Sheer agony.......
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Well, something I want to share, if the mods wants me to shift, I'll shift ^^
WIsh Life Wasn't Like This: Part 1
I observed her from the 3rd floor in Takashimaya at Orchard road. Well, sometimes, girls do need that extra effort to look good and she was one of them. Attired in a figure hugging green t-shirt and long jeans with a pair of black Converse shoe. Her fair skin left her out of the crowd, the rose among the thorns, and her height was not much of an exception for her age of 17, which was 170cm. Her small double-eyelid eyes were just too cute to resist. Those two small dimples every time she smiled, would just make me go crazy…lol. Her shoulder-length wavy hair, dyed faint brown would just sway every time the wind blows and the smell of it, my favorite, kiwi fruit fragrance =).
I then saw her took out her handphone and I know that she would want to call me. “Jia lat, must act fast” I told myself. I quickly took my hp and call her. “Phew, at least I managed to get to her first” I calm myself as I make way down to her. Budging through the imba human traffic helplessly, as it was a typical Saturday evening, and more or less, its like about 2 weeks till the new year, 2007.
“Hey where are you?” she asked over the phone.
>>To Be Cont'd<<
Will post the next part once I'm done with it ^^.
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if u wanna write something beautiful and artistic, at least correct the grammatical errors la. "Fair skin left her out of the crowd" and "her height was not much of an exception at 170cm". What talking u.
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somehow her speech might be better if it was changed to "Hail, where art thou?"
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Observe people from the 3rd floor, eeyeer, so stalker like.
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What the hell am i reading
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Some composition.
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more like "diary of a creepy stalker"
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oh? according to teh script, the writer is suppose to meet the girl wor...
Maybe secretly assessing her???
And how the heck does the wind blow someone's perfume 3 floor up in a crowded shopping centre... ... ... Wait, is there even wind in a shopping centre???
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looks like jailbait loli porn story.
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Damn Chui...
Kanina... either your nose damn powerful or her hair shampoo the "kiwi fruit" smell damn strong.. you at level 3 you can even smell it... you taking all of us here as a fool?? FAIL!!!!
Secondly, your colour combination is just weird as well... Green body hugging top, plus jeans plu BLACK SHOES???? That colour combination is just weird... if you change to a dress, that would be much much better...
Fail.... 2/10 nia...Grade F
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i would like to continue the story
WIsh Life Wasn't Like This: Part 2
"I am right behind you" I replied.
She turned around, frantically looking for me. Well, frantically looking for someone talking on a handphone anyway as she still does not know how i look like.
"Do you have the money?" i asked.
"Yes" she said.
"Show me the money" I replied.
She look around bewilderedly, eyes wide, scared and teary. She stammered "b b b but you asked me to put the money in my bra."
"Well, take off your bra then" I said
"Please, I cant do that, here in public" she begged.
"Do you want your naked photos to be uploaded into the internet then?" I asked.
again, she stammered "b b b but those are not even photos of me."
"but they sure look like you" I said.
"you must have photoshoped them" she hissed, on the verge of bursting into tears.
"the important thing is that your family and friends would not be able to tell the difference, correct? That is why you agreed to this meeting even though you know that it is not really you in the photos" i said.
" please, i'll do anyting. Please just dont humiliate me publicly" she begged again.
"ok" i relented.
"i want sex as well as the money in exchange for my silence" i demanded.
"ok, how I WIsh Life Wasn't Like This" she said while silently sobbing.
"great" i said. "go to the 3rd floor female toilet. I'll meet you there" i said and hung up.
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confirm. suxx.
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WIsh Life Wasn't Like This: Part 3
When i met her in the toilet, she was so surprise that none of her previous nervousness showed.
"why do you look just like me?" she asked in great surprise.
"we are sisters" i explained. "infact, we are like twins" i continued.
"are we really twins then?" she asked but before i could answer, she had an epiphany and said "those naked pictures, they were of you werent they?"
"yes" i said.
"if we are sisters, why are you doing this to me?" she asked. "why didnt my parents ever told me that I had a twin?" she continued.
"well, let me tell you our story" i began.
"you see, we are not actually twins in the sense of the word. We are actually clones and there are thousands of us spread out all over the world." i explained
"clones?" she asked innocently.
"yes, clones" i replied.
"about 20 years ago, our father or brother if you will, the source of our genetic material is a pedophile. He like having sex little girls but he also possess enough self-control to prevent himself from acting out his urges." i explain
"he is in a dilemma as to how to satisfy his urges without breaking the law and the social taboo of having sex with little girls. He poured all his time and money into prefecting the process of cloning himself but creating a female clone instead. As you can see, he was successful" i continued.
"He reason that having sex with himself is just masturbation, irregardless of the age of the participants involve and therefore, not illegal. Thus we are born" i said.
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now this super OT liaox~
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Stop writing erotic stories on the F**King forum lah. KNS leh.
Now we have to wait for the police to catch u loh...
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Originally posted by Worcer:
Stop writing erotic stories on the F**King forum lah. KNS leh.
Now we have to wait for the police to catch u loh...
wah you consider this erotic ah?its a sci-fi thriller lah not erotic story
its blindingly obvious little boy never read erotic story before
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When is the sex part comming up ? Quickly pls...
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Originally posted by PedoBear:
wah you consider this erotic ah?its a sci-fi thriller lah not erotic story
its blindingly obvious little boy never read erotic story before
lol
wth?
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Quick leh, get to the erotic part already.
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whats all these rubbish?
story telling?
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FAIL
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Starring:
Pedobear
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due to overwhelming request to turn my sci-fi thriller into an erotic story, my story will continue as an erotic story.
to protect tasty chewren from the corruption of my beautiful mind, highlight the area below to read story
Attention: proceed only if you are over 18 years old.
WIsh Life Wasn't Like This: Part 4
Content to be posted tomorrow
Update - too busy to update today
cheers
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