Love Story: Bus Ride
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Watever it is, it's a very nice story
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wat u meant was probably:Originally posted by Xiao Long Nu:TRUE l;ove nv runs smoothly
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True love has no ending
HOHOhOHo
The course of true love never did run smooth.
William Shakespeare in A Midsummer Night's Dream. -
u frm st joseph izitOriginally posted by Yunhaier:My ex-school got 171 last time, 190 also can take, but must walk to SCGS there. -
why why end here!! I TAKE A NIGHT OFF RUSH BACK HOME TO READ it and it havent complete! SOB@@ MORE stories!! i want more stories!!!.. tell me by thursday when i come back home HAHAHAAHA ... no lah show abit of support lah
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Me still waiting ......
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MORE MORE MORE
kin or i go rewatch winter sonata liaoz 
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die? no lah, where got so jialat one..Originally posted by shirurinu:Based on my speculaTIONS... AND my korean drama expertise... she will either die.. or going back to japan.. or leaving yunhaier... *sobsob*... y So korean style la....
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maybe we could go traditional chinese & say she's alreadi engaged to a triad boss?
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‘I… have to go back Japan…’
Like a prick on bubbles, an internal implosion occurred within me. DonÂ’t tell me all the fantasy I am having is coming to an end? If this was a dream, I pray that I will never wake up from it.
‘I understand… your parents are over there and they worried for you…’
Even though I am fighting inside, I had to put on a brave front. Well, she isnÂ’t my girlfriend or something, I canÂ’t demand her not to leave. Girls of her age needs their parents to be with them more than friends.
‘Will you come and visit me if I ask you to?…’
‘Yes of course! I will!… Can we still contact through IRC?’
I was hoping for a small miracle, its nothing much, but at least I could still talk to her online.
‘I don’t think I have computer or internet connection at my house…’
The atmosphere is getting intense and to make matter worst, the I could feel a drop of water falling on my skin.
‘Then… its ok… we could chat on the phone whenever we can and I think we better leave now, it’s going to rain.’
We both got up and walked hastily towards the road in trying to catch a cab, but halfway through, the merciless weather started pouring heavily. Even though I just had a shock from what she had just told me, in the present moment, in my mind, all I thought of is to shield her from the chilling rain as I didnÂ’t want her to fall sick. My hands formed a tiny, little barrier and covers her head. It is damn dumb and I donÂ’t understand why am I doing such acts - it wonÂ’t block the rain from drenching her.
Then, I saw a coming taxi driving and I flagged it.
‘You are so silly Cloud…’
The next thing I knew, we were in the cab pretty drenched. I told the uncle to reduce the air-con to the lowest and put my arms around her shoulder, rubbing her arms to gain some heat. Gradually, for some reasons, she was in my embrace and I was stroking her soaked hair. Her eyes were kept closed and my fingers travelled to her cheeks. Pinching lightly to fulfil my long awaited-desire, she opened her eyes, like an awaken baby in the morning. My index finger teased her dimples a little as she felt tickled and ruffled her head in between my arms and chest.
All good things must come to an end - the cab reached her place and lucky thing, there was shelter to her house. I told the uncle to wait for a while and got out of the cab with her.
‘When are you leaving then…?’
‘Tomorrow…’
Tomorrow? Did I just hear wrongly? What’s the rush? Sometimes, reality is extremely cruel – heaven makes sport of men.
‘I am suppose to tell you earlier, but I can’t bear to…’
She is right. If she told me earlier, my feelings would be just like dying patients with the last stage of cancer – waiting for THAT day. It’s terrible!
‘Would you see me off?…’
In my heart, there is this robust urge of seeing her every second, but if I were to see her off, the scene would be unimaginable. My mind and soul wonÂ’t be able to endure the parting scene.
‘I think, we should just keep this the last meeting then…’
I actually managed to smile and kept this mask of mine, this brave front indestructible. It remains on my face emotionlessly and dead.
‘Well… perhaps it's better if we keep it this way. By the count of three, we both just walk off to our destination and never look back ok?
She nodded and I could see her tears closed to spilling out.
‘3…2…1…’
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haiz..so my guess was rite...so sad...so whens ur next episode coming out?
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so sadddddddddddddddd *sobbbbbb*
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errrrrrr kinda short leh......
when's the next update ar?
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she's going back .. yunhaier, so do you both still contact each other till now? -
*wipes a single tear from my eye*
I wana start a poll to request for a happy ending!!!!! Please!!!
1) skeujin
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but the story is going the way it is.. you can change it.
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Originally posted by kohanson:but the story is going the way it is.. you can change it.
Yesh. hahaa. -
hopefull suggestion for ending.... they make their seperate ways never seeing each other or keeping in contact for a year then on day when cloud goes overseas to further his studies... he sees her there too!!! and they lived haooily ever after.... the end....
geez there should be somewhere we could see what happens in the next installment like 8days mag..... the suspense is killing me... -
I will explain everything once the last esp is outOriginally posted by kohanson: she's going back .. yunhaier, so do you both still contact each other till now? -
sad story..... waiting for your next post
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i believe u gt ur reasons in posting tis storyOriginally posted by Yunhaier:I will explain everything once the last esp is out -
post ur last episode quick..everybody waiting to see it..
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machiam like watch video tape...watch first tape, and then look at last tape before going through the rest...Originally posted by Initial`D:post ur last episode quick..everybody waiting to see it..
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SEE SEE I MAKE MY WAY BACK JUST TO READ YOUR STORY!!!
U STILL KEEP ME IN SUSPENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DONT CARE GIVE U TILL SAT!@!! GOT TO BOOK IN LIAO SIAN!!!!! -
lolz..sort of lor..now waiting for yunhaier to post the final episode..Originally posted by sgboy2004:machiam like watch video tape...watch first tape, and then look at last tape before going through the rest...