Love Story: Bus Ride
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touching....................
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Nobody is borned into this world knowing everything that you ought to know in surviving any relationship. Everyone was borned a like fool - because in Love, there is no rule - people just have to go through it because you only grow after your experience it.
So when that happens, most, in fact virtually everyone recognise this rancorous feeling that is worst than any poison of the heart: Regret.
Most people have regrets in their life. They bring forward to their next life, still bearing the deep regrets they did when they were still naive about reality. You could hear a thousands theories on love, with people of high learning enlightening you about this issue - ironically, you would still go through this phrase sometime in your life.
Regrets are the memories that you truthfully hate yourself for acting that way at that moment - yet like a ball of flame. You are dazzled by the beauty of the fire - yet it horrifyingly reminds you of your burn scorch.
People feel difficult to move on - because everything past incident kept replaying. How many times when you tried to sleep and end up recalling all these incidents? How many times have you thought of something, yet brushes it aside and telling yourself not to? How many times have you weep silently in your heart or physically when the similar evironment, music, situations, etc took place and instantly transported you into another world - your world of old memories?
Bus Ride was written by me - Yunhaier, no doubt and each short chapter over the spread of this 2 weeks plus had attracted regular readers in the forum. To you people - its another love story - to me, its a paradox that writing it seemed more emotional then reading it through.
Four people made this story possible - My disciple, girl that passed away, girl that vanished from the face of the world to England and of course me. Two true tales combined into one made it simplier to write and to post. If you are asking if this is for real - you are right in the sense that major incident all took place, the small details were spawn from fictional imagination for better reading.
Everyone, created from the miracle of nature, has to go through phrases to discover four aspect in love.
1) Yourself - you cannot love others if you do not learn to love yourself. Studies have proven people who doesn't love themselves tend to find partners that will abuse them or do not treat them as well as other guys would.
2) Someone you Loved the most - This phrase is often when your were still wild and naive about Love. Dauntless is your middle name and the inexperience you falls very deep in love this special person - but you wouldn't be together with him/her. This causes regrets
3) Someone who loved you the most - After the 2nd phrase, you will mature, but finds it very difficult to let go of that past. In your course of life - people would also fall for you - but none of them seemed anywhere closer to that special guy/girl, even he/she may be your gf/bf or simply good friends. You will cause them emotional hurts regardless of how tactful you deal with their feelings because they are now experience the second stage, while you are at the third.
4) Your life partner - finally after everything, you will settle down with special one who will walk down the rest of your life with you.
Many people do not follow this phrase in order. Some people gone through 3rd stage first, etc - so is it possible to skip phrase 2 and 3, and just go towards 1 and 4?
I want to tell you people how lucky you are because, at the very least, you people could still speak with those whom you may have regreted upon your actions. They may not listen - but you could still have a thousands and one means to bring your message across.
Everyone here in this forum, wearing their nick and chat - behind every computer, is a story to tell. Each of your have your own experience, have your own skeleton in your cupboard. After going through my story and listening to what I have to say here...
Do not die with your regrets in life. If you can do something about it - DO IT NOW.
Prays (For myself and other who have gone through similar difficult incident of death and separation) -
I thank all who have been faithfully follow this story, Especially...
NDU
leonard_goalkeeper
Prodigy
Parka
Thongboy
startrightnow
yErN
FireIce
sgboy2004
coverboy17
Retrac
J-reeee
jOhO
YI
Herself
carpe_jugulum
Seventh_Signs
sLaYeRgEr
nitroheat97
Xiao Long Nu
bluegalz
RõundRõundéGarden
Strikk
extr0vert
anfuni
GTB
skeujin
kohanson
shirurinu
RebeL
Initial`D
Souledge
wolfz
sleepy
solidus
M©+square
]A[na-FennY
siaocharboh
doghouse837
kopiosatu
TuTu_Car
Ain't Afraid To Die
MooKu
zacken99
duotiga83
Glausy
Mazohyst
Mozzy
And all others who have read. You people are great audience and I appreciate it. Any personal comments to be made, you could private msg me.
*Exits*
*Time to count money from the movie sales!*
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i guess i m the 1st to finish reading the finale......
good story....
a toast in memoir of ya disciple
( erhmm disciple in wad ar?)
/me looks at the time wondering who on earth would wake up at 530am on their own... -
eh, i find the guy too happy leh.
then the ger die so easily.
pek chek ah
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sOrrOw tHat coulDnT bE shoWeD....Is thE mosT sorrOwfuL thiNgs...
tHE facT yOu cannOt proTecT youR lovEd oNes frOM paIN anD agonY...is The moSt paiNful ThinG... -
expected
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Ending is so sad....yah we tend to have regrets about something we dare not try...
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so touching and sad......
its true tat some times things comes and goes in your life.....
so the only way is to voice out watever feelings that u had in u, before u will ever had any chance to feel regrat....
juz like wat those fwd emails that had reach my mailbox regarding,
to voice out watever feelings u had for the other person, as u wont know wat will happen in the next min.....
the last time i ever come across such email is the valentine day story which i donno how many of u did received this fwd email b4.
its abt a female doc and her bf whom died juz becos of her implusiveness of not getting his v-dae greetings....
in moment of anger, she ignore all of her calls that made her bf rush all the way to hospital and met a fatal accident on the way....
and she only received the v-dae greetings one year after the death of her bf... which is on the v-day... with the song "only love"
thx yunhaier for sharing the story with the ppl in the forum... i believe everyting in life is predestinated, thou i donno how u feel now.... juz wish u all the best in ur life~
as for mi, i will always remember the two quotes that i came across in my life which i put it in my signature as below~ enjoys ppl........ -
wah kau!
why every story also got ppl passed away one?!?!
i want happy ending leh!
i skipped lecture just to see a happy ending today ok!!!
oooops...gotta go tutorial liaoo... great story and C YA! -
dn be sad...hehehehehe i tell u all a joke
Ms universe Contest
List 3 animals starting with the letter L:
Ms India: Lion
Ms US: Leopard
Ms Singapore: Labbit
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parting is such sweet sorrow
only those who have experienced such pure form of love, will know how it really feels like......
cloud, actually..... this has made u sort of a fairytale character.... because... not many of us can live a life that can be filled wif such magic of love loh.....
"bu zai hu tian chang di jiu, zi zai hu cheng jing yong you"
this memory will stay wif u, and wif all who read ur story....
hope u can get urself together again, and find a gd gf.... soon
ps: but of course i dun think u will forget abt such a person, in ur life (yukiko) -
Ms universe Contest
List 3 electronic appliances :
Ms India: Lamp
Ms US: Television
Ms Singapore: So easy leh..Ladio lor -
Ms universe Contest
List 3 kinda beverages:
Ms India: Milo
Ms US: Tea
Ms Singapore: Hahaha this one i know lar!! GuNI -
This story is very sad.. i always thought it was real.
i wonder which part is true and which part is not true.
Yunhaier, if you are Cloud, dun be sad and cheer up..
life has to go on.. -
mi?Originally posted by wolfz:i guess i m the 1st to finish reading the finale......
good story....
a toast in memoir of ya disciple
( erhmm disciple in wad ar?)
/me looks at the time wondering who on earth would wake up at 530am on their own... -
Writing, composing it is indeed more emotional then people reading it. Because to write a story like yours(Yunhaier) it takes more then talent and eloquent language skill. It's the soul of the story, that heart of the composer....maybe i read to much Comics which contained too much sorrowful Love stories.
It reminds me of many songs....but most haunting of all will be my favourite song. Dreamy...Sad....but ever living.
I'm going to live my life
Like every day's my last
Without a simple good-bye
It all goes by so fast
And now that you're gone
I can't cry hard enough
No I can't cry hard enough
For you to hear me now
I'm going to open my eyes
And see for the first time
I've let go of you like
A child letting go of his kite
There it goes up in the sky
There it goes beyond the clouds
For no reason why
I can't cry hard enough
No I can't cry hard enough
For you to hear me now
I'm going to look back in vain
And see you standing there
When all that remains
Is just an empty chair
And now that you're gone
I can't cry hard enough
No I can't cry hard enough
For you to hear me now
- [size=small]Can't Cry Hard Enough By Robertson Brothers
Written By: David Williams & Marvin Etzioni
p & c 1990 Rough Trade Records®[/size] -
LOL XLN
singlish no. 1 leh!
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tank kill lehOriginally posted by Prodigy:LOL XLN
singlish no. 1 leh! -
frankly speakin after i read the story n before i read and when reading the story......
more or else know wats goin to happen......cos its someting like those jap drama or korean drama....
ppl often say ren shen ru xi or xi ru ren shen (dramas is like real life)...so wat happened in dramas can happen in real life ...is a matter of whether u gt expereience b4 or nt...
Another thing is...well done...u r the second person in tis forum i admire in writing and expressing ...hw i wish i can be like you...is hard to express in words....i enjoy readin your story....
i dono ...gt 6th sense tell me u r somehow involved in this incident? bt i do hope everyting is over and u r ok nw...haha i guess so...
anyway Tank Kill!!~~ -
no plobemOriginally posted by Xiao Long Nu:tank kill leh
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No matter how predictable, how much of it resemble another story...it'll still attract people to read and it still does tug the hearts of people who hunger for lost love, true love....and regrets...
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If You Asked Me To - Patti Labelle
Used to be that I believed in something,
Used to be that I believed in love,
It's been a long time since I've had that feeling,
I could love someone, I could trust someone.
I said I'd never let nobody near my heart again, darling,
I said I'd never let nobody in,
If you asked me to I just might change my mind,
And let you in my life forever,
If you asked me to I just might give my heart,
And stay here in your arms forever.
If you asked me to, If you asked me to,
So now ever since I've been around you,
Can't go back the way and on my own,
Can't help feeling, darling since I've found you,
That I've found my home, That I'm finally home.
I said I'd never let nobody get too close to me, darling,
I said I needed, needed to be free,
If you asked me to I just might change my mind,
And let you in my life forever,
If you asked me to I just might give my heart,
And stay here in your arms forever.
If you asked me to and I would give my world, Little baby, I need you now,
Ask me to and I would do anything for you, baby, For you, baby.
If you asked me to, I'll put you in my life forever,
If you asked me to, All you gotta do is ask me to,
If you want it I could give you my heart,
If you asked me to, I'll give you anything that I say, baby,
If you asked me to, I'll do anything that you want me to do, just ask me,
All you gotta do is ask me to,
If you asked me to, I'll give my life, All you gotta do is ask me to,
If you asked me to. -
Oh Tank kill two ~Originally posted by Xiao Long Nu:frankly speakin after i read the story n before i read and when reading the story......
more or else know wats goin to happen......cos its someting like those jap drama or korean drama....
ppl often say ren shen ru xi or xi ru ren shen (dramas is like real life)...so wat happened in dramas can happen in real life ...is a matter of whether u gt expereience b4 or nt...
Another thing is...well done...u r the second person in tis forum i admire in writing and expressing ...hw i wish i can be like you...is hard to express in words....i enjoy readin your story....
i dono ...gt 6th sense tell me u r somehow involved in this incident? bt i do hope everyting is over and u r ok nw...haha i guess so...
anyway Tank Kill!!~~ -
1st time see u write so shortOriginally posted by Yunhaier:Oh Tank kill two ~ 