Angel (An NSF Story)
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ok...i will try...Originally posted by Yunhaier:
Must learn to write your own, especially if it is your own story.
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well done bro...
ending is a little abrupt, if you don't mind comments.
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beautiful ending to another beautiful story
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Originally posted by jOhO:well done bro...
ending is a little abrupt, if you don't mind comments. 
how long has it been since you've posted in the forums... -
to give you guys a sense of hope..that not all girls are materialistic and money sucking individualsOriginally posted by Eternal-fire:Finally ended, hmmm why she rather choose a NS guy over a doctor? -
Originally posted by Yunhaier:
dis is the 2nd time i read ur story.
Yunhaier would want acknowledge and especially thank the following forumites, who have faithful followed this story:
[b]WrX_STi
Wah.... I think got more readers this time. Ok... Xie xie! Till the next story... see when I free lar.. tmd... shagged.
/me quickly count profit from sales of tickets.
Cheers[/b]
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Originally posted by jOhO:well done bro...
ending is a little abrupt, if you don't mind comments. Yeah no problem~
P.S: Wah rao! Been damn long since I saw your nick!
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i think i got average once a month lar... maybe once in two.. i still come in here once in a while.. but dunno most pple liow.. like u actually.. ahhah... sorree~~Originally posted by udontknowme:
how long has it been since you've posted in the forums...
yun: yeah glad that's u're still writing man, i dun have time for it anymore.
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This is so sweet..
I just discovered this thread and read it all in one go..
Throughout the (15 minutes?), i laughed, smiled and was touched by the ending at the end..
Who says NSFs can't have good endings huh?
Cheers For Yunnie~
We want more!! Encore Encore! -
when is the next story coming up? -
Yun ar.. Teng Jing Shu also became popular by writing stories in BBS (disucssion boards).
Then he was lucky, a publishing company wanted to publish his stories.
And erm, Ah square and Mooku, it's mentioned in TJS's book that im reading now.. that the movie is called (love letter) and the male lead was called Teng Jing Shu in the show.. but this author TJS only started writing 2 years later.. -
o.OOriginally posted by browniebaobao:Yun ar.. Teng Jing Shu also became popular by writing stories in BBS (disucssion boards).
Then he was lucky, a publishing company wanted to publish his stories.
And erm, Ah square and Mooku, it's mentioned in TJS's book that im reading now.. that the movie is called (love letter) and the male lead was called Teng Jing Shu in the show.. but this author TJS only started writing 2 years later.. -
Nice like anime.Originally posted by Yunhaier:Yunhaier would want acknowledge and especially thank the following forumites, who have faithful followed this story:
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En'
SoulFire21
Patrik
alexkusu
Sagara
browniebaobao
mhcampboy
praetor81
Devil1976
DeathEdge
StarPuppy
Beckhamagic
laurence82
kopiosatu
Hellraiza
martin_lim85
YI
angrynor
n3o1984
casshern
Simple_Bear
geodome
elektra
KeN3
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Bontakun
orange88
tripudio_mutatio
WrX_STi
^spidee^
tofushop193
beavan
S@mz_Rev0LuT|on
The Den
markzz
chanff8
LazerLordz
starExcaliblur
Eternal-fire
_n00b_
TwinTurbo_Supra
wallace82
pwnz0r
binZ
dar-lingz
nightsky87
nanren4ever
X-10A
G.I. Lim
freestyle
jenn_y
Purple_Nova
Pitot
yuko-ogura
seow
JerzZzzZ
NewAge
MooKu
zidane
missqi
M©+square
Magius
keithaaron
hobochua
rainee
coffeeortea
omegadevil
ruixd
tortoise55
Wah.... I think got more readers this time. Ok... Xie xie! Till the next story... see when I free lar.. tmd... shagged.
/me quickly count profit from sales of tickets.
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yea lor...Originally posted by Devil1976:Nice like anime. -
may i know when is the next story coming up??
i wish to read more about this...
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A little late but... Yeay~ Happy endings...Originally posted by Yunhaier:Yunhaier would want acknowledge and especially thank the following forumites, who have faithful followed this story:
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Wah.... I think got more readers this time. Ok... Xie xie! Till the next story... see when I free lar.. tmd... shagged.
/me quickly count profit from sales of tickets.
Cheers
Have to confess though, I disappeared around pg5 and just came back to finish the story... in one reading. Lucky me.
Nice story Yun~
Jia you, awaiting ur next story. -
can auntie yun write one where she expresses her love for ah lau?
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Originally posted by jOhO:i think i got average once a month lar... maybe once in two.. i still come in here once in a while.. but dunno most pple liow.. like u actually.. ahhah... sorree~~
yun: yeah glad that's u're still writing man, i dun have time for it anymore. jOhO!
I still recognise ur nick
*eavesdrops* Pity... I remember when u used to write... and it was so good too... 
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Originally posted by laurence82:can auntie yun write one where she expresses her love for ah lau?
This one I gotta see....
Someone pls PM me when(IF) it comes out? 
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Suddenly all the oldies start to play...
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I PM youOriginally posted by En':
This one I gotta see....
Someone pls PM me when(IF) it comes out? -
Originally posted by Devil1976:Suddenly all the oldies start to play...
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nice ending there...
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when is the next story??
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Thanks for the story Yunhaier, but I feel some of the dialogue in the final chapter is a little mechanical.