by harryryan
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a sort of poem that i wrote when i sort of "broke up"w a gal
I have cried,i have bleed
till my eyes are swollen thru n my heart can bleed no more
for one i hold so dear,i can't take it anymore
she treats me like dirt n dust
she throws me to the dogs
my heart is now aching but it will soon ache no more
I'm no doctor or studying iin the united states
my dad is broke as hell and i gotta work
to earn my place.
thinking back,i never had a regret
but it makes me so darn sad
everything i do,i do for you
but all i get is one tight slap.
i stood by your side when you are down
althought i gave crappy advice
i certainly can't paint that well
and i ain't a computer whiz
all i have to say is that i have tried.
well,tears once again flood my eyes
i have never cried for anyone before
salted water trickling down my cheeks
and as it did,it told me no more,no more
i deserved much better than this
my heart ain't no inn
you don't come n go as you please
i think i real have had enuff
you win.....you win..... -
*Pat* *Pat*
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dono y i jus hate guys who write poems
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u hate me ah ma??Originally posted by Xiao Long Nu:dono y i jus hate guys who write poems
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sissy huh?but it's better to say it out than bottle it up....bery unhealthyOriginally posted by Xiao Long Nu:dono y i jus hate guys who write poems
it was intended to be just writing about how i feel but it ended up rhyming so.... -
bcos the poems dn realy reflect the person
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ah mah... maybe because your era over liao?Originally posted by Xiao Long Nu:dono y i jus hate guys who write poems
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is it but this is break up poem...describing how hurt i feel...no exaggeration one lei.Originally posted by Xiao Long Nu:bcos the poems dn realy reflect the person -
I love to write POEMS too...? But I no longer write love poems anymore... At least not that I know of....? <Originally posted by Xiao Long Nu:dono y i jus hate guys who write poems
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*pat pat ah ma*Originally posted by Xiao Long Nu:bcos the poems dn realy reflect the person
"don't cry"
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Eh, the poem is nice.... but language used in it isnt suitable for the word 'poem'
& one wun cry so hard when 'sort of' break up with a ger/boy....