Maybe he is an aspiring author...Originally posted by starblue:erm... i wouldn't go running across the field with thunder roaring above me...
u sure u wrote that yourself?? you're starting to sound like an author... -_-"
maybe he's a plagarising author... -_-"Originally posted by Simple_Bear:Maybe he is an aspiring author...
Haf some confidence in him...Originally posted by starblue:maybe he's a plagarising author... -_-"
he really sound like an author i know lah....Originally posted by Simple_Bear:Haf some confidence in him...
what, I wrote that myselfOriginally posted by starblue:erm... i wouldn't go running across the field with thunder roaring above me...
u sure u wrote that yourself?? you're starting to sound like an author... -_-"
wtf, I am very insulted, for my entire life I've always been trying to be creative, me plagiarising? the hell.Originally posted by starblue:he really sound like an author i know lah....
Originally posted by the.raven:wtf, I am very insulted, for my entire life I've always been trying to be creative, me plagiarising? the hell.
*the.raven casts an angry glare at the people who dared brand him a thief, instantly freezing their movements, for his gaze seems to look right into their very souls. In a single fluid movement of his hand, a knife appeared in the.raven's grip, and a subtle twist of the wrist sent the knife spinning towards the laughing Simple_Bear, and struck the stunned Bear in the throat, bringing forth a gurgling noise as the Bear gasped for air through his pierced windpipe but to no avail.the cold embrace of death found the Bear for the second time of the day. the.raven violently tucks the knife out of the corpse, bringing forth a stream of blood pouring out of the jugular. and stalks off into the shadows.*Originally posted by Simple_Bear:
ok, gimme some plot ideas u want.Originally posted by starblue:okok.. i apologise...
but i dun like the way u write... all descriptive nia... i like a plot....
you can do a sequel mah...Originally posted by the.raven:ok, gimme some plot ideas u want.
and for short story very hard to have plot, so thats why all descriptive, lol.
still as starblue the pony?Originally posted by starblue:you can do a sequel mah...
i like a romantic plot.
how bout starbue the princess?Originally posted by the.raven:with another pony?
sure.Originally posted by starblue:how bout starbue the princess?
Originally posted by the.raven:*the.raven casts an angry glare at the people who dared brand him a thief, instantly freezing their movements, for his gaze seems to look right into their very souls. In a single fluid movement of his hand, a knife appeared in the.raven's grip, and a subtle twist of the wrist sent the knife spinning towards the laughing Simple_Bear, and struck the stunned Bear in the throat, bringing forth a gurgling noise as the Bear gasped for air through his pierced windpipe but to no avail.the cold embrace of death found the Bear for the second time of the day. the.raven violently tucks the knife out of the corpse, bringing forth a stream of blood pouring out of the jugular. and stalks off into the shadows.*
ok. make sure it's good... if not.... ignore you forever...Originally posted by the.raven:sure.
I'm kinda tired now, I'll write it when I'm feeling better k?
what fear of god?Originally posted by Lance_han:
descriptive,but doesnt put the fear of god into thsoe readin it
Originally posted by rainee:this thread become like creative writing thread ah?
Originally posted by the.raven:*the.raven casts an angry glare at the people who dared brand him a thief, instantly freezing their movements, for his gaze seems to look right into their very souls. In a single fluid movement of his hand, a knife appeared in the.raven's grip, and a subtle twist of the wrist sent the knife spinning towards the laughing Simple_Bear, and struck the stunned Bear in the throat, bringing forth a gurgling noise as the Bear gasped for air through his pierced windpipe but to no avail.the cold embrace of death found the Bear for the second time of the day. the.raven violently tucks the knife out of the corpse, bringing forth a stream of blood pouring out of the jugular. and stalks off into the shadows.*
I thought I told u i'm not old enough to go MMOriginally posted by Gackt247:Ah death.. so u wanna go outing on Sat evening or not? To MM.. organised by the Bear.. i might be turning up..