<Irish Coffee> the song that i have composed. Feedback?

• venn

  19 Apr 05, 00:22

  http://www.popiano.net/dvbbs/UpLoadFile/20054171843851738.mid
  
  this is the first time i compose a song, title is Irish Coffee...
  give some feedback. thx.
• auringedotcom

  19 Apr 05, 00:31

  Alright, nice soothing track.
  
  /knows nothing about music
• venn

  19 Apr 05, 00:34

  haha.. ok thx thx.. more feedbacks plz.
• FireIce

  19 Apr 05, 12:21

  me like baileys with coffee
  bery good concoction to keep awake when studying for exams
• shadowlunar

  19 Apr 05, 12:50

  Ok, here's my view. Since it's just a piano solo, you have to add a bit more substance to make the music more rich. Tempo is a bit too fast, makes me feel you're rushing it through in certain portions. Try to emphasize more on the repeated chorus with slight variants.
• venn

  23 Apr 05, 02:20

  http://www.popiano.net/dvbbs/UpLoadFile/20054231453714729.mid
  this is the edited version..
  care to compare the previous and this version??
• Lambo

  23 Apr 05, 02:47

  hi wat piano are u using?
• mad.obsessionz

  23 Apr 05, 02:55

  eh ya manx... wad piano u use??? or rather wad software??? i cant seem to record from mine... btw sound quite nice... but try to add a couple more low notes for contrast... plus i think u should play the low keys softer... or try to do layerin.... low keys put softer... sharp ones louder... will sound nicer....
• venn

  24 Apr 05, 09:39

  emm.. i am using normal piano to play la..
  but then transfter in computer then use acoustic grand piano.
• forfun_cash

  24 Apr 05, 09:43

  Far frm mark ..
• technoboy

  24 Apr 05, 10:00

  Nice... I'll give it a 7/10
• venn

  28 Apr 05, 00:31

  thx...
• SMAPLionHeart

  28 Apr 05, 00:33

  venn , are u that handsome guy on donald trump's friendster list?
  
  so handsome wor..
• browniebaobao

  28 Apr 05, 00:41

  The first 38 secs or so sounds a bit monotonus...Someone said soft on low keys, hard on high keys. I guess so ba...then it will bring out the mood. I'm not experienced or whatever..but I like to listen to instrumentals.
  
  If you ever heard from the CD , that's the type of mood that I'm referring to.
• antzie

  28 Apr 05, 00:42

  perhaps u can try a tempo abit slower than the 2nd 1. just a little will do.... admit that d 1st tempo is really too fast and like rushing all the way....
  
  is it meant to be a soothing piece? maybe u can try to smoothen out the accompaniment (bass clef). sounds abit rigid. choppy.... edgy.... dono hw to explain... just missing of some linkage.... smoothness in the line.... Melody is ok.
  
  or or... u can try some variations in ur timing or tempo....
  
  hee... just my own personal views... might be craps har... kekeke....
• venn

  29 Apr 05, 22:55

  thx for ur feedbacks.. nola.. it's not crap.
  em. ya i am in donald's list. haha.. not handsome la.