shortstory-it began with one night
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okie guys, i think the topic must have mislead you. but i wan to say one mre time....my story not ra....i am not stupid enough to put an ra story in aunt agony. So i decided to post out the whole of my story out... you all want to say what you all say lah....
Dave quietly opened the house door, hoping not to make his return known. He had been out the whole night, partying at the downtownÂ’s pub till late. Unlike his usual clubbing nights, that night is one that he never had expected.
He was sitting on a red couch, enjoying his gin tonic when a lady approached him for a chat. Her name is Eva, aged 24, an Australian. Her company had sent her to Singapore to meet with some Singaporean customers.
‘So, how do you find Singapore?’ Dave asked, taking another sip from his drink.
‘Oh, Singapore is great! The food, the people, the surroundings are fantastic! Oh, and the retail shops as well.’ Eva added, while revealing a wicked grin.
‘Wow, I am really happy to hear that from you, but how do you find the Singaporean guys?’ Dave mumbled, the effects of the drinks growing in him.
‘Well, actually, you are the first guy I have really chat with, I have been really busy with my work the last 3 days and today is the first day I get to hit the pubs!’ Eva replied happily…
The pair continued to chat, but the effects of the drinks grow in them as time progressed. Both felt the chemistry between them growing and half an hour later, they were making out at the nearby hotelÂ…
Taking off his shoes slowly and carefully, Dave think back on what he has done 4 hours ago. He suddenly felt guilt and fear coming to him like a big gust of wind. He knew it is the drinks that caused him to do the things he never should have done, but it was all too late. ‘How am I going to face Vinny?’ he muttered softly.
‘Finally, you come back to me.’ Dave jumped at the voice, slowly turning his head to Vinny.
‘Well, I went out for a drink, got drunk and fell asleep on the streets. When I woke up, I quickly rush back home,’ Dave replied, faking a smile. ‘Next time I will never gotten myself that drunk again, I promise!’
VinnyÂ’s face is unreadable. She is leaning against a wall, looking at Dave.
‘Piew, I need a bath!’ Dave said, feeling the increasingly uneasiness in the house. ‘Well, time to wash my stinking body before the flies get into this house!’ Dave chirped, and walked silently towards the bathroom…
‘So, do you have fun playing with that Australian girl named, well, let me guess, Eva?’ Dave stopped immediately and turned surprisingly to Vinny.
‘wwwhh…what! Did you spy on me just now? How could you do that!’ Dave exploded, feeling nothing but anger in his mind.
‘Oh no my darling,’ Vinny smiled, ‘I did not even leave this house nor had I followed you to the hotel.’
‘Dave, there is a secret that I have kept to myself since the day I met you. But now that the time has come, I shall tell it to you, my love.’ Vinny spoke in a mysterious tone, her face filled with a mixed of anger and sadness.
This is not the Vinny I knew anymore. Who is she? How come she knew what I did? Dave wondered, puzzled by the sudden change of situation.
All of the sudden, a blue light surrounds the room. Dave felt fear has come back for him, he knew something is terribly wrong.
‘My name is Vinny La Quez. Ever since I was borne, I have special powers. I can predict the future, see the past. I can cure a sick person, but I can also kill one. Conclusion? I am a witch.’ Vinny spoke, her voice filled the whole room.
‘ I have many lovers before you; all of them did not give me the love that I want. They broke my heart by telling lies to me!’ Vinny exploded, with anger in her eyes.
‘ And then you came along. You give me the love I have always wanted, and you have been truthful to me for the past 5 years. Why? Why do you lied to me!’ Uncontrollable rage filled the room.
Dave was speechless. He is now overwhelmed with fear, unprepared of what will happen later.
‘Do you want to know what have happened to all my past lovers?’ Vinny replied sweetly.
‘Vinny, no. Vinny, I am so sorry. This is the one and only lie I have made to you. I know I am in the wrong now, I am sorry Vinny, my love, my sweet heart.’ Dave yelled fearfully, walking slowly towards Vinny.
Vinny laughed loudly, shaking her head. She looked at Dave sadly and answered ‘Too late Dave, Too late.’ ‘ What you have done cannot be undone. Goodbye my love.’
‘Deletrius aperentious!’ She yelled, sending a wave of light towards Dave.
‘Noooooooo’….
Dave opened his eyes slowly, relieved that nothing has happened to him. He looked around quickly for Vinny, and saw a piece of paper on the spot where Vinny stood.
My dearest Dave,
To kill you is the hardest thing I will ever do. I thought that it would be the same, killing you like the past lovers I have. But no, when I cast the spell, all the memories I have with you have flowed into my mind. I knew I couldnÂ’t kill you, so I cast a spell on you. After the clock strikes twelve, you will never remember this girl called Vinny. All memories of her will be erased.
You will be the last love I will ever have. Goodbye my darling.
Vinny La Quez
Dave looked up the clock, it is 11.30 am. The paper on Dave hands crumbled into a lump of dust. Dave felt a pain in his heart. He knew Vinny is the one he loved and always loved. Erasing all memories of her is not what he wanted. He sat down on the ground, wishing he were killed than alive. If he had not been to the pub, this would not have happenedÂ… -
a nice story
but then i feel that everyone deserves a second chance -
actually it really pops out of my mind so i just write it out.....but dunno y people keep thinking it is ra....me abit sad...somemore my previous topic kena closed....sighss...
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yup i also believe that everyone deserves a 2nd chance. people can only learn from mistakes. but this thing of sleeping around with another person i m sure is intolerable. imagine if ur wife committed this mistake. will u still forgive her? going to pubs to drink etc has their disadvantages like this. if u r happy in life and happy with ur loved one.. y go to pub to find that extra so called happiness?
as for me, i made a mistake with my loved one also. i broke the promise that i made to her and she has since yet to forgive me. it is not as if i did something very big wrong like sleeping around but tt i went out at nite to meet her very own fren who was crying. i heard her out when she had no one to cry to and now my own gal is so angry and refuses to forgive me. i feel so helpless. things were goin out VERY fine between us all the while until this happened. i regret going down to console that gal classmate of ours. now it has strained my relationship with my own lovable gf. i feel so guilty.
btw... dun think that my gal is unreasonable or wat. just tt this classmate who happened to be her best fren busted her before. they then fell out. but my gal did eventually reconcile with that classmate but things were not as close between them as before. so any way i can seek redressal for this mistake??? i have asked her but she says nothign can be done. it is not as if i committed a crime. please..anyone can tell me what to do? -
well....have u ask her for forgiveness? Isit because you din tell her about it and she found out thats y she angry with u??
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i did sms her before goin down to meet my classmate. but she angry coz i broke my promise of not goin out at nite. she also angry that i met this classmate of mine coz she is a slut who sleeps around. i can understand my gal's feelings... just that i am the typ ewho will always go down to help my frenz. i did ask for her forgiveness but she just says that things can never be the same again. i tell her that its not a big crime wat. i felt i did something right (besides goin out at nite) and that i m being punished terribly for being helpful. stressed man!!Originally posted by silentnitz:well....have u ask her for forgiveness? Isit because you din tell her about it and she found out thats y she angry with u?? -
Hmm....i think maybe your gf is insecure....she has been hurted by that fren so she is scared that it will occur second time....i think give her some time to cool off and think rationally....sometimes, girls over react on such issues.....
but maybe ur gf tot u go meet that fren mite do something wif her...thats y she so scared and angry when u go mit her fren... -
well.. thats all i can do now.. give her some time. i have been quarrelling the past 3 days over this gal. once coz i go to meet her. today that bitch gal actually tried jokin gwith my gal saying that she might fail her project to which my gal took offense and vented out her anger on me. i m so pissed that each time her bad temper comes, she scolds me in front of our classmates. i have told her of my feeling and she told me not to bother her next time she is angry. but ask u guys, if ur gal is angry or wat u will surely go n console her or wat rite? for m eeven though she humiliate me, i really dun mind doing it again even if she gets angry again. but i have my own limits also so dun think i m a piece of shit who is a pushover. i m not a wimpOriginally posted by silentnitz:Hmm....i think maybe your gf is insecure....she has been hurted by that fren so she is scared that it will occur second time....i think give her some time to cool off and think rationally....sometimes, girls over react on such issues.....
but maybe ur gf tot u go meet that fren mite do something wif her...thats y she so scared and angry when u go mit her fren... -
has her character been like since u met her? did she always vent her anger on you, other than that fren incident?
Well, i understand how you feel about always giving in to her. well, i believe the incident where she scold u infront of other people is inappropriate, but think in her own view, if u are her, and her fren tell u something like that, wun u be angry? i believe her insecurity is the reason why she is so mad at u. If she is able to trust u and feel secure about herself, this wun happen....
i think u can let her cool down first then have a talk with her. no raising of voice from ur part, if she yell, let her yell.... -
ok got u. i will wait and see. but then i doubt that she is insecure coz i have yet to tell the full story. its quite lengthy if i were to tell u what happen all the way from beginning. but if u wanna know then i could email u my whole story if u pass me ur email addie and if u really wanna know the whole story. thanks alot for ur help so far!Originally posted by silentnitz:has her character been like since u met her? did she always vent her anger on you, other than that fren incident?
Well, i understand how you feel about always giving in to her. well, i believe the incident where she scold u infront of other people is inappropriate, but think in her own view, if u are her, and her fren tell u something like that, wun u be angry? i believe her insecurity is the reason why she is so mad at u. If she is able to trust u and feel secure about herself, this wun happen....
i think u can let her cool down first then have a talk with her. no raising of voice from ur part, if she yell, let her yell....
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no problem man...this is aunt agony mah....so of cos someone has to help around....u can send an email to me by looking at my profile's address.... i also hope u two can solve the problem loh...
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Sorry about it. I've thought it might be otherwise too. It's a little too misleading and I'm not exactly well these few days to ensure that appropriate monitoring would be done on that thread on yours, that's why the harsh decision.... Just don't wanna take the risk...Originally posted by silentnitz:actually it really pops out of my mind so i just write it out.....but dunno y people keep thinking it is ra....me abit sad...somemore my previous topic kena closed....sighss...
Hope you could understand... We'll never know how it'll end no matter how we GUESS... Next time please try to post the whole thing like what you're doing now... Thanks... -
it is a nice story, but to believe that Vinny is a witch is like the whole story becomes fiction.. nice one!
hope to see more stories from you..
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wu liao...excuses....realy like the girl still hurt her
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hmmmmOriginally posted by yahoo.com:yup i also believe that everyone deserves a 2nd chance. people can only learn from mistakes. but this thing of sleeping around with another person i m sure is intolerable. imagine if ur wife committed this mistake. will u still forgive her? going to pubs to drink etc has their disadvantages like this. if u r happy in life and happy with ur loved one.. y go to pub to find that extra so called happiness?
as for me, i made a mistake with my loved one also. i broke the promise that i made to her and she has since yet to forgive me. it is not as if i did something very big wrong like sleeping around but tt i went out at nite to meet her very own fren who was crying. i heard her out when she had no one to cry to and now my own gal is so angry and refuses to forgive me. i feel so helpless. things were goin out VERY fine between us all the while until this happened. i regret going down to console that gal classmate of ours. now it has strained my relationship with my own lovable gf. i feel so guilty.
btw... dun think that my gal is unreasonable or wat. just tt this classmate who happened to be her best fren busted her before. they then fell out. but my gal did eventually reconcile with that classmate but things were not as close between them as before. so any way i can seek redressal for this mistake??? i have asked her but she says nothign can be done. it is not as if i committed a crime. please..anyone can tell me what to do?
sometimes gers r more sensitive to such issue especially if they hv been hurt before
once bitten twice shy
when the an unpleasant incident happened to a ger, she will tell herself that she will not want the same thing to happen to her again and she will hv zero tolerance on same issue
thus when the incident happened again, she will become quite unforgiving.
Why? u may ask... cos the ger wan to protect herself from being hurt again n again
i believe when ur gf told u that nothing u do make amend to her
but deep down inside her, she is expecting you to do something abt the matter ....
U hv to think is there something that she always asked u to do but u refuse... this is the time to do it man....
otherwise, treat her better, show her u r sincere... make time to be with her... show care n concern....
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ok the situation is now such that both of us are back on talking terms etc. i tried ignoring her but she made the first move and came talking to me. now things are back to normal but whenever i ask her is there trust between us again she say its not the same etc. she say tt she love me too much to trust me again. but she didnt say tt she will never trust me again when i asked her. anyway now that she has given me a chance, i shall never repeat this mistake again....
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if you really feel that she is the one you want as a partner for life, treasure her....Originally posted by yahoo.com:ok the situation is now such that both of us are back on talking terms etc. i tried ignoring her but she made the first move and came talking to me. now things are back to normal but whenever i ask her is there trust between us again she say its not the same etc. she say tt she love me too much to trust me again. but she didnt say tt she will never trust me again when i asked her. anyway now that she has given me a chance, i shall never repeat this mistake again....
think you will have to earn her trust back... it will be a slow process but if u preserver i am sure you will be able to make it.
Action speaks louder than words.