A fictional Story

• blue_kelvinsg

  16 Jun 05, 15:22

  http://freewebs.com/punk-d2/story.htm
  
  Tell me watcha think!
• blue_kelvinsg

  16 Jun 05, 15:53

  MUST READ!! LOCAL WRITING!
• dragg

  16 Jun 05, 15:55

  looks like nobody is interested.
  
  
• blue_kelvinsg

  16 Jun 05, 16:01

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• Ito_^

  16 Jun 05, 16:48

  you lower sec school kid is it. nothing better to do is it. really horny is it. go work part time in geyland lar.
  
  sux0r.
• blue_kelvinsg

  16 Jun 05, 17:14

  or are the words too hard for you to understand?
  
  

  Originally posted by Ito_^:

  you lower sec school kid is it. nothing better to do is it. really horny is it. go work part time in geyland lar.
  
  sux0r.

• Hello Kitty

  19 Jun 05, 00:10

  i read 1st sentence, i sian liao, so din continue.
• blue_kelvinsg

  19 Jun 05, 00:17

  Originally posted by Hello Kitty:

  i read 1st sentence, i sian liao, so din continue.

  its really exciting u should read!! erotic stuff!!
• Hello Kitty

  19 Jun 05, 00:19

  summarise fer me lah.
• blue_kelvinsg

  19 Jun 05, 00:25

  no.. u must read from top to bottom then shiock
• Ito_^

  19 Jun 05, 00:43

  Originally posted by blue_kelvinsg:

  or are the words too hard for you to understand?
  
  

  ya lor. i dun understand primary school english. too hard liao. im a stupid blardy fool who dun understand primary school level english. its so sad. i feel like a moron, trying to read this primary school level erotic essay wanna be which is like so suxy primary school english, and i simply couldn't understand those difficult primary school level words, terms written by a stupid primary school level idiot. my intelligence must be so low sia, right? can't even read this primary school level english de words, dun grasp the meaning, so dammm primary school you know, i dunnoe how.. what to do? i simply cannot accept this kind of stupid primary school level english sia. the writer hor, must be so primary school level, to write such a primary school level english essay that isn't even fit to be in a primary school, so come here and post pretending not to be a primary school essay.
  
  ya lor.. too hard la. damm primary school level writing style, primary school level grammer mistakes and all those primary school level intelligence in the writer. i cannot understand leh.
  
  so sad. see, im crying for this primary school level essay.
• Hello Kitty

  19 Jun 05, 00:46

  me juz scrolled to the back. lame leh.
• leo-kun

  19 Jun 05, 20:57

  the story is crab!
• blue_kelvinsg

  20 Jun 05, 09:53

  Originally posted by The Twins:

  Not bad, quite creative...do continue!

  thanks man. haha
• blue_kelvinsg

  20 Jun 05, 09:54

  and behold, look who's talking ?!
  
  

  Originally posted by Ito_^:

  ya lor. i dun understand primary school english. too hard liao. im a stupid blardy fool who dun understand primary school level english. its so sad. i feel like a moron, trying to read this primary school level erotic essay wanna be which is like so suxy primary school english, and i simply couldn't understand those difficult primary school level words, terms written by a stupid primary school level idiot. my intelligence must be so low sia, right? can't even read this primary school level english de words, dun grasp the meaning, so dammm primary school you know, i dunnoe how.. what to do? i simply cannot accept this kind of stupid primary school level english sia. the writer hor, must be so primary school level, to write such a primary school level english essay that isn't even fit to be in a primary school, so come here and post pretending not to be a primary school essay.
  
  ya lor.. too hard la. damm primary school level writing style, primary school level grammer mistakes and all those primary school level intelligence in the writer. i cannot understand leh.
  
  so sad. see, im crying for this primary school level essay.

• Ito_^

  20 Jun 05, 10:08

  Originally posted by blue_kelvinsg:

  and behold, look who's talking ?!
  
  

  Ito is talking.
• blue_kelvinsg

  20 Jun 05, 11:45

  
  
  

  Originally posted by Ito_^:

  Ito is talking.