KAOZ WHY LIKE THAT!? WHAT TO DO!!???
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Wah in the evening hor... joggin.. you try before!!??? I was jogging by the road side pavement leh... wah the sky alittle bit going to dark liao.... coz it is like blue color like that... jogging and joggin enjoying the scenery and such.. Suddenly you wun believe one lor!!! Serious! A girl jog and over took me!!!... So funny sia..
I try to act manly leh cannot lose to girl mah... over took her with a smile... then she overtook me again... What strong and competitive girl... I like! Not before long I over took her again... then she over took me again! .....ok Ok this time I mean business liao. No play play liao. I run faster and overtook her in a short distant..
Wah liew quite tired leh and panting... purposely don't ler her overtook me... and she did... Basket RUN SO FAST FOR WHAT!!! Arrrrgghhh EH I am man leh.. can give face abit or not!!?? I got male ego one leh!!! I ran faster and overtook her again... basket she is fast also lor.. and now she is even more faster and overtook me... AAARRGGgghghhh OK this time really really one liao. No give face one!! Must win if not go sgforum people will luff at me one! : ( Basket I run the fastest of faster as I could.. BUt eventually she still managed to over took me...
OEI can don't overtake me or not!!! I give her my very gan ko (unbearable) face somehow with alittle bit of beggin expression like that... she give me a even more gan ko face!!! Basket gan ko then don't run so fast lah!!! This time I really really really don't care liao must win!!! I serious one! I ran and tries to overtook her... wah really fast that kind like bullet train..!!! But already very super tired liao and out of breath!
BASKET I DON"T CARE ANYMORE ... *Pant*... *pant* I GOING TO WIN LIAO!!! DIE DIE ALSO MUST WIN THIS TIME AR!!! I RUNNING ALONE LEH!!! WHY WANT TO RACE ME!!!!???? I AM MAN LEH!! GIVE CHANCE LAH!! I DON"T CARE!! I DON"T CARE!! I DON"T CARE ALREADY!!!.... Where is she!? I turned back there was no one... except for a toilet door shutting up.
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Suddenly I'm sucked to the ground. There I was outside the toilet door waiting for Melissa. It must had been my hallucination again, one of its most extreme kind which I had so empowered from birth. We just finished our dinner as she headed to the ladies. I turned and observe my neighboring scene, another two other man whom obviously reason the same purpose as I am stood here before the humbling door to hidden femininities.
But unlike my twin acquaintances, I had something in me that weights me to great anxiety. As I stood silently awaiting Melissa....
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Can try to summarise your story & you mentioned to be continued so there's even more longer parts to come
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I am laughing at Banzie because he lose to a girl..
/points at banzie and laugh..
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still don't understand the moral of the story.
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I am laughing at Banzie because he lose to a girl..
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x2Originally posted by Darkness_hacker99:I am laughing at Banzie because he lose to a girl..
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The first part of the story is separate and yet also linked to the second part...Originally posted by SMRT Buses:Can try to summarise your story & you mentioned to be continued so there's even more longer parts to come
Hmmmm.. Ok alittle confusing.. maybe second part you'll understand better...
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some gals their stamina very good one. i think they r athelic, it's no shame losing to them.
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Yeah, plz use the K.I.S.S methodOriginally posted by banzie:The first part of the story is separate and yet also linked to the second part...
Hmmmm.. Ok alittle confusing.. maybe second part you'll understand better...
Trying new writing style...
Let me know if it fails...
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That's mean.Originally posted by ^tamago^:I am laughing at Banzie because he lose to a girl..
/points at banzie and laugh..
Its not nice to laugh at the disadvantaged.
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welcome bac banzie
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hmm not bad la. but ur choice of words i think got no link leh. like the 'one of its most extreme kind which I had so empowered from birth'. means what ah. u baby dat time oreadi gt dis 'power' isit?
borderline pass i tink. 60% la -
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mean I got the power to suddenly for no reason hullucinate and transform into another world doing a totally diffferent thing since I am a baby...Originally posted by cApitaland:hmm not bad la. but ur choice of words i think got no link leh. like the 'one of its most extreme kind which I had so empowered from birth'. means what ah. u baby dat time oreadi gt dis 'power' isit?
borderline pass i tink. 60% la -
Thanks!!!Originally posted by gobez14:welcome bac banzie -
part 1 funny, part 2 sian..
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yea part 2 is the back bone of the story... its supposed to be serious... and the story will build up slowly...Originally posted by Cool-gal:part 1 funny, part 2 sian.. -
wah shiok i can use to fantasize..Originally posted by banzie:mean I got the power to suddenly for no reason hullucinate and transform into another world doing a totally diffferent thing since I am a baby...
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+1 and ban
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OU XIANG!
BANZIE ROX!
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train harder outrun her next time.
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haha interesting~
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edit off the part 2 la.Originally posted by banzie:yea part 2 is the back bone of the story... its supposed to be serious... and the story will build up slowly...
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