A poem I juz like to share :|
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I would like to share a poem which I nvr had the chance to read to her. Thank you...
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How alluring, seductive is her look,
Residing in my deepest dreams.
She torments and teases my every me,
As wild as my imagination may be.
Someone help me control myself, please!
Her soothing composure calms me,
Her presence deeply excites and stirs me!
O What contrasting feelings I experience!
I am spell bounded and captivated by her every she.
How smooth and fair is her pure white skin,
Much like an angel I have once seen.
Yes! She was the angel in my dreams,
Stirring my uncontrollable emotions it seems!
I wish the angel to be by my every side, every moment.
Her absence invokes emptiness in me.
Her eyes are of a bottomless depth...
Which I could just stare into for eternity.
I am being bored into, pierced to my very heart when our eyes meet.
Overwhelmed by emotions, my heart beats wildly and head spins.
O But I love these feelings which drive me wild!
They say one would never know how grass yearns for the morning sun.
Starving all night and eager in anticipation at sunlight's first sight.
Now I know! Now I feel...
Her rays radiate and brighten up my every life,
Illuminating the darkest in me!
I yearn to give love to my angelic sunshine,
Of genuine sincerity and of pure love I present thee.
My love has never been stronger than I feel,
The flutter of my heart, emotions coursing through me.
All I ask is...
Will thou accept thy humble me? -
Splendid. A great piece of work. Anymore to share my friend?
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Just curious, but why only four lines in para 2, while the rest with five lines?
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Sorry and para 3, why six lines? Anything special meaning?
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hi there, there is no special meaning for no. of sentences... When i wrote, it just happened to be like that.
I had others, but i think i threw them away... let me see what i can think of... -
After I read your poem, I decided not to wait any longer. So I created 'Dead Poets Society', if you decide to post some of your poems, you can post them at ‘Writers & Photographers’ Haven’. They are more active, more people will see them also.Originally posted by MetalGear:hi there, there is no special meaning for no. of sentences... When i wrote, it just happened to be like that.
I had others, but i think i threw them away... let me see what i can think of...
But if possible can you also post them in ‘Dead Poets Society’? I am trying to collect good poems at my forum. Your efforts are greatly appreciated. Thanks.
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no bad huh...
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Keep your creativity coming. Though, the aim of your poem may not have the chance to receive it - at least you gain appreciation here.Originally posted by MetalGear:I would like to share a poem which I nvr had the chance to read to her. Thank you...
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How alluring, seductive is her look,
Residing in my deepest dreams.
She torments and teases my every me,
As wild as my imagination may be.
Someone help me control myself, please!
Her soothing composure calms me,
Her presence deeply excites and stirs me!
O What contrasting feelings I experience!
I am spell bounded and captivated by her every she.
How smooth and fair is her pure white skin,
Much like an angel I have once seen.
Yes! She was the angel in my dreams,
Stirring my uncontrollable emotions it seems!
I wish the angel to be by my every side, every moment.
Her absence invokes emptiness in me.
Her eyes are of a bottomless depth...
Which I could just stare into for eternity.
I am being bored into, pierced to my very heart when our eyes meet.
Overwhelmed by emotions, my heart beats wildly and head spins.
O But I love these feelings which drive me wild!
They say one would never know how grass yearns for the morning sun.
Starving all night and eager in anticipation at sunlight's first sight.
Now I know! Now I feel...
Her rays radiate and brighten up my every life,
Illuminating the darkest in me!
I yearn to give love to my angelic sunshine,
Of genuine sincerity and of pure love I present thee.
My love has never been stronger than I feel,
The flutter of my heart, emotions coursing through me.
All I ask is...
Will thou accept thy humble me?
Cheers