Originally posted by shirurinu:
erm.... which part to u was draggy?
The part when he died and she returned to work and after the paper wheel in her house when she started counting down the date he'll be back.
The scriptwriter could actually lengthen the lovey dovey instead of having the effect of wind and paper plane flying about.
Why?
Because it will further develop the love story between two characters,
letting veiwers experience the impression of character's commitment - cannot live without one another kinda love.
Lengthening the love between two person and giving the death scene a sudden twist will be better. So that viewers can really feel the lost, not only in the love of female lead cast losing, but themselves losing their love ones. Hence, will win more sobby viewers!
- It's just psychological that a sudden twist always deepen the impression of viewers.
I would prefer if the script included other unseen scenes or dialogue in flashes 'Like Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless mind' during/after his death.
It'll bring about heartaches to viewers.
Eg. the scene he was shot...she held him and cried. *backgrd song played*
She screamed for ambulance,
she looked up to heaven and bkgrd dialogue
*He: What if i die before you marry me?
She: Who wants to marry you? I'll die a old heck...
He: If you don't want to marry me, i'll tickle you to your death!
She: Hey!!! Hahaha....i'll kick your as*!!! hahaha *laughing and fades*
Then few intimate moments which meant alot to her began float during those parts could be better then the swirling camera around her crying face. Kinda giddy after that...
Ps.
The second part somewhat reminds me of Fly Me to Polaris.
Questions -
What with her having a twin got to do with the script? I expected that part to develop more.
What does the other officer gunshot mean?
Why does the ending resemble so much like my sassy girl?
And i don't find the ending complete.....not satisfied at all.
Korean directors need to learn that, many times a unfinished ending is far more powerful then a completed.