A Child's Composition

• BabyTea

  14 Oct 06, 09:29

  hk censorship board will need to review all the drama n games again
• Ito_^

  14 Oct 06, 09:31

  Colourless should be invisible ba?
• huiz

  14 Oct 06, 10:02

  to think the teacher still marks the compo until so wu-seh.
• Phoebie

  14 Oct 06, 12:33

  Originally posted by huiz:

  to think the teacher still marks the compo until so wu-seh.

  I think she had a hard time going through and marking it
• JJxJJ

  14 Oct 06, 12:43

  
• gd4u

  14 Oct 06, 17:56

  Originally posted by Phoebie:

  I think she had a hard time going through and marking it

  IN SG ... it would just be ...one big cross .. the only comments are "Out of Point" ....
• Phoebie

  14 Oct 06, 19:06

  Originally posted by gd4u:

  IN SG ... it would just be ...one big cross .. the only comments are "Out of Point" ....

  And maybe read to the whole class
• Darkness_hacker99

  14 Oct 06, 19:49

  If I write this compo and give it to my teacher, he will really use AK-47 and Divine Dragon to kill me.
• Phoebie

  14 Oct 06, 19:52

  Originally posted by Darkness_hacker99:

  If I write this compo and give it to my teacher, he will really use AK-47 and Divine Dragon to kill me.

  
• toyota-corolla

  14 Oct 06, 19:57

  Originally posted by Darkness_hacker99:

  If I write this compo and give it to my teacher, he will really use AK-47 and Divine Dragon to kill me.

  
  
  my teacher? will just tell my parents, to ban me from using com and watching all kung fu television show.
• Phoebie

  14 Oct 06, 20:02

  Originally posted by toyota-corolla:

  
  
  my teacher? will just tell my parents, to ban me from using com and watching all kung fu television show.

  so good that time many years ago one of the Composition I use singlish and she go read out to the whole class
• aku1b0d0

  14 Oct 06, 20:04

  Originally posted by Darkness_hacker99:

  If I write this compo and give it to my teacher, he will really use AK-47 and Divine Dragon to kill me.

  probably have to do handstand and read the essay at the same time. screw the guy who told my teacher im a bboy t('-' t)
• Phoebie

  14 Oct 06, 22:32

  Originally posted by aku1b0d0:

  probably have to do handstand and read the essay at the same time. screw the guy who told my teacher im a bboy t('-' t)

  what's a bboy?
• mikecola

  14 Oct 06, 22:35

  Originally posted by Phoebie:

  what's a bboy?

  break dancerrrrrrrr
• Phoebie

  14 Oct 06, 23:00

  Originally posted by mikecola:

  break dancerrrrrrrr

  what's a break dancer?
• browniebaobao

  14 Oct 06, 23:01

  wah the student knows how to write japanese wor!
• kaobeikaobu

  14 Oct 06, 23:11

  how to kill an ass?
• Phoebie

  14 Oct 06, 23:13

  Originally posted by browniebaobao:

  wah the student knows how to write japanese wor!

  
• aku1b0d0

  14 Oct 06, 23:15

  Originally posted by Phoebie:

  what's a break dancer?

  a dance that wud break anything in 1 meter radius.
• Phoebie

  14 Oct 06, 23:19

  Originally posted by aku1b0d0:

  a dance that wud break anything in 1 meter radius.

  
• technoboy

  14 Oct 06, 23:26

  Wah... The chinese so chim! I can't even read some of the words...
• striderz_o405

  14 Oct 06, 23:28

  if this compo were to be marked by a SG english teacher she will be "impressed"
• 798

  14 Oct 06, 23:31

  i doubt tis compo was kid's work. some of the words are very chime.
  
  nonetheless i am laughing to tear reading it.
• Phoebie

  14 Oct 06, 23:40

  ya lor the chinese is written using fang ti zi which I don't know how to write
• 798

  14 Oct 06, 23:42

  but if it is really the kid's work, have to give full credit for his creativeness.