Love Story: Bus Ride
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Just a small tale that happens and I will update every few days. Hope you people would like
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The first time for a guy to approach woman during his life, be it a senseless dare or pure admiration, somehow or another, ounce of energy will gradually flow in you until it accumulates pass a climax, then a sudden urge of doing silly things to know her happens. Before you know it, everything happens in a flash, and when you think back, you wondered how on earth did you manage to do or say something as retard.
I am in similar hypothetical situation.
I observed her since two days and for some diabolical reasons, something stuck me, whispering to me in telepathy mode that I have to know her. Must have one of Cupid's bow shot went haywire and got into me - my eyes never left her. She is petite and small, with long flawless hair. Her features were well defined - especially her eyes that captured my soul in the first wink I caught from her. She is not those drop-dead gorgeous model's style, but when she smiles and her two dimples creases into her cheeks deeply, nothing on earth is sweeter than her. Her charisma and the air that saturates around her is angelic and when I am near her, to close for comfort (it'ssimply stressing), she smelled like a walking conditioner.
I have to know her, if I want this piece of dream to turn into reality. If it were something of my forte, it would have been as simple as snapping my fingers, but I had never approach a girl before. What do you expect from someone who studied in an all guys school since Primary One and not even a single sister at home? Female of similar age don't exist in my environment since I graduated from kindergarten, which was like years ago?
Today is the last day of school, which means starting from tomorrow, two months worth of vacation began. Then, my chances of seeing her will be zero because she doesn't even stay near me; she stayed near my good friend, Jerry, private estate. Fate has enabled us to meet because two days back, because I have been going to Jerry's house and I would only see her at the bus stop. So everything needs to be done today!
She is sitting in front of me and my mind is virtually blank, thinking of a good way to start a decent conversation with her.
Then, the bus appeared into sight and my set my pulse racing - I am losing my time resources!
The bus slowed down to a gradually stop and we both board it.
I chose a seat near the back and sat down, watching her walked passed me and sat behind. A wave of uneasiness washed over me as I could even sense her gaze on my back. There was an internal war waging inside me as I am fighting against trying to walk over to introduce myself and to remain rational.
Finally our stop came and we got down.
She walked at a quickened pace, reckoning that I am stalking her behind. Every seconds is slipping passed me and beads of sweats broke out at strategic part of my forehead. I can't let this final chance go by!
She went through the gate of the estate by now and my mind is in state of desperation. Watching her gradually moving towards her block is unimaginable.
Come on Cloud you could do it! OR you are gonna lose this chance forever!?
A surge of false strength filled my veins as I ran towards her. When I came arm length distance from her, I delivered a light tap onto her shoulder.
She turned around, as if expecting all that would happen and gave me a curious look.
Hi, I was...was wondering if I...I...could get to know you and be your friend??
All the energy in me had expanded in this stuttering sentence I blurted. My face is beginning to blush red with shyness as I waited for any respond.
She smiled faintly and gosh, that nearly sweep me off my feet.
Five minutes went by and everything happened as smoothly as any successful mission. We exchanged numbers and I learned that she is not exactly local; she is a half Japanese who came to Singapore to study. Her name is Yukiko, which means snow in Japanese ?like her unblemished skin, fair and silky-like.
Then she said she had to leave and with a dumb smile reciprocating her sweet ones, we parted.
I looked back at her for one final time, before running and yelling at the top of my voice that I made it. Did I mention knocking onto the lamppost and actually apologized to it?
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bro!!!!!!!! you dont tell story tell half way har!!! me flicking kan cheong for you!!!!!! wah lan.... DIE DIE MUST GET HER KAY!!!!! i give you my full support!!!!!!!Originally posted by Yunhaier:The first time for a guy to approach woman during his life, be it a senseless dare or pure admiration, somehow or another, ounce of energy will gradually flow in you until it accumulates pass a climax, then a sudden urge of doing silly things to know her happens. Before you know it, everything happens in a flash, and when you think back, you wondered how on earth did you manage to do or say something as retard.
I am in similar hypothetical situation.
I observed her since two days and for some diabolical reasons, something stuck me, whispering to me in telepathy mode that I have to know her. Must have one of Cupid's bow shot went haywire and got into me - my eyes never left her. She is petite and small, with long flawless hair. Her features were well defined - especially her eyes that captured my soul in the first wink I caught from her. She is not those drop-dead gorgeous model's style, but when she smiles and her two dimples creases into her cheeks deeply, nothing on earth is sweeter than her. Her charisma and the air that saturates around her is angelic and when I am near her, to close for comfort (it'ssimply stressing), she smelled like a walking conditioner.
I have to know her, if I want this piece of dream to turn into reality. If it were something of my forte, it would have been as simple as snapping my fingers, but I had never approach a girl before. What do you expect from someone who studied in an all guys school since Primary One and not even a single sister at home? Female of similar age don't exist in my environment since I graduated from kindergarten, which was like years ago?
Today is the last day of school, which means starting from tomorrow, two months worth of vacation began. Then, my chances of seeing her will be zero because she doesn't even stay near me; she stayed near my good friend, Jerry, private estate. Fate has enabled us to meet because two days back, because I have been going to Jerry's house and I would only see her at the bus stop. So everything needs to be done today!
She is sitting in front of me and my mind is virtually blank, thinking of a good way to start a decent conversation with her.
Then, the bus appeared into sight and my set my pulse racing - I am losing my time resources!
The bus slowed down to a gradually stop and we both board it.
I chose a seat near the back and sat down, watching her walked passed me and sat behind. A wave of uneasiness washed over me as I could even sense her gaze on my back. There was an internal war waging inside me as I am fighting against trying to walk over to introduce myself and to remain rational.
Finally our stop came and we got down.
She walked at a quickened pace, reckoning that I am stalking her behind. Every seconds is slipping passed me and beads of sweats broke out at strategic part of my forehead. I can't let this final chance go by!
She went through the gate of the estate by now and my mind is in state of desperation. Watching her gradually moving towards her block is unimaginable.
Come on Cloud you could do it! OR you are gonna lose this chance forever!?
A surge of false strength filled my veins as I ran towards her. When I came arm length distance from her, I delivered a light tap onto her shoulder.
She turned around, as if expecting all that would happen and gave me a curious look.
Hi, I was...was wondering if I...I...could get to know you and be your friend??
All the energy in me had expanded in this stuttering sentence I blurted. My face is beginning to blush red with shyness as I waited for any respond.
She smiled faintly and gosh, that nearly sweep me off my feet.
Five minutes went by and everything happened as smoothly as any successful mission. We exchanged numbers and I learned that she is not exactly local; she is a half Japanese who came to Singapore to study. Her name is Yukiko, which means snow in Japanese ?like her unblemished skin, fair and silky-like.
Then she said she had to leave and with a dumb smile reciprocating her sweet ones, we parted.
I looked back at her for one final time, before running and yelling at the top of my voice that I made it. Did I mention knocking onto the lamppost and actually apologized to it?
(To be continued...) -
nice story man! faster post the other parts hor.... i wanna read leh
all the best! -
LOL knock into lamppost..
machiam siow lang
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Yunhaier, power lah. so what happen next? -
wow, good compo man, if i can write a good article like this..
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yah! good luck..hehe...and hurry leh.i also waiting for second part..keke.
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scare me sia.......for a while i tot u were that stalker that nite!!!
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You think too much lar... hahahaOriginally posted by FireIce:scare me sia.......for a while i tot u were that stalker that nite!!! -
hahahaha...yah....cos i dun think this fits me......Originally posted by Yunhaier:She is petite and small, with long flawless hair. Her features were well defined - especially her eyes that captured my soul in the first wink I caught from her. She is not those drop-dead gorgeous model's style, but when she smiles and her two dimples creases into her cheeks deeply, nothing on earth is sweeter than her.
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I am sure you have your own style...Originally posted by FireIce:hahahaha...yah....cos i dun think this fits me......
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It was two months since I knew her and we have always talk online. Our relation are like good friends now. Jerry told me to go after her, but my heart doesnÂ’t want to sacrifice this stable friendship for now. Maybe because I had never had a girlfriend before and always have this phobia of relationship not lasting behind my head.
I came home quite late and logging onto IRC and yes! She is there. Before I could catch my breathe for walking back home from the bus stop, she sent me a messageÂ…
‘Cloud, so late still never sleep ar?’
I heard my mumÂ’s voice lurking in the background, commanding me to finish the leftover food in the kitchen. If my mum knew that I ate in school already, I guess she is gonna skin me alive.
‘Just came back from school, you?’
‘I waited for you to come online…’
Waited for me? Sometimes girls can be such cute little thing. Words like these seemed like healing wards for the day fatigue. Jerry said that guys must be sweet talkers and romantic, wellÂ… I am none of the above. But when he stressed his point, I tried learning to be one.
‘Why leh? Miss me ar? HAHAHAHA!’
I know the laughter was just to cover my embarrassment, but hey, thatÂ’s a good attempt.
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‘Cloud, I am moody today…’
‘Really…? What happen?’
‘My good friend just broke up with her boyfriend today…’
Somehow girls are very affected over things happening to their friends in matters of love. Guys would normally tell them to move on with their life and stuff, whereas they would share their pain and sorrow or cry with them. Maybe thatÂ’s why girls always tell one another about their personal problem?
‘Well…it’s getting common isn’t it? Relationship are breaking up every now and then…’
‘I seen them come together and they have been together for 3 months plus… so long…’
Three months and you called that long? ItÂ’s not even longer than a semester. Maybe people involved will find it longer than it seemed to be. I am a counsellor in school and people approach me for all kind of interpersonal relation problem. Maybe thatÂ’s why I have another point of view? But when it comes to myself, I am such a dickhead.
‘If they were meant to be together…well… they will be together right? Sometimes not being together is a good thing…couples not suited for each other being force to be together is a painful thing…’
‘Fate…?’
Fate to me is like a legend; everyone talks about it, rant about it, thank God about it, but when it comes to relation, I have never gotten myself a girlfriend, so I know nuts about it.
‘Err… you could say that?’
‘Then are we fated to know each other… Cloud…?’
I always hated it whenever girls corner me with questions that neither YES nor NO is the right answer. Just when I am stuck with her questions, my mum with her pissed off face come knocking at my door, demanded that I finish the food left for me.
‘Hey, I have go off for now to eat supper… answer you another time…’
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‘Come on… gif me a smile ok? I treat you movie next time…’
‘You say wan ar…… I see you tomorrow ok?’
Well, it seemed that the treating trick always works. HeyÂ… it means that I can make use of this excuse to catch a movie with her! I am such a fast learner.
‘Ok! bye bye!’
The next thing I see is the ‘DISCONNECT’ word on my computer. Grinning from ear to ear, I skip my way to the kitchen.
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hee hee..hurry hurry leh...getting interesting..
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maybe juicy part is coming tooOriginally posted by yErN:hee hee..hurry hurry leh...getting interesting..
yummy
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i am a good good boy in a good good world. Mi cool dude man. -
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i am a good good boy in a good good world. Mi cool dude man. -
this guy here can really write...
can u teach me a few tricks to write?
looking at ur post,reminds me of the past when i got to know girls by saying," Can we be friends?". Dun think i will be able to do tat now...less thick-skinned liao....hehe.lookin forward to ur continued story.. -
And then?? faster tell story leh...
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can this story finish be4 the year ends or izzit going to stride into the next yr?
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eh relac... it takes inspiration to write.. be patient and u will see updates.
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wat a story..
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‘Cloud! You are finally here!’
I looked at the clock and it says 10 pm. No, I am not late, rather I am pretty early using IRC entering our usual chat room.
‘Cloud, my good friend tried to patch back with her bf today… but he ignore her…’
WellÂ… guys of these days are not looking for serious relation. People have to get to know and go through more relation before they could realise that who is the right one for them what.
‘She cried you know… so poor thing… then that guy said that he likes another girl…’
A Chinese proverb came into my mind – Tian ya he chu wu fang cao. Why cry wasted tears over a relation that was never meant to be yours in the first place? Human, even though are emotional creatures, after a period of time, everything will just be a memory of what had taken place.
‘Yah I told her to move on with her life, but she loved him so much and she couldn’t believe that he like someone else… if I am her, I will also dunno what the do…’
DonÂ’t know what to do? Make yourself happy instead of lingering in this sorrowful event? Sometimes I really wonder if woman are that dumb? Or is it love that is making woman a vulnerable creature? And what makes you think THAT it is love? Woman, in their first love, love their lovers, in others, they loved loveÂ…
‘Really?…’
All woman loves romance. It is like salt and sugar in cooking. Without it, whatever relation will be bland.
‘What about you Cloud?’
Me? How come the topic is about me now? I always avoid questions whenever it comes to me in revealing my inner self. It is like exposing yourself to danger through speaking. People, whom you least expected it, betray the trust you given to them and you will have to go through this series of utter disappointment and sadness. Ok I admitÂ… I watch TOO much TV.
‘Me? What about me?’
‘What if something like that happens to you?’
‘Er… it won’t lar. I don’t even have a gf…’
‘Why? Go get one?’
‘…’
‘y? something is wrong?’
Ok baby, this would be the catalysis to explode my innermost views again.
‘I don’t want to get a gf for the SAKE of getting one… its meaningless don’t you think? Relation nowadays are going nowhere because people just want to be in a relation. They are afraid to be alone - they WANT someone to walk by them. Be it emotionally, sexually or physically. I don’t mind being alone - I like it! Until maybe when the special one comes along, I will try my best to be with her, doing stuff together and most importantly, grow together…’
There was an unaccustomed silence after I type that paragraph. My fingers speed through the keyboard and finally stop at the last word. Oh shit! Have I just ruined my good impression? I discern its time to celebrate with Jerry about my first failure.
‘You are right Cloud…’
Hooray!! I could see my happiness on the computer screen, signalling to my victory of words.
‘I want to stay single, until the special one comes along too……’
Oh wait, how could cute girls like her possibly stay single? Guys will try all sorts of ways to get her and she would finally succumb to one. She is too cute to stay singleÂ…
‘/me blushed… no I am not cute…’
She is such a poor liar. When you praise a girl pretty, they would tell you they look ugly. When you say that they look like toilet, she retaliate and bites back, saying you look worstÂ… such is mentality of a woman.
‘I girl mah, that why will also be like that… =P’
From a close defeated battle, I have eventually emerge the winner as I continue to chat with her for the next two hours. Somehow, during these periods of knowing her, I had never asked about the background of her family or sort, but we talk everything else. I loved to chat with her as she is way so different from all the other girls – she is VERY naïve and this creates an impulse for me to protect her, to guide her along. She showed me the real innocence of a young lady, untainted and pure. I love the way she is, naturally cute and THIS is the reasons that stop me from jioing her – I can’t take advantage of her innocence right?
‘Cloud… I have to go already… its getting late…’
‘I have to leave too…Oh yeah… its almost 12 and my Cinderella has to leave… HAHAHAHA!’
Why is it that I must laugh every time I attempt a MUSHY statement? A lousy cover for my embarrassment.
‘…’
‘Cloud… you say the other time you wanna treat me movie right?’
Ok, my hypnotic statement has hinted her! YEAH!
‘Lets watch movie together tomorrow ok?’
ErÂ… ok!Â’
My mind was cheering and screaming in rejoice. All hail cupid for the golden opportunity!
‘Ok… Cloud you log off first, I don’t want you to see me go…’
‘Aww…ok I count to 3 and leave…’
I canÂ’t believe I am doing this SILLY business.
‘3…2…1…gone!’
I couldnÂ’t get to sleep on that day, totally excited about tomorrowÂ’s event. Going out with a girl? I had never been out with one before! Praying at my bedside sincerely that nothing will screwed up on that day.
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interesting....hurry lehz..btw..hapi new year to everyone!! hehe.
