What would your reaction be?
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If you were a guy, what would your reaction be if you received this poem from your gf of almost a year?
- overly mushy?
- sweet?
- gagging?
Gals, hear from you too...
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The more I see you.
The more I touch you.
The more I hear your voice,
The more I fall...in love with you.
And the more I think of it, the more uncanny it seems,
How, for each encounter with you,
You've made each one a greater experience than the one before.
When you're not around me,
Thoughts of you appear constantly on my mind &,
I find myself wishing you were there.
When you're with me,
The stars seem brighter,
The air seems fresher &
I find myself walking with lighter steps,
Wishing the day would never end.
And the more I think of it, the more uncanny it seems,
How, in such a wonderful way,
You've shown me that life's even more beautiful with you around.
Every call you make,
Sends a smile to my face.
Every smile you make,
Sends a tingle through my spine.
Every hug you give,
Just simply makes me want you more.
And the more I think of it, the more uncanny it seems,
How, in such a short span of time,
You've actually stolen my heart and made it yours.
Thank you for all those wonderful moments.
Thank you for your love, tolerance and care.
Thank you for allowing me into your life. -
Sweet.....
Will really sayang that girl....lucky guy....
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y do u ned to ask for our opinions?
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I think its really sweet....do treasure her..
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sent to wrong person. dun think so much.Originally posted by sardonica:If you were a guy, what would your reaction be if you received this poem from your gf of almost a year?
- overly mushy?
- sweet?
- gagging?
Gals, hear from you too...
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The more I see you.
The more I touch you.
The more I hear your voice,
The more I fall...in love with you.
And the more I think of it, the more uncanny it seems,
How, for each encounter with you,
You've made each one a greater experience than the one before.
When you're not around me,
Thoughts of you appear constantly on my mind &,
I find myself wishing you were there.
When you're with me,
The stars seem brighter,
The air seems fresher &
I find myself walking with lighter steps,
Wishing the day would never end.
And the more I think of it, the more uncanny it seems,
How, in such a wonderful way,
You've shown me that life's even more beautiful with you around.
Every call you make,
Sends a smile to my face.
Every smile you make,
Sends a tingle through my spine.
Every hug you give,
Just simply makes me want you more.
And the more I think of it, the more uncanny it seems,
How, in such a short span of time,
You've actually stolen my heart and made it yours.
Thank you for all those wonderful moments.
Thank you for your love, tolerance and care.
Thank you for allowing me into your life. -
i agree!!Originally posted by aCid_rAIn:sent to wrong person. dun think so much. -
Well, i think it is sweet of her to send the poem to you. But the poem looks very cliche and was probably copied from somewhere else, in which case it stinks of a lack of originality and sincerity.
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you so bad...Originally posted by aCid_rAIn:sent to wrong person. dun think so much. -
will not think too much
Do not mean to offend but I will just say what I feel.
Yes I agree this is a nice poem but
is just a poem that is written in the honeymoon phase of any relationship.
just wait till this phase is over then we shall see the so call real "feelings".
Just enjoy this phase it may end soon then you think. -
Hmm... Personally, I don't quite agree that it must be just a 'honeymoon period' poem...?Originally posted by drx:will not think too much
Do not mean to offend but I will just say what I feel.
Yes I agree this is a nice poem but
is just a poem that is written in the honeymoon phase of any relationship.
just wait till this phase is over then we shall see the so call real "feelings".
Just enjoy this phase it may end soon then you think. -
x 2Originally posted by Devil1976:Hmm... Personally, I don't quite agree that it must be just a 'honeymoon period' poem...?
why must people think that only the honeymoon period can couples be sweet to each other.
this kinda definition will only hurt the relationship in the longterm -
hey.. i happen to see this poem.... Somewhere on the net before...
Anyway it doesnt matter. Treasure what you guys have now... You do not know what it will be tomorrow....
Trust me.. sweetness is temporary.... pain and agnoy is eternal.....
Love is nothing when it ends...
Sorry for saying such things. Please treasure it....
I will be ending my life tonight.... Good luck to you.
Please read from my thread if you guys wanna help. I had enough of it!
http://30th.sgforums.com/?action=thread_display&thread_id=129128 -
Love takes no definite shape and volume...Originally posted by bratpig:x 2
why must people think that only the honeymoon period can couples be sweet to each other.
this kinda definition will only hurt the relationship in the longterm -
???!!!Originally posted by mal_colm1979:I will be ending my life tonight.... Good luck to you.
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Uhh.
i think it is ok to be cliched
cos.. some guys totally have no sense of poetry
and it is better to give him something
SIMPLE and sweet
without some deep, multi-layered metaphors
and chim chim words
and it will be very sian
if the guy you give u to
tell you "ehh very sweet but what is uncanny ha?"
or..
"err.. thanks but what it means ha?"
or
"HA?! POEM?! I hate literature when I was in school one!!!"
-morose- -
One thing for sure is that it wasn't copied from somewhere else and is totally original from the heart.Originally posted by cornyfish2000:Well, i think it is sweet of her to send the poem to you. But the poem looks very cliche and was probably copied from somewhere else, in which case it stinks of a lack of originality and sincerity. -
U muz be one lucky guy...Originally posted by sardonica:If you were a guy, what would your reaction be if you received this poem from your gf of almost a year?
- overly mushy?
- sweet?
- gagging?
Gals, hear from you too...
===============================
The more I see you.
The more I touch you.
The more I hear your voice,
The more I fall...in love with you.
And the more I think of it, the more uncanny it seems,
How, for each encounter with you,
You've made each one a greater experience than the one before.
When you're not around me,
Thoughts of you appear constantly on my mind &,
I find myself wishing you were there.
When you're with me,
The stars seem brighter,
The air seems fresher &
I find myself walking with lighter steps,
Wishing the day would never end.
And the more I think of it, the more uncanny it seems,
How, in such a wonderful way,
You've shown me that life's even more beautiful with you around.
Every call you make,
Sends a smile to my face.
Every smile you make,
Sends a tingle through my spine.
Every hug you give,
Just simply makes me want you more.
And the more I think of it, the more uncanny it seems,
How, in such a short span of time,
You've actually stolen my heart and made it yours.
Thank you for all those wonderful moments.
Thank you for your love, tolerance and care.
Thank you for allowing me into your life.
Write one even mushy to her...makes sure its from Ur heart...lolx...
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wow
try doin a powerpoint for her?
in the same manner...
i tink she`ll love u even more
it`s hard to get gals who treasure u these days....
don bother if it`s really original
at least she makes an effort to find make one for you shows that u are the one she really treasures...
Bless and cherishes,
BaByBoY -
err...haa...I sound like ta-por meh?
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ohhhh..
u wan to give to ur da por is it???
haha
i bet he`ll be bery happy -
nice poem haha.. tat guy wil sure b v gan dong one...