Love Story - Beautiful Blemish

• browniebaobao

  30 Dec 07, 23:29

  white lilies are my fav flowers..
  
  but so far me never receive any white lilies before leh...
  
  aiyoo.. ah hoon u make me so envious of ah lian..
• Yunhaier

  30 Dec 07, 23:41

  Originally posted by browniebaobao:

  white lilies are my fav flowers..
  
  but so far me never receive any white lilies before leh...
  
  aiyoo.. ah hoon u make me so envious of ah lian..

  Ahem!
  
  Ok guys you heard bbb.
  
  Cheers
  
  
• Yunhaier

  30 Dec 07, 23:42

  Originally posted by M©+square:

  Jia you......
  
  Me no time to read. But all the best.
  
  /me fades away...

  MCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC!~!~!~!~!~!
  
  Cheers
• the_don

  31 Dec 07, 02:17

  is there any more chapters? pls say yes!!!
• purpledragon84

  31 Dec 07, 04:06

  Originally posted by the_don:

  is there any more chapters? pls say yes!!!

  "(To be continued...)" confirm yes.. lol..
• beavan

  31 Dec 07, 23:26

  more more more more!
• Yunhaier

  1 Jan 08, 23:42

  Chapter 16
  
  My eyes felt wet, although it remained shut. In the lonely darkness, I scouted my way towards his left hands and clasped it.
  
  ‘After midnight, all will be ashes to ashes; what about you? Do you even fancy a girl like me?’
  
  Rick had no response.
  
  My eyes twitched intensively and overflowed with doleful fluid.
  
  ‘You know, probably, we met at the wrong time…’
  
  ‘No, you are wrong,’ I said, struggling to avoid sounding as if I am whimpering, ‘the fact is not about the time - time is pretty much fair to me; it’s about the fact that I will never be able to keep up with you, no matter how much I try to change my destiny.’
  
  ‘Why say that?’
  
  ‘So many things happened and every incident merely reinforced that fact that we are on two different plane of existence. You talk about aiming for the moon – don’t you understand that some people just can’t be near the moon, even if that’s what the person should do?’
  
  ‘A moon is just an analogy…’
  
  ‘You remember the day when I chased after you?
  
  Rick nodded instinctively.
  
  ‘…No matter how fast I ran, I will never be able to bridge the gap and distance...’
  
  ‘It’s only a game!’
  
  ‘It’s simply not just a game, you understand? It’s the truth! And the truth is that NO MATTER WHAT I DO, I WILL NEVER BE ABLE TO KEEP UP WITH YOU! Do you NOT understand? There is no way I can be like you… have your life and live the way you live… simply no way…’
  
  All the suppressed emotional grievances poured through my voice like a flash flood, drowning all gaiety of todayÂ’s occasion.
  
  ‘Then do you love me Rick?’
  
  ‘I…’ began Rick, as his voice grew softer with every second of deliberate stalling.
  
  I paused and close my eyes, anticipating RickÂ’s next reply.
  
  ‘…whatever it is… it probably won’t even work out…’ sighed Rick in a resigned tone, ‘…I think you are right…’
  
  Like a crack in the windscreen from a fallen tree rock and like the advert of the anticipated dawn waiting to banish darkness from the face of this world, I felt my world of my delusion coming to an abrupt end; devastation rumbled across the realm, crumbling my illusionary world pieces by pieces.
  
  ‘Take back what you had said a while ago; I still have ten minutes before this dream of mine will implode.’
  
  ‘Ivy…’
  
  ‘Let me do what I want for ten minutes,’ I pleaded, ‘…I promise you once this is over, I will not bother you anymore…’
  
  I reached over and hugged him.
  
  ‘Appreciate this beautiful dream…I promise you once I have woke up, I will no longer revert back to the same old me.’
  
  I tightened my embrace a little, as if I could hear the shattering and fiery explosion within my world, perishing from the birth of reality. Falling debris, collapsing edifice and majestic towers – everything is tearing apart upon truth’s invasion.
  
  ‘One more minute left… just let me hug you throughout this time ok?’
  
  And soon, my mobile alarm signalled the awakening.
  
  (to be continued... final chapter)
• thehappybunny

  1 Jan 08, 23:44

  whoop! nice!
  
  edit: ha! no.1 !!
• cApitaland

  1 Jan 08, 23:51

  nb!
• browniebaobao

  1 Jan 08, 23:52

  juz logged in and managed to catch chapter 16. haha
• Yunhaier

  2 Jan 08, 00:16

  Hi all,
  
  Next chapter is the final episode.
  
  Perhaps I should be evil and hold the chapter until it hits 400 replies to boost rating (since AA has fallen out of top 5 forum). Or perhaps 500?
  
  Regardless, I know many of you cannot seemed to hear the composed song in .amr format, but nevertheless, I have uploaded an ending theme song specially for this.
  
  Yunhaier X Fade in Rain.
  
  You can hear it here
  
  P.S: After the final chapter, like always, I will thank all who have took the time and trouble to follow and read up. If you are lurking around, this might be the time to drop at least 1 post, so that I would know who are the readers and personally thank you after the last chapter.
  
  Xie xie.
  
  Cheers
• browniebaobao

  2 Jan 08, 00:25

  Ah Hoon, u better not use this to boost rating.
  
  If i get impatient, i duno wat madness thing i will do.
  
  Wake u up at 3 am and ask u to pee?
  
  kidding la.. dun make us wait too long lah.. from 2007 to 2008, one year have past leh!
• Yunhaier

  2 Jan 08, 00:35

  Originally posted by browniebaobao:

  Ah Hoon, u better not use this to boost rating.
  
  If i get impatient, i duno wat madness thing i will do.
  
  Wake u up at 3 am and ask u to pee?
  
  kidding la.. dun make us wait too long lah.. from 2007 to 2008, one year have past leh!

  Probably my last story liao ma...
  
  Cheers
• Tier

  2 Jan 08, 00:50

  wow nice.
  yes, I am waiting for the last chapter~
• Dendrite88

  2 Jan 08, 01:48

  Awaiting the final chapter. Very very good read. Thanks yun jiejie
• jara

  2 Jan 08, 02:29

  Originally posted by Yunhaier:
  Hi all,
  
  Next chapter is the final episode.
  
  Perhaps I should be evil and hold the chapter until it hits 400 replies to boost rating (since AA has fallen out of top 5 forum). Or perhaps 500?
  
  Regardless, I know many of you cannot seemed to hear the composed song in .amr format, but nevertheless, I have uploaded an ending theme song specially for this.
  
  Yunhaier X Fade in Rain.
  
  You can hear it here
  
  P.S: After the final chapter, like always, I will thank all who have took the time and trouble to follow and read up. [b]If you are lurking around, this might be the time to drop at least 1 post, so that I would know who are the readers and personally thank you after the last chapter.
  
  Xie xie.
  
  Cheers[/b]

  i have been reading... btw u r a male rite?
• Lovelorn?

  2 Jan 08, 20:59

  Bring on the last chapter! The excitement is killing me...
• r33b0k

  2 Jan 08, 22:08

  nice song..
  nice story..
  
  i hope this story ending is a beautiful one..
  i'm a sucker for fairytale endings.
  
  haha!
• cApitaland

  2 Jan 08, 22:19

  rating booster!
• browniebaobao

  3 Jan 08, 00:22

  Originally posted by Yunhaier:

  Probably my last story liao ma...
  
  Cheers

  dun cry dun cry leh..
  
  not pretty when u cry leh..
  
  u want 500 replies har? lai lai, bbb help u~!
  
  i believe guys who have been following ur story will give u the kind of response u want.
  
  
• starExcaliblur

  3 Jan 08, 01:42

  Nice story and nice song, btw, who was the singer of the song ?
• tek_koh

  3 Jan 08, 06:51

  [quote]Originally posted by starExcaliblur:
  Nice story and nice song, btw, who was the singer of the song ?[/quote
  
  i think is yunhaier
• dmuse

  3 Jan 08, 10:10

  Originally posted by Yunhaier:

  Probably my last story liao ma...
  
  Cheers

  don't say like dat la...me like your lil love stories...nice reminiscence of teenage days
• rain-coat

  3 Jan 08, 19:39

  *contributing to the no. of replies*
• kiseki

  3 Jan 08, 19:43

  me quietly following your story la .
  crafty trick to boost rating !
  no choice but to post if not no ending
  
  
  nice story btw