Feelings Within
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Really man...I held on the my feelings enough..I can't take it anymore..
Nothing good wants me.Mistakes,Misfortune,Misunderstandings,
Misconceptions wants me bad.
I wrote a small peom to describe how I feel.
Succumbed myself to hatred
Lust of death I behold
Vengeance at my threshold
Not sure of what I hold
Why the torment? Why the pain? I had enough!
Curse this wretched world! Curse this peace!
I got nothing for me to love
Except the world for me to HATE
I feel much better now. -
u will never be happy if there's only hatred in your heart. let it go, let it pass..
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i think the last line shud be EXcept rather than accept bah
guess u've proved ur point abt ur life is full of mistakes
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Why all that?Originally posted by InSidiousGG:Really man...I held on the my feelings enough..I can't take it anymore..
Nothing good wants me.Mistakes,Misfortune,Misunderstandings,
Misconceptions wants me bad.
I wrote a small peom to describe how I feel.
Succumbed myself to hatred
Lust of death I behold
Vengenace at my threshold
Not sure of what I hold
Why the torment? Why the pain? I had enough!
Curse this wretched world! Curse this peace!
I got nothing for me to love
Except the world for me to HATE
I feel much better now.
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I like you...Originally posted by InSidiousGG:Really man...I held on the my feelings enough..I can't take it anymore..
Nothing good wants me.Mistakes,Misfortune,Misunderstandings,
Misconceptions wants me bad.
I wrote a small peom to describe how I feel.
Succumbed myself to hatred
Lust of death I behold
Vengenace at my threshold
Not sure of what I hold
Why the torment? Why the pain? I had enough!
Curse this wretched world! Curse this peace!
I got nothing for me to love
Except the world for me to HATE
I feel much better now.
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Sth is clearly bothering u.. try to let it go.. holding onto sth u hate or despise is very tiring n painful.. once u have found the way to let it go.. u realised tt u feel free.. n tt how silly u were to hold onto ur troubles.. learn to accept things rather den brood over things.. den u'll find life is alot easier to manage..
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heys what's the cause for your frustration??? when i feel like that... i go to some secluded spot and scream and scream and scream... or i run and run until i've got no more anger. (cuz i'm too tired)... then take a break or sleep and things will seem better....
at times like this it's not that easy to be a calm and think clearly.... but do your best... and take care -
Originally posted by sleepycat:I like you...
Haha... Erm thanks guys..I feel much much better now..I think I am back to normal again!!! Yay!
By the way.... I created another poem-this one is for fun only-...I love poems!!
Can feedback on it? Gd,bad watever..
Rage. It Started off slowly
Rage. It Started off lighty
But this Rage I am bearing is
Consuming all my might (Like I care)
I can't stand this pain
I am so tired of being used/laughed at
All I want is freedom
Freedom from this abuse
Can't you guys see the pain inside me?
All the hurt I feel inside is ripping me apart.
Don't even think of comforting or helping me
Because I know you guys will never will. -
hmm.. i like the first poem.. send it to www.poetry.com and have it copyrighted =D..
Why do you have such feelings inside you? do u have no one to confide in? where is your solace? your pillar of strength?
remember that you feel sad/angry/happy because you let yourself feel that way. If someone steals your wallet, you can choose to feel angry, unhappy, or feel casual and say, hmm, i should have been more careful, and its time to get a new wallet etc etc. I believe whats most important to you, would be what you want to protect from others. -
Send your poems here? http://www.sgforums.com/?action=forum_display&forum_id=1503
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Thank you. Maybe I got too stressed up,I have such feelings since last year Nov 2004.. Sorry..I can't tell..Just something bad happened.
So everytime I feel this way..I usually sit down and write it down like the first one.
Right now,My Girlfriend is the pillar of strength. Thank you Jermaine! Love ya!
Nissan Skyline GT-R34 is my dream car which drives me working/studying hard.
Just wanna settle down when I am really really capable of living a life in Singapore[kinda hard but I'll try],and of course love my future wife.
I am 19 and I'm afraid of my future,hope everything goes fine. And Bless you guys too,bright future ahead. -
Originally posted by InSidiousGG:
Vengence?
Succumbed myself to hatred
Lust of death I behold
Vengenace at my threshold
Not sure of what I hold
Why the torment? Why the pain? I had enough!
Curse this wretched world! Curse this peace!
I got nothing for me to love
Except the world for me to HATE
and Place is it?
why curse peace? ppl peaceful peaceful u also wanna curse....
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Haha...hey... really emotionally affected that time..so I just write.. But no hard feelings.Originally posted by Axelheat755:Vengence?
and Place is it?
why curse peace? ppl peaceful peaceful u also wanna curse.... -
Double post. Sorry.