poem

• starblue

  20 Sep 05, 00:24

  tai4 duo1 fu4 dan1 dei3 zi4 ji3 bei1 fu4
  shang1 xin1 nan2 guo4 ye3 yi4 ge4 ren2 ku1
  shi4 shang4 shi4 fou3 you3 ren2 hui4 zai4 hu1
  wei1 xiao4 de4 wo3 dao4 di3 you3 duo1 gu1 du2
• alexkusu

  20 Sep 05, 00:27

  Translations for potatoes and bananas will be:
  
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• BabyLover

  20 Sep 05, 00:28

  u did tt urself? nice...
• ppinkpponk

  20 Sep 05, 00:31

  wow
• Nelstar

  20 Sep 05, 00:33

  Originally posted by starblue:

  tai4 duo1 fu4 dan1 dei3 zi4 ji3 bei1 fu4
  shang1 xin1 nan2 guo4 ye3 yi4 ge4 ren2 ku1
  shi4 shang4 shi4 fou3 you3 ren2 hui4 zai4 hu1
  wei1 xiao4 de4 wo3 dao4 di3 you3 duo1 gu1 du2

  Too many negative lift must my self back lift.
  Hurt heart hard cross also one person cry
  World up is not have people will again care
  Small smile that me really got how lone self?
  
  
  
  Sorry but can't help trying to cheer up the rest who're reading.
• starblue

  20 Sep 05, 00:41

  too many a burden upon my shoulders
  broken yet alone and silently i tear
  is there a soul in this world who cares and bothers
  to see the lonely me buried beneath my cheer
• Nelstar

  20 Sep 05, 00:42

  Originally posted by starblue:

  tai4 duo1 fu4 dan1 dei3 zi4 ji3 bei1 fu4
  shang1 xin1 nan2 guo4 ye3 yi4 ge4 ren2 ku1
  shi4 shang4 shi4 fou3 you3 ren2 hui4 zai4 hu1
  wei1 xiao4 de4 wo3 dao4 di3 you3 duo1 gu1 du2

  Proper translation for our non-chinese readers..
  
  Too many burdens for one to bear,
  Even in sadness and hurt does one cry alone.
  Who in this world would have cared,
  Though smiling, I was in fact lonely?
• alexkusu

  20 Sep 05, 00:44

  The Poem Wars has begun
• Nelstar

  20 Sep 05, 00:45

  Originally posted by alexkusu:

  The Poem Wars has begun

  I was just bored..
  
  
• The Emperor

  20 Sep 05, 09:57

  bed front moon bright bright
  so is floor white white
  look up see moon moon
  look down see home home
  
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  chuang2 qian2 ming2 yue4 guang1
  yu2 shi4 di4 shang4 shuang1
  ju3 tou2 wang4 ming2 yue4
  di1 tou2 si1 gu4 xiang1
  
  
• ^HaRu^

  20 Sep 05, 12:25

  can put in Tang Shi San Bai Shou??
• Cinderella.

  20 Sep 05, 15:17

  wow. i can never write chinese poems. i tried once, and it was catastrophe. but why write such a sad poem?
• alexkusu

  20 Sep 05, 15:43

  I got one poem too! That i thought of while walking under the cherry blossom trees... sigh.. i used my cp....deleted tiaw
• crazy monkey

  20 Sep 05, 16:20

  Originally posted by starblue:

  too many a burden upon my shoulders
  broken yet alone and silently i tear
  is there a soul in this world who cares and bothers
  to see the lonely me buried beneath my cheer

  you very stress issit ? come i saya you
• CoolMyth

  20 Sep 05, 17:06

  
  
  Damn good poem.....touching also.....