Hi... I just did a poem which i would like to share and probably hope to get some feedback about how good or bad it may be... So well, if you don't mind reading... Here it is...
I translate the gist of the poem into english for those who couldn't understand chinese since i hope that they too can see the picture i'm trying to portrait.... PS: Sorry for the bad translation...
"As the wind blow gently against the petals of the flowers,
I sat in an inn seeping wine and admiring how beautiful the moon is tonight,
My memories of you invoked by the fabuleous poems of others...
I drank down all my sorrows like it was mere wine,
And the silence of the night only reminded me of the day you left,
The wine i poured deep into the autumn river is just like how my tears runs for you...
The petals of others flower began to drop as winter breaks but only to land into pairs,
And the petals of the peony flower withered not because of my love for you is lost,
It had only been frozen forever just like you in my memory..."Thanks for reading... =)
