My Music Video idea(Storyboards) Please give me your feedbac

• Skychaos

  23 Aug 15, 23:25

  Hi peeps, my name is Ken and I am working on a school project to create a music video. Please give me feedbacks on my storyboards and ideas as part of my survey data collection assignment. I have a survey previously put up here in EDMW, it'd be nice if you could help complete it: https://www.surveymonkey.com/s/7LZLYTM

   

  This is the song i've chosen to base my project on: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HacRaenDOGc

  It is a C-pop, soft rock song that is written, composed and sang by the late Taiwanese singer 张雨生.

   

  Logline: Saved by a young man, the love-struck girl struggles to confess to the guy she loves and misses her opportunity. A present of love that was never delivered.

   

  Synopsis: A young secondary school girl is depressed looking down at a bow-tie in her hand on a gloomy raining afternoon. (Flashback of her story begins outside of a school when she is saved by her classmate from walking into the path of an oncoming car. She is grateful and after they part, she picks up the bow-tie that was dropped by the young man when he was trying to save her. After the incident, they got closer and become good friends in class. Their love for each other grows as they are hanging out together in school. She shies away from the boy every time he tries to get close to her and can only think about it in her bedroom playing with the bow-tie. Weeks after, she finally summons her courage and approach the guy after school on a rainy day. When she is about to confess by returning the bow-tie, she is interrupted by a girl from the other class and it turns out she has been going out with him recently. She is dumbfounded as rapid images of the past fills her mind revealing how she have missed her opportunities to the other girl.) The flashback ends when it transits into the current time (at the start of the video) where the bow-tie in her hand transforms into a butterfly and guides her vision into the sky above. The rain stopped and the sun shines through the clouds.

   

  The storyboards(Prototype):

  

  

  

  

  

  

  

  

  

  

  

  

  

   

  And here is a poster art i've put together using character and background arts courtesy of Emirri, Rzhevskaya and Skaotic.

  

   

  And some visual images from Rainie Yang's 雨爱 MV and �把刀's 那些年，我们一起追的女孩 used as reference for my music video.

  

  

   

  Thank you for reading it through. Last but not least, i have a few questions for the purpose of survey data collection. Please help by answering it in your replies below.

   

  1)Do you know the Singer 张雨生 or the Song ��结? Do you like the Song?

  2)Did the story relates to your experience or memories?

  3)Do you think that the emotions and feelings you get from the song matches the story?

  4)Did you think the distinctive use of different color mood for different scenes makes the storytelling more engaging?

  5)Would you recommend or share this MV to your friend?

   

  Thanks and Cheers :D

• FireIce

  24 Aug 15, 10:07

  u have an existing thread