Love Story - Beautiful Blemish
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plsssssssss......... I really wish to know e ending.. it's so sad that it hurts...
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Originally posted by tek_koh:
Douglas lah.
[quote]Originally posted by starExcaliblur:
[b]Nice story and nice song, btw, who was the singer of the song ?[/quote
i think is yunhaier
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Douglas is guy leh.
not yunhaier lah.
Ah hoon, when are u going to intro Douglas to me?
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aww so sad.
typical of ur stories to have a sad ending leh, how come ar! -
how to see how many post le?
i checked the main page it says 200+
still got 1/2 to go to 400 leh..
omg.. i can't wait for the ending leh.. -
my condolences, how much longer do you have?Originally posted by Yunhaier:Probably my last story liao ma...
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@@ u serious of waiting post to be up ?
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nebermind... i spam post...! lol.. ending pls come la.. if not yunhaier will see alot of giraffes reading ur ending
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Originally posted by cApitaland:rating booster!
/me look left and right.
Who hah?
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Tao yan...Originally posted by browniebaobao:dun cry dun cry leh..
not pretty when u cry leh..
u want 500 replies har? lai lai, bbb help u~!
i believe guys who have been following ur story will give u the kind of response u want.
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/me pruss wan to hepch boost ratings
/me sits down and waits for last chapter -
Originally posted by browniebaobao:Douglas lah.
Douglas is guy leh.
not yunhaier lah.
Ah hoon, when are u going to intro Douglas to me? Douglas's SO is my jie mei; she will murder him and then murder me if I do that
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Pai seh; was been involved in some stage production, that's why don't have the time to log in. Wah seh, no 400 replies? Later Bus Forum take over AA how? As your mod, I must ensure that the KPI is met.
/me wondered if yunhaier should post final chapter or or not.
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You could pm me the final chapter for safekeeping in case something happens to you...
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PLS post the last chapter
Many supporters behind you waiting -
FINAL CHAPTER!!!
FINAL CHAPTER!!!
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B.U.M.P.
SPAM
B.U.M.P
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Still anticipating the last chapter
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159 more replies to go after mine!!
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Where's the last chapter?
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awwwww so sadOriginally posted by Yunhaier: Douglas's SO is my jie mei; she will murder him and then murder me if I do that
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i even transferred his to my MP3 Walkman.. -
Chapter 17 (Last Chapter)
It was almost three years since I last saw Rick. We never kept in contact because I told myself not to revisit this bitter-sweet chapter of my life. During the final time I saw him - we exchanged each otherÂ’s phone and deleted our numbers away mutually and swear never to commit to those digits into memories.
But every time when my mind started wandering restlessly and explored the memories I had with Rick, an uncontrollable urge to cry will seize me. I carried his Agnes B dog tag with me everyday – gradually, it became my amulet. I wore it with me every moment of my life since then, even during bath time.
It was an impossible thing – but the inability to tell him how much he meant to me is utterly tormenting. There wasn’t a time I could say anything – everything has been decided right from the start.
I could only follow how the flow of this plot has been fixed for me; there was no room for negotiation.
No prerogative for that.
Dad passed away from a heart attack. During his final moments, mum was still with him.
I started viewing my mum from very different perspective. Her love for dad was pretty much blinded and dumb, but at the very least, it was very real. Real enough to stand by him and brave through thick and thin.
It was only at his tomb, did mum revealed to story behind dadÂ’s degeneration.
‘Your dad wasn’t like this previously; he lost all his money in business when his friend in China swindled him. Then when he was in great debts, I was expecting you. Daddy suggested aborting the child as he felt that it will burden the family, but my I didn’t want to. We quarreled in the living room and your brother overheard everything. Not knowing the complete story, your brother grew hatred for your dad. Out of desperation, to resolve this heavy debt, I ended up sleeping with your dad’s friend…’
Mum couldnÂ’t continue anymore; her words with choking as she was raining tears. Upon revelation, I felt the immerse stab of pain as I shook my head in disbelief. Then, for the first time in my life, we huddled and cry together as mother and daughter.
‘Dad went hysterical when he found out; I don’t blame him for venting his frustration and anger on over these years. He probably thought that I was cheap and stupid, that’s why I will never leave him even if he abuse me.’
‘Why didn’t you tell me beforehand?’
‘Ivy… do you think that mum is cheap?’
I did not know what to reply; I just shook my head profusely.
‘No matter what happens, you will always be my mum…’
Over the years, I gradually realized that his appearance in my life stirred a human revolution; I quit smoking, never fought again, cut ties with my former gang mates and currently saving up for my diploma. Boss has also promoted me to a store supervisor and has also since raised my pay.
From an ah lian, I grew up to be a lady. And whenever I recalled about my childish past, I despised and hated those chapters of my life. I have always deemed the period as ‘before maturity’…Or at least, that was how it appeared to me so.
There was once when I flipped through the papers and I saw a news article about Chanel being sent to jail. She was caught rioting again, but this time, the tentacles of law have caught up with her. At that moment, I truly felt blessed because albeit I had a havoc past, fortunately, I didnÂ’t end like her.
If my past was a blemish; knowing Rick is probably the most beautiful part of my blemish. Perhaps love can indeed transform whatÂ’s unloving about us and our life into something dazzling - appearing like the only candlelight in midst of some engulfing, horrifying darkness.
I know this theory for sure as he is the only memory worth keeping during the bleakest moment of my life.
I reached for my amulet and smiled to myself – and I know there is more love than gratitude in my thoughts.
(The end)
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woot...nice nice
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simi?!! lidat only?
ah lian and Ah Rick never blossom into love ar?
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Thank you for your sapport and please continue to drop by Aunt Agony. I may write again if I have the time, but seriously doubt so. So don't expect anything from me liao.
/me start counting the sales of tickets.
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Originally posted by browniebaobao:simi?!! lidat only?
ah lian and Ah Rick never blossom into love ar?
!@#$%^&*
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can see that u got more supporters this time round leh.Originally posted by Yunhaier:
Cheers
/me nudge Yun*
oei oei, change the ending leh...