Song composing
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I'd just composed this song in school while i was daydreaming
Hope to get your opinions on it.
The title is Lovelorn
Like a diamond, Without its sparkle
Within its shattered soul..
Once beautiful, the subject of envy..
Now, encased like a broken dream,Shattered unto you.
So take my hands and let us soar to our dreams and goals
Oh my beloved soul,Lovelorn as it is...longing for you.
As each day passes.....with a painful cry...My heart in weariness.. Pines for you...
With a thousand Angels,behind me, a dawning soul of procreation awakens.
With the arms of justice and a ray of hope..
My heart, will forever and ever..... Long for you..... -
i duno about song composing . bud i can see effort
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So how is it? Touching?
I was thinking about ex lah what else
Then dunno this song come into my mind
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What pines , great job very touching song except for pines part i liak bo kiu ...Originally posted by Evolution IX MR:I'd just composed this song in school while i was daydreaming
Hope to get your opinions on it.
The title is Lovelorn
Like a diamond, Without its sparkle
Within its shattered soul..
Once beautiful, the subject on envy..
Now, encased like a broken dream,Shattered unto you.
So take my hands and let us soar to our dreams and goals
Oh my beloved soul,Lovelorn as it is...longing for you.
As each day passes.....with a painful cry...My heart in weariness.. Pines for you...
With a thousand Angels,behind me, a dawning soul of procreation awakens.
With the arms of justice and a ray of hope..
My heart, will forever and ever..... Long for you..... -
Nv saw tt , very touching good job ^^Originally posted by Evolution IX MR:So how is it? Touching?
I was thinking about ex lah what else
Then dunno this song come into my mind 
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Means, in despair.Longing for the personOriginally posted by yong93:What pines , great job very touching song except for pines part i liak bo kiu ... -
Oic , thx for info , cheem worrs ... ^^
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the key is making it simple as possible.. too cheem wil seem like a poem
and its good to work with a musical instrument -
I trying to create a melody..
Classical melody or jazz is better? -
classic
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I also dunno how create a melody for it
I hab only a acoustic guitar -
rap it like 50cents
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then u must drive ur name car and rap in it with girls around you ^^Originally posted by de_middle:rap it like 50cents -
nice
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The song?Originally posted by WiNtEr'SkiLL:nice
Could you suggest what type of melody could i add to the song? -
i tried to play a melody on my piano using that lyrics.. the only words that i found sutable were "like a diamond"
the rest are too long -
So its best without melody?
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i mean.. your sentences are too long.. maybe you should have a melody in mind before you start composing the lyricsOriginally posted by Evolution IX MR:So its best without melody? -
Anymore comments?I will try to tune up the song and melody as well as edit lyrics.Will come up with more songs once i have inspiration
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no girls want u, where will u get ur inspiration?
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the key is not to be peotic.. simple phrase like
was it you who spoke the words
that things would happen
but not to me
already very nice liao, btw thats the starting part of you and i both by jason mraz -
i composed music but no lyrics one
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So are you going to compose the song "Girls are too spoilt"? ha ha ha!
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Not bad, but the end dont rhyme together will sound very wierd leh. And try not to use ... use .