Love Story: A Cursed Man
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before i continue reading, wanna know if the ending sad or happy one? dun wanna depress myself. . . sorry if i spoil the story. . .
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Every small part of the story is critical to the later issues lar... may seemed abit 'what-the-hell' am I talking about at the beginning, but only to those who continues and read will eventually find out what really happens lor.Originally posted by Retrac:ayah, how come the story like never move leh. everyday come in check but go no new update leh...
is it some sad outcome again ah?
can we like change the plot a lil??
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*BISH*Originally posted by sgboy2004:u navie guy?
wat a joke
I am Naive enough to be called Naive... LOL -
*Shun Bian BISh*Originally posted by dark_slayer79:i give u full support -
Just continue reading then find out lor...Originally posted by laser51088:before i continue reading, wanna know if the ending sad or happy one? dun wanna depress myself. . . sorry if i spoil the story. . .
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Ha Ha
Be patient lor
v.gd story
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‘Son, I have been having this edgy feelings over this time and it’s not a good sign.’
‘Granny, don’t worry, everything would be alright…’
‘Have the beast grow restless?’
‘No Granny, it has ceased revoking.’
‘Maybe I was just thinking too much…’
As usual I was at her work place, waiting for her to knock off before we could go somewhere. She told me today there is a meteor descending and she wants to see it. I have grown to appreciate and love her company despised our minor indifferences – she was an extrovert, full of confidence in herself, while I am more of a quieter soul. Actually Granny’s word made my mind wandered; all these ‘first time’ and emotions I am undergoing – is it going to help me?
A familiar screech echoed through.
I am too engrossed with my personal thinking that I spared no divided focus on other business. Suddenly I felt a solid punch rammed into my chest - I withstand the blow like a tower. Annoying emotions was filling me as I looked up to see who was it; it was Ray and his couple of lackey standing behind him.
‘So you are Crystal’s boyfriend? Oh please! Look at your f.u.c.king face – pale like a drug addict. Do you think she really likes you?’
No words came out. Where is my usual eloquent speech that could be used to counter his reckless remark? Has it abandoned me? Annoyance has transformed into anger as my eyes flared.
‘Don’t you dare disturb him,’ growled Crystal as she made her way towards my table.
‘Oh no, never disturb - He and me are like good friends you know.’
‘Yeah right, come lets go.’
Crystal grabbed my hands and pulled me away from the scene. My emotions only fell into a slight turmoil and I was surprise; I could rarely able to control myself so well. Once a guy who pissed me off found himself in hospital after three blows from me – never could he walk again. Granny reprimanded me severely after this incident and made me chant sutra after sutra for his life. If I failed to control myself again, I may be lost to the beast forever.
We hopped into the taxi and made our way to Marina Square. From anger, my feelings gradually cooled down until when she cuddled into me; every malicious emotions dissipated.
‘Don’t talk about that moron. I know he wouldn’t harm you a single bit.’
My hands then wrapped around her and stroked her silky hair like a kitten. I think she likes it – I said I THINK – she never brushed my hands off so I supposed it was nice. She was so enchanting at times that I really feel the need to protect her. Life is so weak – like a shoestring, with brute strength, it will be broken.
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Assuming that he wrote the story, then I beg to differ.Originally posted by Qoo`~`:yunhaier... yr english very good neh... wish i could be like you coz i think i have a difficulty in expressing my feelings in words or speech..
His english is atrocious. Grammer and usage of the vocabulary leaves much to be desired.
Of course I concur that creativity and passion abounds from his words (if they are indeed his) but it needs proper proof-reading.
I will be happy to edit this story (for spelling, grammatical and usage errors only) in my free time if the author so desires. -
this is only a forum, not some friggin' proof-readin at the printers or grammar class, so the description using "atrocious" isn't called for.Originally posted by shattered vein:Assuming that he wrote the story, then I beg to differ.
His english is atrocious. Grammer and usage of the vocabulary leaves much to be desired.
Of course I concur that creativity and passion abounds from his words (if they are indeed his) but it needs proper proof-reading.
I will be happy to edit this story (for spelling, grammatical and usage errors only) in my free time if the author so desires.
Yun may be gracious enough to allow u to edit his story but u sure aren't gracious enough to accept those shortcomings. -
Hey... seriously speaking... if you can... edit for me. because I don't have the time to edit & read through everything. I just type when I had to post it here... sorry if It causes hinder into your reading eh?Originally posted by shattered vein:Assuming that he wrote the story, then I beg to differ.
His english is atrocious. Grammer and usage of the vocabulary leaves much to be desired.
Of course I concur that creativity and passion abounds from his words (if they are indeed his) but it needs proper proof-reading.
I will be happy to edit this story (for spelling, grammatical and usage errors only) in my free time if the author so desires.
But anyway, I never said my language was good -
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nice story, i'll be waiting for the next part..
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not referring to u lah, i talking abt DumbDumb! lahOriginally posted by Yunhaier:*BISH*
I am Naive enough to be called Naive... LOL -
His english may be, or IS atrocious, but am I discounting him as a human? Am i rejecting his friendship, or his right to write? In what way have I not accepted his short-comings? Did I even say that this was a short-coming of his?Originally posted by JLennon:this is only a forum, not some friggin' proof-readin at the printers or grammar class, so the description using "atrocious" isn't called for.
Yun may be gracious enough to allow u to edit his story but u sure aren't gracious enough to accept those shortcomings.
I offered to proof-read it for him which he doesn't mind. Geez some people sit on hot coals for leisure don't they? Getting all jumpy over someone that will voice out what they really think in an objective manner over the net?
My description of atrocious arose not from the fact that the language used is sub-standard, but that as a writer using your language of choice to convey messages, you are responsible for using proper english (the selected language, obviously).
if it's just posting crap in forums then fine, use your sub-standard english as long as people can understand you. -
I was replying someone that mentioned that you had a good command of the english language. Nevermind that... I apologise if you felt insulted.Originally posted by Yunhaier:Hey... seriously speaking... if you can... edit for me. because I don't have the time to edit & read through everything. I just type when I had to post it here... sorry if It causes hinder into your reading eh?
But anyway, I never said my language was good
Please don't stop penning down your inspirations just because your language skills aren't up to scratch. I will edit them when I have time and post it back to you privately.
And it by no means hinders my reading. I just have to make sure I'm wearing my glasses. -
We reached Marina in no time and walked into the beach. We sat down together with a scores of people around waiting for the few seconds sight of meteor.
‘Lets play scissors, paper and stone. If I win, I am suppose to kiss you. If I lose, you are suppose to kiss me. We calculate after we end this game.’
‘Wait a second, is there a difference?’
‘Oh yes, there is difference.’
I canÂ’t believe that I actually believe her words.
‘Then do you want to win or lose?’
‘I want to win!’
We started playing - every round she won like she had said. I could read her like a book - her thoughts, feelings and senses and could predict exactly what sign she is going to come out with.
‘I knew you will let me win. Ok that’s 38 times I won in total, so…’
An ant was crawling on my leg and I was trying to fling it away. Without any form of warning, she came over and locked her lips with mine. I was stunned.
‘Great feel’
Gradually, I grew comfort in that awkward position. I could felt her gentle breath on me, with that womanly pheromones that was trying to charm me.
‘Meteor!’ The crowd screamed.
We drew away from our lips and looked at the beautiful meteor that was descending. The sparkling flaring galaxy star was simply beautiful. I was awed by its presence. Then I saw Crystal, who was wishing upon the star.
‘What are you praying?’
‘Shhh… don’t disturb me first.’
Looking at how serious she is praying for a wish, I was wondering whether had I led her on so far till there is absolutely no way she could turn back? I knew I was a wood head: but I am cursed. The blood that was running in me is tainted. How am I supposed to tell her? Am I being fair to her?
All good things must come to an end; the starry show concluded. Everyone was wishing, giggling, smiling to themselves as if their wishes will definitely come true. Sometimes being naïve and innocent is a kind of bliss.
‘Do you have anything to say to me?’
What? She sensed something is wrong? Oh no, I havenÂ’t prepared my speech to tell her yet. I need to delay time.
‘Erm… I tell you tomorrow…’
‘Why tomorrow? Tell me now!’
‘I need to prepare first…’
For some reason, Crystal smiled and giggled to herself.
‘Come lets go… I still have work tomorrow morning. Need to get back home now.’
We strolled our way out of the beach and flagged down an approaching cab.
‘I really enjoyed myself today and I hope tomorrow… *giggles*… you would be prepared…’
I shut the door of the taxi and saw the taxi speed off. I was felt dead inside. What should I do?
Should I tell her about the real me?
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Ok lar people... dun quarrel anymore.
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in the story...
the main character..
what you mean by 'a real me' ?
is he a monster?? or what?!?!? -
do us all a favour and get a life.. thx..Originally posted by shattered vein:Assuming that he wrote the story, then I beg to differ.
His english is atrocious. Grammer and usage of the vocabulary leaves much to be desired.
Of course I concur that creativity and passion abounds from his words (if they are indeed his) but it needs proper proof-reading.
I will be happy to edit this story (for spelling, grammatical and usage errors only) in my free time if the author so desires. -
i still dun quite understand leh... u mean ur character is not totally human?
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my best guess is, hes an alien waiting to take over planet earthOriginally posted by TVaddict:i still dun quite understand leh... u mean ur character is not totally human?
then he met this girl and he changed his mind! then he defect to the humans and defied the aliens! Then a great war will break out and he will be thje leader of the humans! -
drama..Originally posted by Prodigy:my best guess is, hes an alien waiting to take over planet earth
then he met this girl and he changed his mind! then he defect to the humans and defied the aliens! Then a great war will break out and he will be thje leader of the humans!
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Originally posted by Prodigy:my best guess is, hes an alien waiting to take over planet earth
then he met this girl and he changed his mind! then he defect to the humans and defied the aliens! Then a great war will break out and he will be thje leader of the humans! -
(CNY special - Slightly longer)
I told her to meet me after her work and our date venue was at her house rooftop. I was there long before the appointed time. Thinking of what to tell her, thinking about the shocking truth behind my true identity, my true self.
Confusion was overwhelming me as I sat above the water tank and observed Singapore. All was too beautiful, like a dream. Am I waking myself up too soon?
After the initial day we met, the beast within me never acts upon me ever since. What has happened? I knew not. Granny told me this is work of what folks called it ‘Love.’ Does Love has the power to draws the evil essence in my life?
What exactly is love? I know no love – in my life, survival is the only thing I knew. When I was young, I was despised and my parents were murdered. Bitterness and rancorous residue are only elements that were left behind. I was turned when Granny was hunting my sire and successful annihilated him, though she couldn’t save me from the metamorphosis. Granny took pity and didn’t destroy me but instead, she guides me and tried to find ways and means to undo my transformation. I had few friends, because people found me eccentric and avoid. Crystal was my only close friend and somehow, only to her, I could communicate well.
The time has come to reveal; but deep within me I was afraid, I was scared that she will avoid me once she knew about this. I couldnÂ’t help but to feel inferior because I wasnÂ’t normal and wasnÂ’t leading a normal life.
I know she is the solution key to my suffering, but I don’t know how could she help me. I experienced several feelings for the first time, not knowing what it was – it was Crystal who taught me the meaning and allows a chance for me to learn. I guess she is teaching me the way of life – Yes! It must be it! The way of life.
I sensed her presence.
The entrance door creaked opened.
‘Leo, why are we meeting up here?’
I was silent, totally absorb in admiring the starry red sky. In fact, her presence sets my pulse racing – I still haven’t come to a conclusion yet.
Crystal climbed her way up and sat beside me. The atmosphere grew extremely tense. She puts her arms around me and gentle bit my earlobe.
‘Tell me what had happened?’ she whispered.
‘What if I tell you that I have been keeping something from you. Would you be angry?’
‘Don’t be silly. If you have something to keep from me, you only heed what I have told you – you cannot be too frank at times,’ Crystal laughed.
‘No Crystal. I am serious.’
Looking at my stern appearance, she knew that I wasnÂ’t joking. Gradually, she regained her composure and kept real quiet.
‘So…?’
‘Ok answer me this: How do you define our relation?’
What? Defining our relation? I don’t even know what is going on – how am I supposed to define? Man, this is getting sticky.
‘Don’t know what is going on?!? Don’t you… don’t you even feel anything special when you are with me?’
I was silent by her sudden burst of emotions. I could see watery tears emerging from her eyes. I think I said something that I shouldn’t, but I was very determined to get my message across her. I am sick and tired of living a double life – I need to pour everything tonight.
‘Listen to me, I feel every comfortable when I am with you…’
‘Ok that’s GOOD enough, don’t you want to be with me?’
‘I CAN’T!’
‘WHY?’
‘Because I am not human; I am a half vampire!’
Crystal was staring deep into my eyes and I could feel a raging anger brewing beneath her pretty face. She couldnÂ’t believe all that was said in just mere five minutes and a drop of tear rolled down her cheek.
‘Even if you don’t love me, you don’t have to come out with such a lame excuse to reject me…’
‘No… I am not…’
‘Then WHY did you came to my rescue on that day? And why did you meet me everyday?’
‘That’s because Granny said I needed to seek you…’
‘Seek me? For a reason? Isn’t love the reason why you wanted to meet me?’
I was dumbfounded. An unnatural silence surrounded us, as I was lost for words to explain myself. I know I was wrong to lead her on without even telling her the truth beforehand. Have I really seek her because I fell in love with her or is it because I needed her to cleansed my accursed life? I havenÂ’t figured that out myself.
‘I have mistaken you…’
Crystal leaped off from the water tank and ran off, leaving precious drops of tears as she left. I wanted to chase after her, but I thought that it’s best to allow her time to calm down. Suddenly, I felt very lousy – a guy who couldn’t face up to reality, a guy who escaped and lived in his world of deceits and lies.
I felt raindrops on my arm – It was raining.
Heaven weeping?
(To be continued...)