What do you think of this poem?

• AMystery

  22 Dec 08, 03:36

  Breathe

  Opposing of  what should be,
  I breathe to be breathless.
  I stand still to run
  and
  I am silent to speak. 

  Decipher my actions and understand my soul.
  See through my facades.
  Look at me.

  I'm different.

  Would you still stay?

  By AMystery

• lianamaster

  23 Dec 08, 21:47

  I dun catch it.

• Ed11790

  23 Dec 08, 21:48

  poems are really hard to understand for people like me.......i read and read and read it over and over and over and i cant remember what i read about
• tr@nsp0rt_F3V3R

  23 Dec 08, 21:51

  Originally posted by Ed11790:

  poems are really hard to understand for people like me…....i read and read and read it over and over and over and i cant remember what i read about

  
  +1

• rey619

  23 Dec 08, 21:52

  Eggs

  Opposing of  what should be,
  You suck eggs to be eggless..
  You suck eggs to run
  and
  You are silent

  Decipher my eggs and understand sucking eggs.
  See through my egg tray.
  Look at my eggs.

  I'm different.

  Would you still suck eggs?

• lianamaster

  23 Dec 08, 22:55