Love Story: Bus Ride
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wad a twist of events...relli touching story...
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To write or compose something - language skill is secondary, what matters is your plot. You people have many gan(3) chu(4) deep within your heart - just that when it comes to transfering this deep emotions to words - you wouldn't want to get too emotional over it once more or not as bo liao as me.
I gone through that phrase when I was very young, but realise your feelings and 3 years later - devastating.
Anyway that's not important - whats important is people could gain something from people's experience - thats what matter the most. -
HahahahaOriginally posted by Xiao Long Nu:1st time see u write so short
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sigh. such a sad ending.
at times i do wonder if falling in love results in getting hurt in the end. i've been thru quite a number of relations and seen the pple around me fall out of love.
why do we keep looking and wanting to fall in love again?
is it that simple as to juz tell that special someone that you love him/her?
what if this person is already so close to you but you'd rather not risk the friendship?
is everything you really go thru worth it in the end?
is love juz knowing the direction of each other?
to me, i juz dun believe that true love exists. love is like a game, depends on how well you use yr cards, depends on the amount of risk and how fast you are to control the game or end up being the one who gets all the hurt eventually.
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It doesn't matter how much you're hurt...it all matters when you truly loved and gave your all for that love. Paradox, they are, however those bitter painful memories will all be beautiful and sweet.
I compose this quote just for Yunhaier's story.
I felt alot for the story....Thanks Yunhaier
You brought my heart back to my old old days...
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Bravo, amico. I'm late again to read your story. Argh. Geesh. Nice story. I always wanted to write some good stories. But I don't have a nice plot. Writing is tough. But it's fun too. Bravo again. -
touching ending....
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where is mi share of $$$$?Originally posted by Yunhaier:I thank all who have been faithfully follow this story, Especially...
*Time to count money from the movie sales!*
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Story so sad. hmm... May I should start writing also......"Gangs in Singapore". Haha. To go with the movie.
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hey, u pple pay up leh...so many still havent pay yet...hmmm...
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I believe in what Yunhaier says(Do not die with your regrets in life. If you can do something about it - DO IT NOW.) Go & get what you deserve to get,get it done without regrets.
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this story is so copycat. read the 2nd or 3rd part i know it will be like Dolce Vita how it will end liao. same as Dolce Vita that i read years back. gal got incurable sickness lah, gal didnt told the boy about it until she left him lah, gal die in the end lah, boy dun dare to admit he love her when he had the chances lah, regrets lah, talks in irc lah. even some of the conversation is similar to it.
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*Shrugs*Originally posted by digicharat:this story is so copycat. read the 2nd or 3rd part i know it will be like Dolce Vita how it will end liao. same as Dolce Vita that i read years back. gal got incurable sickness lah, gal didnt told the boy about it until she left him lah, gal die in the end lah, boy dun dare to admit he love her when he had the chances lah, regrets lah, talks in irc lah. even some of the conversation is similar to it.
try something more original dude.
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wat the hell do u get by dissing other ppl's work? juz becoz u cant write to save ur life does'nt mean u should go ard critising other's essays - which he obviously put his heart and soul in...Originally posted by digicharat:this story is so copycat. read the 2nd or 3rd part i know it will be like Dolce Vita how it will end liao. same as Dolce Vita that i read years back. gal got incurable sickness lah, gal didnt told the boy about it until she left him lah, gal die in the end lah, boy dun dare to admit he love her when he had the chances lah, regrets lah, talks in irc lah. even some of the conversation is similar to it.
try something more original dude.
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I got it almost right!!!!Originally posted by skeujin:Typical TV love story????
boy sees gal
boy likes gal
boy meets gal
gal likes boy
gal got boy
gal got incurable sickness
gal dump boy
boy never know what happened till the last five minutes of the show
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*sob* sob* how touching like autum in my heart
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well done bro!!! nice one!! but.... the ending really sad lah.... anyway... looking for another solid solid love story from u again....Originally posted by Yunhaier:Just a small tale that happens and I will update every few days. Hope you people would like
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Give us something with more blood and gore!!! Special effects also cannot leave out.
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language is secondary but it's pretty essential too, when writing.Originally posted by Yunhaier:To write or compose something - language skill is secondary, what matters is your plot. You people have many gan(3) chu(4) deep within your heart - just that when it comes to transfering this deep emotions to words - you wouldn't want to get too emotional over it once more or not as bo liao as me.
I gone through that phrase when I was very young, but realise your feelings and 3 years later - devastating.
Anyway that's not important - whats important is people could gain something from people's experience - thats what matter the most.
most pple have the ability to think deep, feel hard, and hurt badly. but not everyone can express these in words.
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you mean like this?! :Originally posted by Parka: Give us something with more blood and gore!!! Special effects also cannot leave out. 
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very nice story, but a bit sad... i have to go ji seow a friend to cheer up now
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???Originally posted by chiobu:*sob* sob* how touching like autum in my heart
autumn in heart = touching?
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I have been following this thread for a long time..in fact it prompted me to join the forum so that i can interacte with ppl here..excellent use of language Yunhaier.. *instinct strike* well..this story gives me an idea that u were kinda involved in the story...Nomatter what have gone wrong...Cheer up and life moves on! well...maybe i should start my journals alive again too.. hope i will be updating my thread soon!!
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Great!!! Give us the URL k?Originally posted by StaRBrEW: I have been following this thread for a long time..in fact it prompted me to join the forum so that i can interacte with ppl here..excellent use of language Yunhaier.. *instinct strike* well..this story gives me an idea that u were kinda involved in the story...Nomatter what have gone wrong...Cheer up and life moves on! well...maybe i should start my journals alive again too.. hope i will be updating my thread soon!! -
Great!!! Give us the URL k?
heee wun la i think i will just update here..hope u all wun mind i take up the space in this forum~ 
Yunhaier when's ur next story coming?? now i have to think which story i wanna write online..think hard too much stories have happened around me.. Abit too hard to form them into sentences and to express here.. Maybe i have to look thru the dictionary while i write here.. alright back to my slacking position liao!