Originally posted by InVaa:
That day NO GIRL WANAN GO! den 4 guys go check out environment 1st.. take cab go.. 1st uncle we say OCH.. he bring us to changi hospital.. took 2nd cab bring us there.. we saw a eerie building den all thought OCH den i ask some NSman found out it was not.. but it look more scary den OCH.. den we went up the long staircase den got metal shit block.. nid to climb to the slope n jump over.. den we go to bus stop.. ask reest of ppl from chalet come.. we waited @ bus stop.. den got 1 guy who can "see" keep telling us not to go cos he scare later police come another criminal record.. cos he a lot.. but i think he was hinting tt he saw something.. but we hack care.. den aft tt 4 more come.. i am the only sce 3 in the 1st grp.. den 2nd grp another sec 3.. den we go up the slope.. i am the most careful whom done all my hw n ask ard in irc abt OCH n rules to obey.. i was told abt dogs but they refuse to listen to me n bring weapon they scare police come ma.. den the 1st guy jump in.. it was quite difficult the slope is steep.. den nid to climb to the slope bside the stair n jump inside.. den i 2nd jump in.. both landed softly.. den 2 more i think jump in.. den aft tt 1 guy saw the sign "wad wad wad will be prosecuted" means cnanot anyhow come in.. den they hum den got 1 guys say i am goign bye guys.. LOL i wanan stay 1 but.. den all jump out.. den got 1 fat ass still inside.. we mus climb over something lyk those handle for staircase those easily jump over 1.. den tt fat ass take his own sweet time.. den he last 1 inside OCH.. den i alway hear story abt missing ppl so he told us to wait for him.. den he say quite loudly.. wait for me leh! btw he jumkp n land in OCH VERY LOUDLY.. den he was sitting in the middle of the "staircase handle" dick in the middle there sitting lyk laying egg.. wait for me leh wait for me leh.. den his brother n me n 1 more guy wait for him.. rest all chionging down.. den we heard faint dog bark.. i was told there are 6 big police train dogs there.. but i dunno its inside.. i thoguth its a guard station den dogs ard there.. den tt guy ass still on the handle.. den soem1 say got dog got dog.. den all run ar.. the staircase is those very old diff to climb 1.. den the slope is lyk forest lyk tt.. a lot of big tress sharp object etc..den i started slowly walking down the slope den the bark very fast super loud!!!! scary sia.. i thoguth got high fence cover the stairs so dogs cant come out.. WHO THE FC K NOE HE JUMP OUT!.. den i start running.. den i see 1 guy move over to staircase i copy move over.. den i jump down the stair den got 1 long tree roots down there.. i move left a bit den dunnjo how i roll down the slope,, cb the slope is lyk a lot of sharp roots branches tress sharp rock all these shit.. heng i nvr die.. i roll down tt time so many tree bracnhes break sound.. my whoke body cuts except face cos i protect there.. cb den my converse slipper 1 lost.. the slope is so damn steep n full of %*(@&!_#@!.. lyk forest lyk tt.. heng i survive sia.. lol den i thoguth "da nan bu si.. bi yo hou fu.. go gamble lose money.. if u are there u sure laugh till roll on floor.. i think of it also laugh.. dunno is i organizer "those" thing push me or i clumbsy LOL
Hello young man, what has your English teacher been teaching you in school? I gave up reading halfway through your tale. There is a difference between Singlish and bad English. And yours is a combination of both. The least you should do is to paragraph your article. And please refrain from using too much text talk. This sort of language will land you in trouble when you start working next time.
