Acrostic Poem for Someone
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Making a difference to my life,
Illuminating the crimosn sky,
Surfing across up high,
Saving the boring night.
Thinking of you made me breathless,
Igniting my heart flameless,
No end is my thoughts of you,
Yank me close to you. -
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Waaaahh.
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To answer your question Miss Tiny,
Cyber Imagination
Deep in the tunnels of my mind,
images abound,
Silky Hair and Sparkling eyes,
tempt me like the devil.
Was that pair of eyes yours?
I sure hope it is,
for none charmed me like it did.
Words flow like streams of clouds,
into my mind they went.
fogging my thoughts no end.
A vision is finally form,
and how beautiful you look.
I pondered, if this was you,
but why the heck I care?
This is how I want you,
and how you will to me.
Till we meet shall it perish,
or maybe it will stay.
"Nonetheless" I told myself,
you are beautiful this way. -
did u write all these urself??
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Originally posted by Miss Tiny:
did u write all these urself??
Why would you doubt it? Many have copied my work, but I have never copied others.
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i believe u then
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Dive into my heart please
Always being difficult to get
Infect me with a disease call caring please
Sinful, I have been but it was all worth it for you.
Until the day comes, I'll still wait for you.
Kindly there for you
Ending the journey to attain your love
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Kill me with somethingUnified me with the bodies of those you have killed as well
No matter what, please keep my heart to yourself
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Originally posted by Daisuke-kun:
Dive into my heart please
Always being difficult to get
Infect me with a disease call caring please
Sinful, I have been but it was all worth it for you.
Until the day comes, I'll still wait for you.
Kindly there for you
Ending the journey to attain your love
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Kill me with somethingUnified me with the bodies of those you have killed as well
No matter what, please keep my heart to yourself
Wlau, Dai, now i know Y u got so many flings...
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simi flings
my relationships are not flings
they are blueprints for my future life
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Underaged kids onli can have flings.........
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Originally posted by Callan:
Igniting my heart flamelessuhh...
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Originally posted by thehappybunny:
uhh...
what's wrong?
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igniting my heart flameless....isn't it like a one step forwards and one step back kinda thing?
igniting a fire, yet when you use flameless...
oh never mind, just some opinion on my side.
props for the poems -
Originally posted by thehappybunny:
igniting my heart flameless....isn't it like a one step forwards and one step back kinda thing?
igniting a fire, yet when you use flameless...
oh never mind, just some opinion on my side.
props for the poemsIt is very much an oxymoron. When you ignite something, you cause something to burn, normally with fire. But in this case, the heart actually got ignited without a flame. IT represents a state of confusion and wonder, a palpitating heart filled with excitment ready to explode.
In acrostics, you are only given a few sentences to express alot. Thus to preserve the poetic nature of the work, the feelings in the poem are mostly hidden and not entirely exposed. It's not like you are writing a composition. The need for it to be linguistically beautiful is still there.
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see mine no problem
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Originally posted by Daisuke-kun:
see mine no problem
This is a open forum and I hate to be marking your essay. (Note the word essay.) But expressions towards poetry should be started young and thus I should not be dousing thy flames.
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Originally posted by Callan:
This is a open forum and I hate to be marking your essay. (Note the word essay.) But expressions towards poetry should be started young and thus I should not be dousing thy flames.
my essay at the Hideout arh?
dat 1 is plain rubbish that i wrote lar
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Woah... is this a love poem??
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Originally posted by Nata|ie:
Woah... is this a love poem??
It's just something to burn my braincells since they are overwhelming me at night.
Nothing much but a little something to make a pretty face smile.
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Originally posted by Callan:
It's just something to burn my braincells since they are overwhelming me at night.
Nothing much but a little something to make a pretty face smile.
That's nice... :) -
Heh...reminded me how the bf and i exchange poems
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Originally posted by fairlady_xoxo:
Heh...reminded me how the bf and i exchange poems
Wa!!!! So romantic.. kekeke -
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Originally posted by fairlady_xoxo:
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