[openBVE] Fictional : North South Xpress [WDB - WCT] (OH)
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If you want you can release it. I mean the train.
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Okay, I've tried the NSX, and I have very some comments that would hopefully help you improve on the route.
Firstly, I must say that proofreading is a very important role in the determination of your work. Your notice on the board states, "Some tracks are removed and we will replace the better tracks with the older tracks." This sentence, when interpreted correctly, will mean that you will replace the good-condition tracks with old tracks. This doesn't make sense. Do correct this error. Other than a few other spelling and grammar mistakes here and there, things should be fine. :)
Your electronic displays which are from Michelle's Demoroute1 require some editing. They look as though they're floating in mid-air, and yeah, I did laugh out a little on it, because they look very cute. :P Try building some supports, maybe from the roof, so that the displays can be hung on them.
Once again, the displays, you have to texture your message properly. The message is very stretched, which means that things scroll by very fast and then people can't read it properly. Use SetTextureCoordinates to edit your message.
Lastly, your faregates are simply from my Airport Express Line and replaced with some wood texture, I guess. Somehow I can look through the 'boxes', something doesn't seem right.
Other than that, I believe your route is on it's way to success, just try harder. Try creating more of your own objects and add them properly into the route. If you need any other help, you can always approach us, the developers, and we'll try to help you. :D
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Originally posted by Funkymark4211:
Bugs:
—WoodBridge Station—
‘Announce’ is spelled as ‘Annouce’, ‘Inconvenience’ is spelled as ‘Inconvenice’ at the WoodBridge closed stationUpstairs the viaducts or walls thingy got no tracks
Only 1 platform has the overhead scrolling text
GTM machine is on the track
The bus is parked at the wrong way in the route.
Tracks stopped at somewhere and did not continue
—Valley Point Station—
.sta command was coded too late when stoppingThe lift is so near to the fare gates
Walls in track0 did not continue after Valley Point Station
—Overall—
Rating: 3/10
Total Errors: 565—Comments—
Platforms are too narrow for C151, C651 and C751B.The stations are too near.
The platforms are suited for joey's Nrtc312Okay , I will increase the length between these two stations.
I haven't coded the GTM machine.
I wanted to delete the bus but I keep on forgetting.
The Overhead scrolling text should be coded correctly as I tested the route.Just download again and then just extract the folder and play.
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Originally posted by Nickgoh45:
Okay, I've tried the NSX, and I have very some comments that would hopefully help you improve on the route.
Firstly, I must say that proofreading is a very important role in the determination of your work. Your notice on the board states, "Some tracks are removed and we will replace the better tracks with the older tracks." This sentence, when interpreted correctly, will mean that you will replace the good-condition tracks with old tracks. This doesn't make sense. Do correct this error. Other than a few other spelling and grammar mistakes here and there, things should be fine. :)
Your electronic displays which are from Michelle's Demoroute1 require some editing. They look as though they're floating in mid-air, and yeah, I did laugh out a little on it, because they look very cute. :P Try building some supports, maybe from the roof, so that the displays can be hung on them.
Once again, the displays, you have to texture your message properly. The message is very stretched, which means that things scroll by very fast and then people can't read it properly. Use SetTextureCoordinates to edit your message.
Lastly, your faregates are simply from my Airport Express Line and replaced with some wood texture, I guess. Somehow I can look through the 'boxes', something doesn't seem right.
Other than that, I believe your route is on it's way to success, just try harder. Try creating more of your own objects and add them properly into the route. If you need any other help, you can always approach us, the developers, and we'll try to help you. :D
Thanks. I will look into that.
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Okay, I've tried the NSX, and I have some comments that would hopefully help you improve on the route.
Errors:
(1) Something wrong with the system map... Please re-code it (The side of the stand, I saw i crushed map)
(2) I saw some viaducts with no tracks... (Which is the one which are undergoing works)
(3) Faregates too big... (Maybe you can resize it?)
(4) I saw some viaducts floating in mid-air... (Maybe you can lower it?)
(5) And one which I did laughed out a little: There is an OC at WoodBridge station...
(6) And one last one which Nickgoh has mentioned "Firstly, I must say that proofreading is a very important role in the determination of your work. Your notice on the board states, "Some tracks are removed and we will replace the better tracks with the older tracks." This sentence, when interpreted correctly, will mean that you will replace the good-condition tracks with old tracks. This doesn't make sense. Do correct this error. Other than a few other spelling and grammar mistakes here and there, things should be fine."Thats all. I may post more if i spot more errors...
Sure there will be some errors here and there since this is your first attempt on making a route... One thing i want to say: Good Try! =D
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OT: Why SGWiki still Database Error :(
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Originally posted by Bryanwee1:
Okay, I've tried the NSX, and I have some comments that would hopefully help you improve on the route.
Errors:
(1) Something wrong with the system map... Please re-code it (The side of the stand, I saw i crushed map)
(2) I saw some viaducts with no tracks... (Which is the one which are undergoing works)
(3) Faregates too big... (Maybe you can resize it?)
(4) I saw some viaducts floating in mid-air... (Maybe you can lower it?)
(5) And one which I did laughed out a little: There is an OC at WoodBridge station...
(6) And one last one which Nickgoh has mentioned "Firstly, I must say that proofreading is a very important role in the determination of your work. Your notice on the board states, "Some tracks are removed and we will replace the better tracks with the older tracks." This sentence, when interpreted correctly, will mean that you will replace the good-condition tracks with old tracks. This doesn't make sense. Do correct this error. Other than a few other spelling and grammar mistakes here and there, things should be fine."Thats all. I may post more if i spot more errors...
The one that really made me start laughing is the faregates. I've never seen faregates bigger than a full sized C151 before XD .
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Originally posted by Bngauw:
The one that really made me start laughing is the faregates. I've never seen faregates bigger than a full sized C151 before XD .
Okay , I will edit and release maybe during the holidays.
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Originally posted by Boylush:
Okay , I will edit and release maybe during the holidays.
The space between the track and the platform must be wider too!
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Originally posted by sni1996:
The space between the track and the platform must be wider too!
The train used is acutally a Nrtc312 and it is smaller.Therefore C151,C651 and C751B cannot fit into the platform and tracks
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I have made the faregates smaller.
What about these
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565 errors
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Originally posted by Boylush:
I have made the faregates smaller.
What about these
Too tall...
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Originally posted by Boylush:
I have made the faregates smaller.
What about these
You should release the route with a COMPATIBLE Train. If not, you'll get this bad remarks. The faregates are too high for the train. They can be fat, but the height is the problem.
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565 Errors
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544 from Track.B3D
21 from the Route.csv
I've changed the track.b3d to track.csv and found out that it's willis's long lost tracks.
Screenshot:
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I am uploading the train now.
I will implement 3rd rail system.
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1minute left
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Download @
http://www.mediafire.com/?ultfs6tba9ruckt
Original NRTC312
Enjoy!
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1st to try ... I think !
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Originally posted by sni1996:
1st to try ... I think !
Not really. The developers already have it. =p -
Comments
Likes: 1.The accelerating sound which sounds nice for the earlier part
2.Braking speed.
Dislikes:1The decelerating sound because it so high frequency or like scratching on a car or something like that.
2.Not much realism because the bottom of the train seems to be in conatct with the platform.
3. Automatic door open beacuse the stopping markers came late and even more,it hard to stop correctly because once reach 0km/h,the train door opens.So things to fix the stopping marker and have maual door open when reach 0km/h
Rating of the train:3/5
Rating of the route:2/5
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Originally posted by sni1996:
Comments
Likes: 1.The accelerating sound which sounds nice for the earlier part
2.Braking speed.
Dislikes:1The decelerating sound because it so high frequency or like scratching on a car or something like that.
2.Not much realism because the bottom of the train seems to be in conatct with the platform.
3. Automatic door open beacuse the stopping markers came late and even more,it hard to stop correctly because once reach 0km/h,the train door opens.So things to fix the stopping marker and have maual door open when reach 0km/h
Rating of the train:3/5
Rating of the route:2/5
Actually it did not came in contact with the bottom of the train. I programmed it so that the train carriage is just above the platform.
I will implement no. 3
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I am going to use willis Ewl tracks with the third rail and when the third rail reaches a station , The third rail goes under the platform.
@joeyfjj can i edit the exterior of the Nrtc312 for my WLRT? ( Woodbridge Light Rail Transit)
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I have edited the faregates. What about these.
This is a sneak peek in the next release
It is the tracks .
I used willis ewl tracks.
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Originally posted by sni1996:
Comments
Likes: 1.The accelerating sound which sounds nice for the earlier part
2.Braking speed.
Dislikes:1The decelerating sound because it so high frequency or like scratching on a car or something like that.
2.Not much realism because the bottom of the train seems to be in conatct with the platform.
3. Automatic door open beacuse the stopping markers came late and even more,it hard to stop correctly because once reach 0km/h,the train door opens.So things to fix the stopping marker and have maual door open when reach 0km/h
Rating of the train:3/5
Rating of the route:2/5
Umm. If you knew how to use train editor, you can save time for Boylush so he can work on his route. You can change the Automated doors to Manual.