A story...

• KittynMeow

  22 Mar 04, 23:39

  Originally posted by eutjin:

  yea lor!!! i wanna log a complaint ..... get this escalated!!
  
  pour cold water only !&@^(&#($&#$

  not all stories end in happy endings...
• coolger03

  23 Mar 04, 00:22

  har?? so fast finish liao ah??
  hmm... never mind... when's the next story??
• KittynMeow

  23 Mar 04, 00:31

  Originally posted by coolger03:

  har?? so fast finish liao ah??
  hmm... never mind... when's the next story??

  hehehe.. will write another one thats for sure.. in the meantime, enjoy tare's story.. keekee
• True_Xerion

  23 Mar 04, 00:46

  wah lau!!!! I want a re-write! No climatic sex scene? No wedding bells? No end-of-the-world rejection scene?
  
  haha this is too real, juz like our lives!! Refreshing refreshing!!!
  
  *three cheers!! Well done!!*
  
  TX
• KittynMeow

  23 Mar 04, 00:59

  Originally posted by True_Xerion:

  wah lau!!!! I want a re-write! No climatic sex scene? No wedding bells? No end-of-the-world rejection scene?
  
  haha this is too real, juz like our lives!! Refreshing refreshing!!!
  
  *three cheers!! Well done!!*
  
  TX

  thank you thank you.... *me takes a bow*
• AdAptAliS

  23 Mar 04, 01:45

  I love your story. It's not like an impossible plot. Can imagine it happening lorx. Good job! Terrific!
  
  /me sets up tent, waiting for next story liao...
  
  "Who's next in line?"
• tia

  23 Mar 04, 01:47

  basically a nice story..
  *thumbs up*
• DeadPoet

  23 Mar 04, 10:08

  Originally posted by KittynMeow:

  not all stories end in happy endings...

  To me this is a happy ending leh.
  
  Anyway love is full of surprises. (Including some shocks)
• MoonIce

  28 Mar 04, 15:53

  * claps amidst sniffing and tissues being piled up beside me*
  
  touching a pity about the ending though but well as least Pat got it all solved
  
  
• KittynMeow

  29 Mar 04, 10:59

  Originally posted by MoonIce:

  * claps amidst sniffing and tissues being piled up beside me*
  
  touching a pity about the ending though but well as least Pat got it all solved
  
  

  dun cry dun cry.....*pat pat*
  its just a story....
• KittynMeow

  29 Mar 04, 11:01

  by the way, can someone give me a score how much this story is worth?? i.e. XX/100??
  
  so that i know how much more to improve on my next story... kekeke
• DeadPoet

  31 Mar 04, 00:36

  Originally posted by KittynMeow:

  by the way, can someone give me a score how much this story is worth?? i.e. XX/100??
  
  so that i know how much more to improve on my next story... kekeke

  I give you 99/100!
  
  -1 because ending too fast liao.
• True_Xerion

  31 Mar 04, 00:59

  heh I'd give u an A** too for keeping us in all suspense + the anti-Hollywood ending! Three cheers & hoping for more to come!
  
  
  TX
• the Bear

  31 Mar 04, 01:04

  let the people log complaints all they want.. it's a GREAT ending!
  
  things like that happen... and heck.. i've seen them happen too
• tare

  5 Apr 04, 00:25

  my ang moh so bad how to dare to mark ppl's work?
• DeadPoet

  5 Apr 04, 00:54

  Originally posted by tare:

  my ang moh so bad how to dare to mark ppl's work?

  You are too humble.
  
  Wonder if anyone here good at writing ghost or crime stories...
• DarrenWong

  5 Apr 04, 02:00

  Wonderful Job!!!!
• AdAptAliS

  5 Apr 04, 02:23

  Very hard to mark leh. Don't know where's the benchmark or the standard to compare to.
  
  Basically, it's great. If got sequel, or even just a brand new story at this kind of calibre or better still, a higher level, then it would be very good and entertaining, like this one already is.
• KittynMeow

  5 Apr 04, 10:27

  wah... thank you all for the support...
  anyway, it's likely there wun be a sequel... rather, it'll be a new story and hopefully i can get started on it before end of this week... keekee
• Uncle_MooMoo

  28 Apr 04, 18:07

  I think it's great because it's ending is rather moving/touching yet realistic and not too cliche...would probably turn out great as a short movie. Anyway, care to PM me which is "the other forum"? hehehe, really free these days, reading through a load of stories.
• KittynMeow

  3 May 04, 02:23

  Originally posted by Uncle_MooMoo:

  I think it's great because it's ending is rather moving/touching yet realistic and not too cliche...would probably turn out great as a short movie. Anyway, care to PM me which is "the other forum"? hehehe, really free these days, reading through a load of stories.

  heee no point also lah.. cos that forum inactive liow... kekee..... down here got more stories to read...
• M©+square

  6 May 04, 07:33

  It's a pity that Cheryl and even, Pat's character didn't get to develop much.
  
  Well a story well written though.
  I love the suspense the author dropped at the end of every ep.
  
  *clap clap*
  
  
• KittynMeow

  17 May 04, 09:41

  Originally posted by M©+square:

  It's a pity that Cheryl and even, Pat's character didn't get to develop much.
  
  Well a story well written though.
  I love the suspense the author dropped at the end of every ep.
  
  *clap clap*
  
  

  Thank you thank you.... *bow*
• beavan

  24 May 04, 19:56

  wonderful story.....nice plot,nice choice of words...and yes nice dialogue..
  
  haha gave u 90 marks out of hundred,abit difficult to mark it compared to tare's=P sorrrrrrrry