Save the Love
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An attempt to save my relationship... which failed in the end though... Didn't know she was gonna break with me the next day... She didn't understand it neither could she be bothered to ask...
Love, ever so delicate
Shattered by perils of impulse
Words, ever so delicate
Misunderstood mien; Bond engulfed
Prevailing a sorrow ambience
Tears began to roll
With words contradicting actions
Lover to a foe
That was not to be
For promises were made
Eternal love weÂ’ve been endowed
Return our hearts to where it once laid
Bamboozled by fallacious mood
Your ambrosial features obscured
Devoirs were left unfulfilled
And sadness uncured
With enlightenment bestowed upon
May this affliction end.
Give our love an opportunity
An opportunity to mend
The worst there will ever be is over
The perfect love starts now
A perfect love led by us.
Truth affirmed; My Vow -
well..If u wish to cry..Then cry out loud...Hope u will feel better...
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seriously the ang moh u used is a bit overly-chim.....it'll be a turn off especially if your gf noes u r not so good at it.....she probably think of it as insincere.....Originally posted by GwenSilvz:An attempt to save my relationship... which failed in the end though... Didn't know she was gonna break with me the next day... She didn't understand it neither could she be bothered to ask...
Love, ever so delicate
Shattered by perils of impulse
Words, ever so delicate
Misunderstood mien; Bond engulfed
Prevailing a sorrow ambience
Tears began to roll
With words contradicting actions
Lover to a foe
That was not to be
For promises were made
Eternal love weÂ’ve been endowed
Return our hearts to where it once laid
Bamboozled by fallacious mood
Your ambrosial features obscured
Devoirs were left unfulfilled
And sadness uncured
With enlightenment bestowed upon
May this affliction end.
Give our love an opportunity
An opportunity to mend
The worst there will ever be is over
The perfect love starts now
A perfect love led by us.
Truth affirmed; My Vow -
erm...
why a turn off? and insincere??
i'm capable of writting such things... she knows it... anyway, it's over. just sprouting it out. -
She's always on my mind,
from the time i wake up
'till i close my eyes
she's everywhere i go
she's all i know
'Though she's so far away
it's just keeps getting stronger
every day
and even now she's gone
i'm still holding on
So tell me where do i start
'cause it's breaking my heart
don't wanna let her go
chorus:
Maybe my love will come back some day
only heaven knows
and maybe our hearts will find their way
only heaven knows
and all i can do is hope and pray
'cause heaven knows
My friends keep telling me
that if you really love her
you've gotta set her free
and if she returns in kind
i'll know she's mine
So tell me where do i start
'cause it's breaking my heart
don't wanna let her go
chorus
Why i live in despair
'cause while awake or dreaming
i know she's never there
and all these time i act so brave
i'm shaking inside
why does it hurt me so... -
well.....if she noes u often do that then it's ok....but as u said,Originally posted by GwenSilvz:erm...
why a turn off? and insincere??
i'm capable of writting such things... she knows it... anyway, it's over. just sprouting it out.
i sing this song for u "love is over, qing ni bu yao zai ku qi....hmm....hmmm....hmm.....hmmm...hahah forgot lyrics liao"
not say so turn off but insincere as in a girl might see it as fake or internet cut n paste etc...especially those easy to get suspicious. -
I see...
Yap, it's written by me... it reflects our relationship... touching on how it went wrong and how I would like it to be in the future... so quite unlikely that she'll think I copied it from somewhere... -
the best part is she dun understand and dun bother to noe...think she is tired and restless abt her feelings for u....Originally posted by GwenSilvz:I see...
Yap, it's written by me... it reflects our relationship... touching on how it went wrong and how I would like it to be in the future... so quite unlikely that she'll think I copied it from somewhere... -
haha...
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Let it go man. Leave all the rest to time.
As much as I dread to say this, it is the only best solution you have. -
Ya... Glad that ya understands that... Anyway, I believe you'll get over it with time...Originally posted by GwenSilvz:erm...
why a turn off? and insincere??
i'm capable of writting such things... she knows it... anyway, it's over. just sprouting it out.
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May I ask what song is that??Originally posted by Cerebral_Assassin:well.....if she noes u often do that then it's ok....but as u said,
i sing this song for u "love is over, qing ni bu yao zai ku qi....hmm....hmmm....hmm.....hmmm...hahah forgot lyrics liao"
not say so turn off but insincere as in a girl might see it as fake or internet cut n paste etc...especially those easy to get suspicious.
"Lian Shang Ling Yi Ge Ren" By Chris You totally reflects what's happening... -
i noe that you hong ming song....damn sad go ktv i'll sing sometimes.....i dunno the song name of that song...is a chinese oldieOriginally posted by GwenSilvz:May I ask what song is that??
"Lian Shang Ling Yi Ge Ren" By Chris You totally reflects what's happening... -
Question: Why does everyone write poems about girls/guys when the relationship is over? My ex did this as well. URGH..
URGHHH.. eEeEEkkkk.. Eeekkk..
Isn't it more painful? -
Haha... I didn't write this before we broke up... more of like the day before we did... which I wasn't expecting anyway! =)Originally posted by Lingos:Question: Why does everyone write poems about girls/guys when the relationship is over? My ex did this as well. URGH..
URGHHH.. eEeEEkkkk.. Eeekkk..
Isn't it more painful? -
got problem say out here... most of us will help i guess..
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I did, it's in another post here!
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Haha... maybe he also went through something like me?? At first it's Lian Shang Yi Ge Ren... then later he realize got another guy then go sing Lian Shang Ling Yi Ge Ren... And also that Yi Tian Yi Wan Nian song...Originally posted by Cerebral_Assassin:i noe that you hong ming song....damn sad go ktv i'll sing sometimes.....i dunno the song name of that song...is a chinese oldie -
Can I ask.. why some people can't just live and let live. I don't know what had happened in a few of my relationships as well. But i don't go stalking my exes (axed) just to find out was it my fault.. his fault.. her fault?! But i just got asked what had happened to end our relationship. YES.. my Fault.. my fault.. i changed.. just to humour him. Who cares?!
I've always just let it go.. and moved on. There is no point is indulging in the past. And don't use the excuse of.. i want to improve myself. There is nothing that you didn't know that can improve you. I really doubt you will be getting much feedback that would help. And people react to situations differently as well. Some are drama queens, some are turtles who hide in their shell when it gets tough. -
I always think alot before I sleep... once I thought of this...Originally posted by Lingos:
Can I ask.. why some people can't just live and let live. I don't know what had happened in a few of my relationships as well. But i don't go stalking my exes (axed) just to find out was it my fault.. his fault.. her fault?! But i just got asked what had happened to end our relationship. YES.. my Fault.. my fault.. i changed.. just to humour him. Who cares?!
I've always just let it go.. and moved on. There is no point is indulging in the past. And don't use the excuse of.. i want to improve myself. There is nothing that you didn't know that can improve you. I really doubt you will be getting much feedback that would help. And people react to situations differently as well. Some are drama queens, some are turtles who hide in their shell when it gets tough.
People are selfish by nature, they cry whenever they lose something? They can't bear to let go... just want all the benefits... I mean who would cry over burden?? Except for a handful maybe... Those kind-hearted once... sympathy cry? ARGH!!