall drop him into a "Well of knowledge" with the longest cord
When all else fail
no cause for us to wail
trash him in a compactor for the garbage bin
and let him sort out his trash from all his sins
Originally posted by DeerHunter:Twist and turn is not my style,
Forthright and straightforward,perhaps dull,
Using only facts, truths, reason and logic, i'll mull,
To present it best, and render others' lie null.
If you are too stupid to accept reality within your skull,
And believe in lies, half truths, and cunning wiles,
confusing your rationality and common sense, they lull,
Then suffer yourself, regrets will be too late, your life sour .
Originally posted by dojon:
Well, you are not answering to what i've put up to you and just denying what you feel you are not... Be responsible to what you said... Mr Animal Endanger
Full financial grants are what i had written in my 1st post,
Scholarships and grants, i written in reply, for you to know.
Yet you accuse me of irresponsibility, views diametrically opposed,
Are you nuts, are they not the same, your brains gone to toast?
Our society can only afford to award yearly the best many at most,
How can we afford to fund pri to uni, every year every 40,000 kids or so,
With no resources,only taxes, all contributes, from coast to coast.
You want scholarship, then study hard, for you reap what you sow.
Buildings and laboratories, our taxes built and host
for education,best teachers paid highly and quality compromised no,
giving chances to all,every son/ daughter,like me,of common joes,
to be the best, based on merit, not on stale brains gone cold.
You believe what you will, from those slanderers and liars boasts,
They offer you nothing, only resentment, for truths they mow,
Go find comfort in their low intellect fishy taled roe,
and endanger your own life, you deserve to sink so low.
interesting poem words battle
Do continue... Good job to both Atobe and DeerHunter this round, although I have to admit I have a strong dislike for the latter
Originally posted by DeerHunter:
Full financial grants are what i had written in my 1st post,Scholarships and grants, i written in reply, for you to know.
Yet you accuse me of irresponsibility, views diametrically opposed,
Are you nuts, are they not the same, your brains gone to toast?
Our society can only afford to award yearly the best many at most,
How can we afford to fund pri to uni, every year every 40,000 kids or so,
With no resources,only taxes, all contributes, from coast to coast.
You want scholarship, then study hard, for you reap what you sow.
Buildings and laboratories, our taxes built and host
for education,best teachers paid highly and quality compromised no,
giving chances to all,every son/ daughter,like me,of common joes,
to be the best, based on merit, not on stale brains gone cold.
You believe what you will, from those slanderers and liars boasts,
They offer you nothing, only resentment, for truths they mow,
Go find comfort in their low intellect fishy taled roe,
and endanger your own life, you deserve to sink so low.
Originally posted by dojon:
Ya... haha.. so now you admit it for the sake of admitting. No doubt there are scholarships, but only for the front runners pal. What about those middle group ? Serve them right ? Did garmen even try to help everyone ? They give scholarships to elites with conditions that they will join their very own gang. Well of course, people like you who doesn't need to worry about every penny they spent would feel very well taken care of. Have you ever ponder how to pay for the bus to school ? MR animal hater?
I empathise with your plight.
As a teen, my family was financially tight,
I seek knowledge, and many considered me bright,
Grants not enough, i study by day and sold burgers at night.
Results good, donations/grants offered, i earned my right.
Worked off my bonds, i became a man of my own might.
If it is knowledge and success you want, you must fight.
Study hard, think creatively and plan like a shipwright.
But if your results are mediocre and is a blight,
Perhaps you should go for skill trainning where intelligence is light?
The courses cheaper,helped by CDC grants, and have time for hikes,
when graduate, your salary is also high, you wont say 'yikes!'
Even though our economy has taken flight,
Social spending we need to set up dykes,
To prepare against unknowns, that lurks and hide,
To use more now, it would be insane, we must never loose sight.
Originally posted by DeerHunter:I empathise with your plight.
As a teen, my family was financially tight,
I seek knowledge, and many considered me bright,
Grants not enough, i study by day and sold burgers at night.
Results good, donations/grants offered, i earned my right.
Worked off my bonds, i became a man of my own might.
If it is knowledge and success you want, you must fight.
Study hard, think creatively and plan like a shipwright.
But if your results are mediocre and is a blight,
Perhaps you should go for skill trainning where intelligence is light?
The courses cheaper,helped by CDC grants, and have time for hikes,
when graduate, your salary is also high, you wont say 'yikes!'
Even though our economy has taken flight,
Social spending we need to set up dykes,
To prepare against unknowns, that lurks and hide,
To use more now, it would be insane, we must never loose sight.
A poem marred by a glaring language error.
Originally posted by DeerHunter:
Full financial grants are what i had written in my 1st post,Scholarships and grants, i written in reply, for you to know.
Yet you accuse me of irresponsibility, views diametrically opposed,
Are you nuts, are they not the same, your brains gone to toast?
Our society can only afford to award yearly the best many at most,
How can we afford to fund pri to uni, every year every 40,000 kids or so,
With no resources,only taxes, all contributes, from coast to coast.
You want scholarship, then study hard, for you reap what you sow.
Buildings and laboratories, our taxes built and host
for education,best teachers paid highly and quality compromised no,
giving chances to all,every son/ daughter,like me,of common joes,
to be the best, based on merit, not on stale brains gone cold.
You believe what you will, from those slanderers and liars boasts,
They offer you nothing, only resentment, for truths they mow,
Go find comfort in their low intellect fishy taled roe,
and endanger your own life, you deserve to sink so low.
Only a faithful lackey fed on toasted brain
will believe that scholarship and grants are the same
when everyone who diet on toasted wheat and bran
will know that such comparison is insane
grants are outright gifts
scholarship must be repaid in kind or service
how did a clever dearHunter learn to separate his "beef"
surely his "facts" were knocked in by his Mentor's fist
if he hint that both are acts of his Mentor's generosity
it confirms the Mentor's vanity to be generous with Citizen's money
enough is seen in the "generous foreign contributions" with national bounty
accumulated from citizens working like bees making honey
buildings are built on land priced by the Ministry
that result in property prices inflaming all costs to go only up
leaving citizens to cope with the elitist created misery
consoled by generous dolelful propaganda and miserly dole served in a cup
is there any good from R&D laboratories
when intelligent staff need time to train
in good time for trends to turn these into conservatories
compliments must go to a 1% inspired juvenile brain
With the amount of citizen's money thrown overseas
it is vile to claim precious little is left for our 40,000 students
what can possibly be the reason to treat citizens like peas
from over 40 years since becoming independent
only one who has been fed by the Elites with the left over roe
will know the fishy taste of an elitist dish no longer cold
purposeful vanity prevents a 'dearHunter' from admitting the row
that silently battle in his uninspired mind till he grow old
all that he can do is to expend in 99% perspiration
to hide in his only confident defense with expert denials
can he hope to confuse citizens with his pathetic 1% inspiration
when citizens are aware of the true experiences in daily trials
we should wish the 'dearHunter' well
hoping that he can find the "cleaner for a wife"
keeping him busy with 99% perspiration in constant swell
it will be better for all when he is immersed in his uninspired life
Originally posted by DeerHunter:I empathise with your plight.
As a teen, my family was financially tight,
I seek knowledge, and many considered me bright,
Grants not enough, i study by day and sold burgers at night.
Results good, donations/grants offered, i earned my right.
Worked off my bonds, i became a man of my own might.
If it is knowledge and success you want, you must fight.
Study hard, think creatively and plan like a shipwright.
But if your results are mediocre and is a blight,
Perhaps you should go for skill trainning where intelligence is light?
The courses cheaper,helped by CDC grants, and have time for hikes,
when graduate, your salary is also high, you wont say 'yikes!'
Even though our economy has taken flight,
Social spending we need to set up dykes,
To prepare against unknowns, that lurks and hide,
To use more now, it would be insane, we must never loose sight.
Only a pathetic dearHunter will attempt to decieve
hoping to get some sympathty from his sob story
anyone can separate the truth without a seive
he will make better impact if he jumps from a tall storey
Only a 1% inspired mind will accept CDC grants with bondage
and hope for the ordinary folks to empathise in a blighted him
expecting the good folks to believe his cess pool for a pond
created from the perspiration overflowing from his brim
Is there any use of a man presuming vainly to be his own
when his 99% perspired might cannot find even a "cleaner for a wife"
as all the 99% inspired women will not allow him to later disown
when the woman dscover that she is needed to perspire in a 'cleaner's life'
Can the 1% inspired mind have the creative vision of a shipwright
with the 99% perspiration uselessly expired "to fight for knowledge and success"
only a dearHunter's inspiration will insist on taking the "hard left from the smart right"
this must surely worry the smart Mentor with uninspired lackey left to guard the mess
the impotence of an uninspired dearHunter knows no shame
believing in a dreamed economy taken off in a fantasy flight
when living conditions remains worsen and rising prices never the same
how can the dearHunter know when smoking elitist opium out of sight
With false claims of danger that lurks and hide
social spending is denied while foreign financial escapades is vigorously made
the citizens surely know the national saving has flowed to which side of the divide
as the political grave is prepared with a mechanised shovel for a spade
The 'dearHunter' will soon have to decide
if he will hurt an innocent deer or the people whom he pretend to hold dear
time will come when he has to take a side
or the people will trash him for his juvenile ideas with his uninspired gear.
Atobe, always filled with hatred and jealousy,
Tenacious, as a rabid dog in frenzy,
Overtly foolish, probably CSJ taught silly,
Boringly repetative, and low in originality,
Eagerly, she repeats over and over again, villaneously.
Anyone would find her posts(even re-composed) tiresomely draggy,
Long winded, venom filled thrash, really,
Instead of solutions to help face heartwrenching realities.
Always end up getting thrashed by others and espacialy by me,
Return to the bin, and slither in, you snake Atobe.
(check the first letter in each line for a simple 'Da Vinci' code in this poem)
Should we be surprise at another useless antic from the 'dearHunter' ?
First he think he is some genius by repeating Thomas Edison's lines that - he depends only on 1% inspiration, and 99% perspiration - which at the end still got the 'deerHunter' no where.
Thomas Edison got a light bulb that lighted the world, for the 99% perspiration from the dearHunter the world simply got blighted.
Do you think you are a 'da Vinci' simply popping some juvenile code with the letters at the start of each kindergarten sentence ?
As usual, you bastardise the original intelligent works from others in your own unique plagiarising ways.
If only you had more then your 1% inspiration, you could have done the real stuff in the true 'Da Vinci' way :
Deluded, tired, defeated
He has need to be feted
What sulkers face will he hold
Hear Him scream when truth is told
Imitate is his special voodoo art
As a deluded plagiarist he is smart
All he muses is to bastardized others works
Assail ordinary senses with his juvenile words
Finding fault with all whom he disagree
Foul mouthing is his accomplished degree
Dropping bombshells is refined as his skill
A slow mind suits him for everyone’s thrill
Trust His views will court disaster
When the honesty in him easily shatter
Stinky cream the dearHunter will apply
When his cover is blown in the craft he ply
Crude beast is his dream cast
Wanna be someone great in idiot’s clasp
Can he even think he still can make his bit
As the better name Da Vinci whom he try to beat