What so special about this poem?
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I wrote this in the MRT on the way home today.
There is something 'special' about this poem.
Can anyone guess what is it?
Without you
Wild wind, a howling mad man,
Out of control.
Angry storm, a pounding giant,
Out for my blood.
I am not afraid, humming away our song,
Dancing in the dark.
Going round and round in my final hour,
Into your waiting arm.
Guiding my soul into your world,
In a far away land. -
reminds me a bit of a haiku
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Hehehe, that's not the answer I am looking for.Originally posted by HENG@:reminds me a bit of a haiku
Something else. -
Not very difficult one lah, give it a try leh.
~me wonder who can give me correct answer~ -
written by u?
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Nope! Er... I mean yes, it is written by me. But nope, that is not the answer.Originally posted by HENG@:written by u?
Hint: Got something to do with the english language. -
complex, it is
structured, it still is
well-written, it remains
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Originally posted by DeadPoet:
Look interesting. Can give more hints?
I wrote this in the MRT on the way home today.
There is something 'special' about this poem.
Can anyone guess what is it?
[b]Without you
Wild wind, howling like a mad man,
Out of control.
Angry storm, pounding like a giant,
Out for my blood.
I am not afraid, humming away our song,
Dancing in the dark.
Going round and round in my final hour,
Into your waiting arm.
Guiding my soul into your world,
In a far away land.
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yoda-speak?!Originally posted by the Bear:complex, it is
structured, it still is
well-written, it remains -
No wonder it sound so familiar.Originally posted by HENG@:yoda-speak?!
Anyway, hint2: The title is also a hint. -
no have the word "you" in the poem
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anymore hints....??
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u aiming to be the next eminem?Originally posted by DeadPoet:No wonder it sound so familiar.
Anyway, hint2: The title is also a hint. -
can't be that straightforward leh.....Originally posted by FireIce:no have the word "you" in the poem -
Last hint: It is very difficult to write anything i.e. stories, poems, etc without using it.Originally posted by KittynMeow:anymore hints....??
I going to work now. 'See' you guys tonight. -
NO "E"!!!!!!Originally posted by DeadPoet:Last hint: It is very difficult to write anything i.e. stories, poems, etc without using it.
I going to work now. 'See' you guys tonight. -
Originally posted by HENG@:
got no B and Z also mah.
[b]NO "E"!!!!!!
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blood got b horOriginally posted by Bochupi:got no B and Z also mah. -
DP...now then you edit your poem...
if not i wld have got the answer last nite liaow.... -
Wah you notice!Originally posted by narz:DP...now then you edit your poem...
if not i wld have got the answer last nite liaow....
I only realise it just know. The word 'like', a little 'e' behind, I totally missed it.
For those who guess correctly before, please don't be angry hor. Very sorry.
The answer is no letter 'e'.
Good for you brother Heng, you notice too. -
orhh... don worry lah... getting angry will have wrinkles one... not worth it....Originally posted by DeadPoet:Wah you notice!
I only realise it just know. The word 'like', a little 'e' behind, I totally missed it.
For those who guess correctly before, please don't be angry hor. Very sorry.
The answer is no letter 'e'.
Good for you brother Heng, you notice too.
you have a good day at work...
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It is so difficult to write anything without using the letter 'e'.
Maybe I should have a competition for writing stories or poems without using this letter.
Should be fun.
P.S. By the way, 'Without you' is a love poem too hor.
About a man dying alone in his house during a storm. He has a vision of dancing with his dead wife, humming their favourite song before he died. Though alone, without money to pay the electric bills, loansharks (giant) after his blood, he died a happy man. -
But, how does hint 2 come into this... "Without You", has nothing to do with without E :S
"Anyway, hint2: The title is also a hint. "Originally posted by DeadPoet:The answer is no letter 'e'. -
kekeke...eye blink too fast liao.Originally posted by HENG@:blood got b hor -
hahahaOriginally posted by Bochupi:kekeke...eye blink too fast liao.