Lust of the Succubus

• Ashiene

  11 Jan 06, 18:29

  Hi I just finished writing this poem:
  
  Black was the color of her long straight hair
  Red was the glow of her eyes
  Lust was what controlled her instincts
  As the Succubus prowled the dark streets in the night
  
  She wished for neither gold nor fame
  But for the man who slept in the small house
  Quietly she moved
  Yet heavily she breathed
  
  In the dim light of the full moon
  Her slim and slender shape was revealed
  In the semi-darkness she crawled up the walls
  As the man in the room stirred
  
  She reached the side of his bed
  And the man moved a little
  His eyes still closed
  His mouth open
  
  Undressing the sleeping man
  The succubus breathed in his scent
  Ah how handsome he was
  She thought
  
  Lust overcoming caution she reached down
  And as she straddled the man he seemed to groan
  Her hand caressed his muscled body
  But the man only snored
  
  As the dawn broke the man stirred once more
  And she leaned forward to kiss him
  The succubus turned to leave
  And gave the sleeping man one final glance
• I_am_PeTe_Parker

  11 Jan 06, 18:34

  can you please pass my name card to Succubus...
  My address is there. I am free tonight.
• Pop Out

  11 Jan 06, 18:35

  have rhyme scheme?
• Ashiene

  11 Jan 06, 18:38

  Originally posted by Pop Out:

  have rhyme scheme?

  Dark Fantasy poems rarely rhyme
• Ashiene

  11 Jan 06, 18:40

  Originally posted by I_am_PeTe_Parker:

  can you please pass my name card to Succubus...
  My address is there. I am free tonight.

  Sure..please tell me which succubus you would like at your service. Hell is a very large place and the succubi have many different types..some got wings some dont have. Pontianak is south east asia's most well known succubus. you want that? hell got alot to provide...
• 798

  11 Jan 06, 18:41

  a great poem to challenge junhao1000!
  
  u two rulez!
• Ashiene

  11 Jan 06, 18:42

  Originally posted by 798:

  a great poem to challenge junhao1000!
  
  u two rulez!

  junhao's 'poems' are actually his fantasies...mine is not..
• I_am_PeTe_Parker

  11 Jan 06, 18:44

  Originally posted by Ashiene:

  Sure..please tell me which succubus you would like at your service. Hell is a very large place and the succubi have many different types..some got wings some dont have. Pontianak is south east asia's most well known succubus. you want that? hell got alot to provide...

  must got ch*e bye
• 798

  11 Jan 06, 18:45

  Originally posted by Ashiene:

  junhao's 'poems' are actually his fantasies...mine is not..

  nonetheless still find both of you make Bar an interesting place. both of you can fight for the Best Poster for the month.
• Ashiene

  11 Jan 06, 18:58

  Originally posted by 798:

  nonetheless still find both of you make Bar an interesting place. both of you can fight for the Best Poster for the month.

  I have a great love for Dark Fantasy..been playing lots of such games and watched alot of such movies. Now im writing another poem heheh
• I_am_PeTe_Parker

  11 Jan 06, 18:59

  Originally posted by Ashiene:

  I have a great love for Dark Fantasy..been playing lots of such games and watched alot of such movies. Now im writing another poem heheh

  why you didn't post in Dead Poet Society forum?
• Ashiene

  11 Jan 06, 19:07

  wtf is dead poet society forum? where got such forum one?
• I_am_PeTe_Parker

  12 Jan 06, 08:53

  Originally posted by Ashiene:

  wtf is dead poet society forum? where got such forum one?

  ops, what has become of my grammar....should be plural. Many Poets are dead
  Dead Poets Society.
• .Dark.Yuki.

  12 Jan 06, 22:36

  More of a lusty tribute?
• S_T_F_U

  12 Jan 06, 22:59

  lusty tribute??? mmm...
• Ashiene

  18 Jan 06, 12:14

  
  
  This succubus most chio...