What pines , great job very touching song except for pines part i liak bo kiu ...Originally posted by Evolution IX MR:I'd just composed this song in school while i was daydreaming
Hope to get your opinions on it.
The title is Lovelorn
Like a diamond, Without its sparkle
Within its shattered soul..
Once beautiful, the subject on envy..
Now, encased like a broken dream,Shattered unto you.
So take my hands and let us soar to our dreams and goals
Oh my beloved soul,Lovelorn as it is...longing for you.
As each day passes.....with a painful cry...My heart in weariness.. Pines for you...
With a thousand Angels,behind me, a dawning soul of procreation awakens.
With the arms of justice and a ray of hope..
My heart, will forever and ever..... Long for you.....
Nv saw tt , very touching good job ^^Originally posted by Evolution IX MR:So how is it? Touching?
I was thinking about ex lah what else![]()
Then dunno this song come into my mind![]()
Means, in despair.Longing for the personOriginally posted by yong93:What pines , great job very touching song except for pines part i liak bo kiu ...
then u must drive ur name car and rap in it with girls around you ^^Originally posted by de_middle:rap it like 50cents![]()
The song?Originally posted by WiNtEr'SkiLL:nice![]()
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i mean.. your sentences are too long.. maybe you should have a melody in mind before you start composing the lyricsOriginally posted by Evolution IX MR:So its best without melody?![]()