Take a a look,and give some suggestions....
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This is the song that I wrote the night when my girlfrend died in a car accident.I can't fall aslp at the time,so....I began to wrote it down.Then 2 years+ later,I found this in the diskette.So now kinda bored...I post here.See if its good anot.
Do give suggestions hoh!
"Kill me"
I can't take it any longer
I have done whatever I can do
But all of them just fell apart
I find it hard to swallow/and
One idea ran through my mind
Just kill me
Shoot me in the head
I want to die right now
All those things make no sense
I canÂ’t hold on anymore
Just kill me
Stab me in the chest
I want to die right now
I want to runaway from the world
I find it hard to live on
ItÂ’s true the way I feel
Just kill me
Put a bullet in my head
I want die right now
I canÂ’t hold on
ThereÂ’s just too much to take in
I am about to break
Just kill me
I tried so hard to keep myself sane
But in the end it doesnÂ’t work at all
ItÂ’s haunting that I canÂ’t find myself in my own reflection
I am just not myself anymore
ThereÂ’s just too much pressure for me to take
I wanna be pushed aside so let me go
I donÂ’t know why I felt this way
I know I will never feel the same again
So I want to,
End my life right here, right now
Kill me! End my sorrow
Kill me! Let it all end
Kill me!"Dnt you knw who I am?My name is Booker T!"
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its nice, meaningful.
losing someone dear all of a sudden is perhaps the worst thing to happen to anyone, but that's fate. live life to the fullest
but wateva happens, no point ending your own life. cherish ur own life cos there are ppl who don't get these kind of chances. -
aiyoh, why you smiling and laughing..
btw, it's a good poem..
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haiz...indeed another soap opera in the making dude....Originally posted by leopardz:This is the song that I wrote the night when my girlfrend died in a car accident.I can't fall aslp at the time,so....I began to wrote it down.Then 2 years+ later,I found this in the diskette.So now kinda bored...I post here.See if its good anot.
Do give suggestions hoh!
"Kill me"
I can't take it any longer
I have done whatever I can do
But all of them just fell apart
I find it hard to swallow/and
One idea ran through my mind
Just kill me
Shoot me in the head
I want to die right now
All those things make no sense
I canÂ’t hold on anymore
Just kill me
Stab me in the chest
I want to die right now
I want to runaway from the world
I find it hard to live on
ItÂ’s true the way I feel
Just kill me
Put a bullet in my head
I want die right now
I canÂ’t hold on
ThereÂ’s just too much to take in
I am about to break
Just kill me
I tried so hard to keep myself sane
But in the end it doesnÂ’t work at all
ItÂ’s haunting that I canÂ’t find myself in my own reflection
I am just not myself anymore
ThereÂ’s just too much pressure for me to take
I wanna be pushed aside so let me go
I donÂ’t know why I felt this way
I know I will never feel the same again
So I want to,
End my life right here, right now
Kill me! End my sorrow
Kill me! Let it all end
Kill me!
u wan me to compose it 4 u?
the music man
davewill -
it's so pessimistic.
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Wait till someone who u are very closed to u die,then u knw how i feel.Im not cursing you or watever.But I dnt think u knw what pain it is to be not able to sleep at the night she died.Its painful.But I'm over it.Originally posted by Spetznaz:if tis is how u were feeling exactly when she died then ur a LOSER wit a L
wanting 2 die b coz of some 1
ur parents shld smack some sense into u
I thank u for trying to smack me into accepting the ugly truth with ur mean attitude,but since its already 2 yrs since it happened,I am living on.Although its sad to remember her sometime.But hey,Im still here typing!"Dnt you knw who I am?My name is Booker T!"
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mayb u mean him well....but ur usage of words r so mean....Originally posted by Spetznaz:if tis is how u were feeling exactly when she died then ur a LOSER wit a L
wanting 2 die b coz of some 1
ur parents shld smack some sense into u
dun say him...even i tink it stings... -
hi...Originally posted by leopardz:
it's good that you are able to channel your angst positively into something creative...
& certainly better to noe dat u've survived the pain of losing a loved one...
am sure you would continue to take good care of yourself & live life to the fullest!
xi wang zai ren jian! treasure what you have, not what you have lost! -
hey!!! sounds liek linkin park!!!! hehe.... take it easy har.... it's all over la.... behave urself on earth so that u can go to heaven and meet her again... cheersOriginally posted by leopardz:This is the song that I wrote the night when my girlfrend died in a car accident.I can't fall aslp at the time,so....I began to wrote it down.Then 2 years+ later,I found this in the diskette.So now kinda bored...I post here.See if its good anot.
Do give suggestions hoh!
"Kill me"
I can't take it any longer
I have done whatever I can do
But all of them just fell apart
I find it hard to swallow/and
One idea ran through my mind
Just kill me
Shoot me in the head
I want to die right now
All those things make no sense
I canÂ’t hold on anymore
Just kill me
Stab me in the chest
I want to die right now
I want to runaway from the world
I find it hard to live on
ItÂ’s true the way I feel
Just kill me
Put a bullet in my head
I want die right now
I canÂ’t hold on
ThereÂ’s just too much to take in
I am about to break
Just kill me
I tried so hard to keep myself sane
But in the end it doesnÂ’t work at all
ItÂ’s haunting that I canÂ’t find myself in my own reflection
I am just not myself anymore
ThereÂ’s just too much pressure for me to take
I wanna be pushed aside so let me go
I donÂ’t know why I felt this way
I know I will never feel the same again
So I want to,
End my life right here, right now
Kill me! End my sorrow
Kill me! Let it all end
Kill me! -
ey NA BUAY CHEE BYE lah SPETNAZ.. u keep talkin abt ppls as losers wat abt urself? in every forum pple come here for advice and comments and u jus say pple loser here loser there? u think u own boss big fu.ck ah? u r merely selling ur own balls rite?! loser..Originally posted by Spetznaz:if tis is how u were feeling exactly when she died then ur a LOSER wit a L
wanting 2 die b coz of some 1
ur parents shld smack some sense into u
ey one more thing.. NIN NA BU EH CHEE BYE ..LOSER -
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Baby sgboy2004 -
whoa... very fierce ar..... cool down... cheers
hugz all.... -
wah bro....I not angry,u angry....Watsupwitda?Originally posted by m@rk:ey NA BUAY CHEE BYE lah SPETNAZ.. u keep talkin abt ppls as losers wat abt urself? in every forum pple come here for advice and comments and u jus say pple loser here loser there? u think u own boss big fu.ck ah? u r merely selling ur own balls rite?! loser..
ey one more thing.. NIN NA BU EH CHEE BYE ..LOSER -
Hihi
New guy here. Might be alittle off topic but this is a poem i composed when i left school
Always in a daze,
I thought of drowning in a pool.
CouldnÂ’t keep up with the pace,
I often felt like a fool.
Out of the class I would gaze,
Envying the liberty commanded by the birds,
Thus, even to my amaze,
I came in third.
Cool were the days of school,
It was such a craze.
Drowning in an endless pool of sorrow,
I always looked forward to tomorrow.
Now itÂ’s time to wave goodbye,
Many tears to be shed,
Surely thatÂ’s not a lie,
For many relationships IÂ’ve shared. -
its a good thing that u didnt do anything foolish
cause u make more ppl around u sad
when it have to go, it will go
no matter how u tried to stop it,
life will still carry on
world wont stop spinning for one ppl
hehe
glad u know the meaning of life