My stupid poet

• niffoc

  30 Mar 05, 15:50

  Round and round I prowl about
  30 rounds I all loaded up
  Enemy enemy my CO shout
  30 round I expanded out
  Out my bayonet and I charge
  And in the end my fall down
  
• Gordonator

  30 Mar 05, 16:45

  nice. but should be "I fall down" instead of "my fall down" right?
• niffoc

  30 Mar 05, 20:52

  Round and round I prowl about
  30 rounds I all loaded up
  Enemy enemy my CO shout
  30 round I expanded out
  Out my bayonet and I charge
  And in the end i fall down
  
  ya man sorry my english is that good after all
  
• specfore

  30 Mar 05, 21:28

  Originally posted by niffoc:

  Round and round I prowl about
  30 rounds I all loaded up
  Enemy enemy my CO shout
  30 round I expanded out
  Out my bayonet and I charge
  And in the end i fall down
  
  ya man sorry my english is that good after all
  

  While we are still correcting your english , the spelling of expanded should be "expended".
• kaka_22

  31 Mar 05, 21:06

  Originally posted by specfore:

  While we are still correcting your english , the spelling of expanded should be "expended".