Rate pls.

• VL

  7 Jul 09, 10:07

  

   

  1.Comments.

  2.Rate out of ten.

  3.Improvement& Recommendation

  Thanks.

• mh2

  7 Jul 09, 10:38

  cant see clearly. post a high res pic pls .

• FireIce

  7 Jul 09, 11:56

  wat is that?

  jajabing?

• gunner77

  7 Jul 09, 15:06

  the gal too fat

  6/10

  use a darker shade for the hair

• MeowMe

  7 Jul 09, 15:46

  5/10

• VL

  7 Jul 09, 18:03

  Ok. Got any books to recommend or any link on portraits drawing.

• Fantagf

  7 Jul 09, 18:19

  Where Fire?  Fire come, you in good position to rate.

• Forbiddensinner

  7 Jul 09, 19:51

  Originally posted by VL:

  Ok. Got any books to recommend or any link on protraits drawing.

  http://drawsketch.about.com/od/drawingportraits/Portrait_Drawing_Drawing_Faces.htm

  http://www.ratemydrawings.com/tutorials/portrait/410-idiots_guide_to_drawing_facial_expressions.html

• cyberr1981

  7 Jul 09, 21:31

  amateurish.... :lol: :lol: :lol:
• gigabyte14

  7 Jul 09, 21:34

  better than me

  lol

• VL

  7 Jul 09, 21:36

  Originally posted by Forbiddensinner:

  http://drawsketch.about.com/od/drawingportraits/Portrait_Drawing_Drawing_Faces.htm

  http://www.ratemydrawings.com/tutorials/portrait/410-idiots_guide_to_drawing_facial_expressions.html

  
  Thanks !

• VL

  7 Jul 09, 23:15

  Originally posted by FireIce:

  wat is that?

  jajabing?

  
  What is jajabing?

• Jianye

  7 Jul 09, 23:18

  How come got no legs..where are the shoes and socks?

• Deino

  7 Jul 09, 23:19

  go library...got alot of sketch books for you to borrow...

  your work looks like a primary school kid's no offence....but everyone has to start from somewhere right?

   

• VL

  7 Jul 09, 23:32

  Originally posted by Deino:

  go library...got alot of sketch books for you to borrow...

  your work looks like a primary school kid's no offence....but everyone has to start from somewhere right?

   

  
  It's ok . Haha , my friends also said that . 

• bananaCoke

  7 Jul 09, 23:52

  what is she hiding behind her back? tooth driller?

  i think your drawing is self taught so i suggest you better work hard and learn back from basics. you can improve by watching and drawing more. also can go deviantart dot com see wide range of works.

• Plastic Bag

  8 Jul 09, 00:53

  5

• VL

  8 Jul 09, 01:21

  Originally posted by bananaCoke:

  what is she hiding behind her back? tooth driller?

  i think your drawing is self taught so i suggest you better work hard and learn back from basics. you can improve by watching and drawing more. also can go deviantart dot com see wide range of works.

  
  I think your drawing is self taught.   -> Bingo ! 

• limywv

  8 Jul 09, 02:16

  
  

   

   

   

• Hello Kitty

  8 Jul 09, 02:40

  me anyhw oso can do betta.

   

• limywv

  8 Jul 09, 03:46

  
  

   

   

   

• Lorry`

  8 Jul 09, 04:20

  Originally posted by VL:

  

   

  1.Comments.

  2.Rate out of ten.

  3.Improvement& Recommendation

  Thanks.

  1. I dont think this is considered portrait drawing (as you have mentioned).. This is more like anime drawing to me..
  
  If you want to concentrate on portrait drawing, maybe you can remove the body and concentrate on the face first, that is, the facial features. The face here is too small, if you draw a face of a size like this, theres less concentration on the face. And also, the eyes seem to be weird, one is slanted.. and there is no blacks in the eyes, why?

  2. 5/10

  3. As above. And do more shading.

• la luce nella piazza

  8 Jul 09, 05:31

  not too great shakes dear. for one, the mask (?) is a little square.
• MasterMoogle

  8 Jul 09, 10:50

  Originally posted by limywv:

  wtf...that comment of yours extremely 穿心 leh...

  A more direct term will be arrogant

• PedoBear

  8 Jul 09, 12:39

  i think mine better