After finish whole thing then check.Originally posted by dibilo:vocab not bad. check grammar.
Sure hit 3k words lol!Originally posted by dibilo:vocab not bad. check grammar.
you have laid the background. maybe you can tell us something like what he sees in greater detail instead of just cold and dark. also how he feels after waking up, hungry? scared? What actions did he do to attend to these needs. Also tell us what did the butler do after bringing him here, the motives etc.
Like that also can ah.Originally posted by unclebutcher:something to note: no such word as "stucked". should be "i'm stuck"
I do liao. Then like no head no tail.Originally posted by eagle:practice summary
compo? omg... i thought you were writing a short story.Originally posted by Xephone_xenon:I do liao. Then like no head no tail.
The title is "The frightened child"
Somehow too obssessed with the topic and like writing story liao.Originally posted by dibilo:compo? omg... i thought you were writing a short story.