didnt take time to read your post but i just feel like scolding a random person.. so here goes..Originally posted by mahai102:why are you all firing him for writing a good story? so what if his english isn't perfect? you want to read perfectly written erotic stories go buy your own fu.cking storybook lah...he post here you want to read, read, don't want to read go back & fu.ck your mother...no need pass all these negative comments...
people take the trouble to write & post at least say thank you...
to all you people posting negative comments about the threadstarter...go fu.ck your mother & come back post here about your f.ucking experience...cheebye kia!
Actually I reply you with mix feeling. I am also a follower of grimnar storys. I think he wrote great story with great English. There is no intention to compete with him but to add some colour to the BAR.Originally posted by alexkusu:this story is bullshit. Domestic Affair sounds more realistic
im not criticising your grammar..just your details and the flow of your story dont flow well or fit together nicely. Im not that meanOriginally posted by cowpeh:Actually I reply you with mix feeling. I am also a follower of grimnar storys. I think he wrote great story with great English. There is no intention to compete with him but to add some colour to the BAR.
Everytime when I receive negative reply and comment about my grammar after posting my story, I asked myself "Why did you dare to post your story when your English sucks?" But the urge to put up "My Story" when I have read some of the outstanding storys in the forums.
Anyway thank you all for your interest in reading and replying to my post. I will attempt to finish the last 2 part of the story so that I will do leave things unfinish.
Here goes...