Just a poem i feel like sharing..
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Two nights late, three days gone;
Seen you twice, missed you thrice.
.. I dreamt of you tonight, Or, did I?
.. I fear for your loss of love, Or, will I?
Thoughts filled me, did it flood yours?
Anguish torment me, did it even hurt you?
Subtle whispering sounds of nature hinting to me,
I should not give you up? Or.. Maybe i should.
.. Think of me will you? Don't sigh please.
.. Smile at me will you? DonÂ’t cry nor whine.
Test me? Try me.. Yell, scream, shout.
Just don't leave me.. Will you?
5 hopes, 5 chances, all spent.
A world that brings nothing but suffering, oh how surprising.
.. Well, understand me.
.. Will you... or not?
Answer me, when nature show you the signs, when mother earth send doves to you, when the sky turns a shallow crimson red, and when i finally fade away from existence.
Thank you anyway, whatever you have done, i guess, itÂ’s done. -
you got talents.Originally posted by Ledikusa:Two nights late, three days gone;
Seen you twice, missed you thrice.
.. I dreamt of you tonight, Or, did I?
.. I fear for your loss of love, Or, will I?
Thoughts filled me, did it flood yours?
Anguish torment me, did it even hurt you?
Subtle whispering sounds of nature hinting to me,
I should not give you up? Or.. Maybe i should.
.. Think of me will you? Don't sigh please.
.. Smile at me will you? DonÂ’t cry nor whine.
Test me? Try me.. Yell, scream, shout.
Just don't leave me.. Will you?
5 hopes, 5 chances, all spent.
A world that brings nothing but suffering, oh how surprising.
.. Well, understand me.
.. Will you... or not?
Answer me, when nature show you the signs, when mother earth send doves to you, when the sky turns a shallow crimson red, and when i finally fade away from existence.
Thank you anyway, whatever you have done, i guess, itÂ’s done. -
why is this in aunt agony
if u have a problem don't be shy to share
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cant you read his poem.... he is sad...Originally posted by eroticism:why is this in aunt agony
if u have a problem don't be shy to share
heartbroken maybe... -
I guess words cannot express the feelings i have bottled in side of me.. If you can understand my ... Sentences of bits and pieces of my confused thoughts, perhaps you could come out with a poem or rhyme to resolve my resignation.
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Hmm i guess time is the best healer of all wounds
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sounds profound... hope you are ok ya? think you are an arts student?Originally posted by Ledikusa:Two nights late, three days gone;
Seen you twice, missed you thrice.
.. I dreamt of you tonight, Or, did I?
.. I fear for your loss of love, Or, will I?
Thoughts filled me, did it flood yours?
Anguish torment me, did it even hurt you?
Subtle whispering sounds of nature hinting to me,
I should not give you up? Or.. Maybe i should.
.. Think of me will you? Don't sigh please.
.. Smile at me will you? DonÂ’t cry nor whine.
Test me? Try me.. Yell, scream, shout.
Just don't leave me.. Will you?
5 hopes, 5 chances, all spent.
A world that brings nothing but suffering, oh how surprising.
.. Well, understand me.
.. Will you... or not?
Answer me, when nature show you the signs, when mother earth send doves to you, when the sky turns a shallow crimson red, and when i finally fade away from existence.
Thank you anyway, whatever you have done, i guess, itÂ’s done. -
Wow, nicely written, you surely rock! Can be made into a song sia.Originally posted by Ledikusa:Two nights late, three days gone;
Seen you twice, missed you thrice.
.. I dreamt of you tonight, Or, did I?
.. I fear for your loss of love, Or, will I?
Thoughts filled me, did it flood yours?
Anguish torment me, did it even hurt you?
Subtle whispering sounds of nature hinting to me,
I should not give you up? Or.. Maybe i should.
.. Think of me will you? Don't sigh please.
.. Smile at me will you? DonÂ’t cry nor whine.
Test me? Try me.. Yell, scream, shout.
Just don't leave me.. Will you?
5 hopes, 5 chances, all spent.
A world that brings nothing but suffering, oh how surprising.
.. Well, understand me.
.. Will you... or not?
Answer me, when nature show you the signs, when mother earth send doves to you, when the sky turns a shallow crimson red, and when i finally fade away from existence.
Thank you anyway, whatever you have done, i guess, itÂ’s done. -
sad...
sounds like me sia.. -
im a science student..
Anywayz.. I guess time could mend the tangible scar i have.. But the inner hurt will always be there.. Oh well, the thing about humans that separates us from the beasts, we can choose our life paths and not stick to one.. I hope i will get out of this depression period soon.. For all the guys who feel like me.. This poem is dedicated to you guys.. Cheer up, even if the world is against you. -
it isnt profound btw.
but commendable attempt
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haha true. cheers. nothing is too much to get over with. like people say, let time do the healing bah.
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For those who are feeling heartbreaking. A song dedicate to you..
Hope it helps..
Cake - I Will Survive
Once i was afraid i was pertrified
Kept thinking i could never live without you by my side
But then i spent so many nights just thinking how you did me wrong
And i grew strong and i learned how to get along
And so you are back from outer space
I just walked in to find you here with that bad look upon your face
I should have changed that fcuking lock i could have made you leave your key
If i'd known for just one second you'd be back to bother me
Oh now go, walk out the door
Just turn around now cuz your not welcome anymore
Weren't you the one who tried to break me with good-bye
You think i'd crumble you think i'd lay down and die
Oh no not i,i will survive
Oh as long as i know how to love i know i'll be alive
I've got all my life to live and i've got all my love to give
I'll survive i will survive hey hey!
It took all the strength i had not to fall apart
Kept trying hard to mend the pieces of my broken heart
And i spent o-so many nights just feeling sorry for myself
I used to cry but now i hold my head up high
And you see me with somebody new
I'm not that stupid little person still in love with you
And so you felt like dropping in and just expect me to be free
Well now i'm saving all my loving for someone who's loving me
Go on now go walk out the door
Just turn around now you're not welcome anymore
Weren't you the one who tried to break me with goodbye's,
You think i'd crumble you think i'd lay down and die
O-no not i, i will survive
as long as i know how to love i know i'm still alive
I've got all my life to live and i've got all my love to give
I 'll survive i will survive
Chorus
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dont think the world is ever against us... its just the way we choose to thinkOriginally posted by Ledikusa:im a science student..
Anywayz.. I guess time could mend the tangible scar i have.. But the inner hurt will always be there.. Oh well, the thing about humans that separates us from the beasts, we can choose our life paths and not stick to one.. I hope i will get out of this depression period soon.. For all the guys who feel like me.. This poem is dedicated to you guys.. Cheer up, even if the world is against you. -
True.. everyone is entitled to his or her own opinion..
Thats why life is always interesting.. =)
Each side proving that their opinions are the "correct" one.. lol.. -
for those who are heartbroken or sad because of relationship problems.. u shud go listen to a meaningful and heartbreaking song by Jay Chou titled 'Gui Ji'