Love story: Transition
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hehehe... ya this is a great way to see how the guys feel and think...
Yuhaier, thinking about publishing a book of short stories? -
Wait patiently lor...Originally posted by Simple_Bear:Great Story...
When is the next chapter coming...
When time is right I will continue writing.
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nice story
hope to see the next chapter out soon. -
I publish it here lor... easier.Originally posted by smudgey:hehehe... ya this is a great way to see how the guys feel and think...
Yuhaier, thinking about publishing a book of short stories?
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Erm...ok...but muz hurry up ho...Originally posted by Yunhaier:Wait patiently lor...
When time is right I will continue writing.
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I seriously don't know how you're gonna work everybody's names in
For your convenience, you can leave mine out. Don't worry
FeowFeowOriginally posted by Yunhaier:I publish it here lor... easier.
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haha...he's done it b4Originally posted by FeowFeow:I seriously don't know how you're gonna work everybody's names in
For your convenience, you can leave mine out. Don't worry
FeowFeow
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Erm, No need lah, I just want the next chapter of the story out quickly
FeowFeowOriginally posted by tripudio_mutatio:haha...he's done it b4 -
i more interested to your vamp story leh..
since havent complete ah?
very very very very very very long liao.. -
dum di dum di dum, still waiting..............
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HahAHhahahahahaHahahahahhahahaHaHahhaha!~!~!`Originally posted by SunRisE:i more interested to your vamp story leh..
since havent complete ah?
very very very very very very long liao.. 
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Chapter 10
It was one month ago since I last saw her on MSN.
She seemed very busyÂ… too busy in fact, to be online. Or maybe she is avoiding me because my mum probably told her mum something bad about me and Snowy got to know about them. Damn!
Ok, I promised to brush my teeth before consuming breakfast from today onwardsÂ… I promised I would not pee over the toilet seatsÂ… I promised to wash my hands after every toilet sessionÂ… I promised not to eat on my bedÂ…
Self delusion.
I should have guessed it; I am not the kind of guy for her. With looks like hers, how would she fall for someone as ordinary like me? Snowy probably have suitors, the length of the Macdonald’s Hello Kitty crazed-queue and I still wouldn’t be surprised. For a guy who doesn’t have much luck in love, doesn’t have the boy band look, doesn’t have much eloquence to sweet talk… isn’t rich… fare badly for his studies – WHAT kind of boyfriend could I sell myself to her?
Nothing.
I resisted the negative thoughts internally. Not that I could possibly help it, but in the midst of uncertainty and mixed messages, there was absolutely nothing I could hold on to believe and to make me think otherwise.
It was terrible. My most feared nightmare of having to remove my daily MSN routine away with her.
I dropped a few forwarded SMSes previously, but there wasnÂ’t any reply from her. I concluded that it was because she must have thought that there wasnÂ’t a need to reply forwarded SMSes personallyÂ… just like our forwarded emails.
I need to call her.
Hesitation and negativity is preventing me from doing it.
Why?
Why am I plucking the roses, when I know the thorns are there? Why must I deliberately scorch myself, when I know the fire is dangerous? Why must I loveÂ… when I know that hurt is inevitable?
But I refused to succumb to circumstances; I supposed I shouldnÂ’t believe in behavior without explanation. There are no smoke without fire - something must be wrong somewhere. I may have overlooked certain issue, without realizing it or there could be something affecting her emotionally.
I must get to the bottom of everything.
I dialed her mobile.
I reached her voicemail.
SighÂ… Maybe, I am right after all. She must have been avoiding me because she didnÂ’t want to lead me into thinking that I may have a chance with her, when in fact, there isnÂ’t one to begin with.
I can feel my vision getting watery.
Then my mobile vibrated and I almost got a shock.
‘Meet me at the park at 8 p.m.’
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Yun likes to keep readers in suspense hor.....
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ya she knows where are the Strategic "commercial break" points... heheheOriginally posted by browniebaobao:Yun likes to keep readers in suspense hor.....
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So dramatic..
but I like
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She is going to die/moving away/dont want see him anymore/die/die/die
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mayb something good will come out in the end ... twist n more twist ... mayb her ex bf come pester her .. wan patch , so she cannot tahan then patch back .. after tat she still think of him ... so wan to meet him ... then the ex come saw them .. so they fight .. fight halfway the ex heart attack die .. then they live happily ever after ...
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Originally posted by Saint`:mayb something good will come out in the end ... twist n more twist ... mayb her ex bf come pester her .. wan patch , so she cannot tahan then patch back .. after tat she still think of him ... so wan to meet him ... then the ex come saw them .. so they fight .. fight halfway the ex heart attack die .. then they live happily ever after ... summary?
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Originally posted by Yunhaier:
u do that often?
I promised I would not pee over the toilet seats -
dun laugh leh.. so when??Originally posted by Yunhaier:HahAHhahahahahaHahahahahhahahaHaHahhaha!~!~!`
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your short story very long leh.. -
erm.. this story reminds me of my younger days sia.. so innocent n pure boy boy feel.....
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Originally posted by zacken99:erm.. this story reminds me of my younger days sia.. so innocent n pure boy boy feel.....
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tao yan...Originally posted by SunRisE: ni xiao wo... -
ha, nice yunhaier, so far so good...
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So you are quite evil by now rite?Originally posted by zacken99:erm.. this story reminds me of my younger days sia.. so innocent n pure boy boy feel.....
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