Love story: Dark Clouds
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FASTER LEH!!!!!!
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jia you jia you. must cherish the moment. capre diem
but mind finishing the story. i hope its a happy ending.
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been reading since the first chapter...
its a nice story..cant wait to see more!!!!
yunhaier.. Jia You!!! -
Selling like pan cakes...
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Chapter 12
It was getting late and the weather hasnÂ’t been very good. I grabbed a cab quickly before I was almost drenched by the coming downpour.
‘Serangoon Central?’ the taxi driver asked.
I was puzzled; how did he know?
‘I remembered I send you here before,’ laughed the taxi driver, ‘and you are wearing the same clothing.’
I wasnÂ’t bothered - my mind was blank. I only wanted to read the letter she gave me.
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Dear Cloud,
I didnÂ’t know where to start and almost didnÂ’t write this letter. It was your call yesterday that moved me. I feel that you have the right to know more about me and through this letter; things will be much clearer.
I have a boyfriend named Steve and we were having a long distance relationship. There are parental objection on his side because I wanted to go over to England to stay with him. I hated my family and didnÂ’t want to hang around in Singapore. This issue has been affecting our relationship and he felt that he has to end them because it was going nowhere.
I was devastated. I went Milk Bar and drown myself in alcohol, only to have met you. When I was drunk, I couldnÂ’t believe my eyes that you looked so much like him. ThatÂ’s why I used your phone to call my own phone, so that I could have your number. Silly right?
I wanted to forget Steve because I couldnÂ’t believe how little faith he has for our relationship. You were there and I tried to find Steve in you. But the more I attempt to find Steve in you, the more I found Cloud - the real you. The Cloud that I gradually fell for after months of recovery. Your unique perception of love, your behaviour, your sincerity and most importantly, being yourself, empowers and draws me nearer to you.
But it wasnÂ’t substantial.
Recently Steve emailed me and told me that I could go over. He had finally managed to settle the parental objection and wanted to patch back with me.
I asked myself: how? It was torturous. I kept crying; torn between choosing someone who dumped the relationship and had me stranded alone and someone who has been always there for me without expecting anything in return and picked me up when I fell. You are special because you respected my personal privacy. You never asked - you only stood quietly in a corner, always there for me. You are like a holiday inn - a stay I wished that I could be here forever.
I cannot bear to leave you because I know once I leave the shores of this holiday inn, there is not way I can return. Time would have washed me far away and it would be a no-return trip. I can only preserve a shrine within my memories, to remind me that this special someone ever walked into my life and left footprints. It is those footprints that changed me lifeÂ… changed my soulÂ…
I will be leaving within this week. I guess, I could only sayÂ… IÂ’m sorry.
I love you, but only if we met earlier.
Rain
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My heart was torn and shattered into a million pieces. I could almost hear the pains of those tinkering sounds as if every fallen piece was a part of my soul. It was also as if all was ran by fate and churned by destiny. The bottled up feelings finally imploded and tears leaked from my eyes.
I was crying.
(To be continued...) -
Oh why the story has to come to this? So sad for Cloud. -
it does say.. "to be continued"Originally posted by ChrisYX:
Oh why the story has to come to this? So sad for Cloud.
was looking for that part haha if not wah.. -
How about Cloud going to airport to stop her from leaving?Originally posted by Ecxentrique:it does say.. "to be continued"
was looking for that part haha if not wah.. 
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still the title of the story.. dark clouds...
not very "bright" i wonder how dark will the ending be? Crying clouds = dark clouds? cos about to rain??
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wah sad sia...
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Originally posted by Yunhaier:
oi,Yun..u r the man for her,u will with her when she most neede help,so go save her from the monster
[b]Chapter 12
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Dear Cloud,
I didnÂ’t know where to start and almost didnÂ’t write this letter. It was your call yesterday that moved me. I feel that you have the right to know more about me and through this letter; things will be much clearer.
I have a boyfriend named Steve and we were having a long distance relationship. There are parental objection on his side because I wanted to go over to England to stay with him. I hated my family and didnÂ’t want to hang around in Singapore. This issue has been affecting our relationship and he felt that he has to end them because it was going nowhere.
I was devastated. I went Milk Bar and drown myself in alcohol, only to have met you. When I was drunk, I couldnÂ’t believe my eyes that you looked so much like him. ThatÂ’s why I used your phone to call my own phone, so that I could have your number. Silly right?
I wanted to forget Steve because I couldnÂ’t believe how little faith he has for our relationship. You were there and I tried to find Steve in you. But the more I attempt to find Steve in you, the more I found Cloud - the real you. The Cloud that I gradually fell for after months of recovery. Your unique perception of love, your behaviour, your sincerity and most importantly, being yourself, empowers and draws me nearer to you.
But it wasnÂ’t substantial.
Recently Steve emailed me and told me that I could go over. He had finally managed to settle the parental objection and wanted to patch back with me.
I asked myself: how? It was torturous. I kept crying; torn between choosing someone who dumped the relationship and had me stranded alone and someone who has been always there for me without expecting anything in return and picked me up when I fell. You are special because you respected my personal privacy. You never asked - you only stood quietly in a corner, always there for me. You are like a holiday inn - a stay I wished that I could be here forever.
I cannot bear to leave you because I know once I leave the shores of this holiday inn, there is not way I can return. Time would have washed me far away and it would be a no-return trip. I can only preserve a shrine within my memories, to remind me that this special someone ever walked into my life and left footprints. It is those footprints that changed me lifeÂ… changed my soulÂ…
I will be leaving within this week. I guess, I could only sayÂ… IÂ’m sorry.
I love you, but only if we met earlier.
Rain
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(To be continued...)[/b]
Originally posted by ChrisYX
How about Cloud going to airport to stop her from leaving?
Good Idea but don't you think this ending is a bit like MVP Qing Ren?
Except he never did reach in time.....how about u going to her house everyday and doing everything to stop her since there is a week left -
sad sad,,,
but i think maybe we can expect the story will turn wif a twist later.... -
why like that!!!! *takes another kleenex and blows her nose...
but question hor.. the gal berry rich leh.. want to go england can just go
can we all start a "send cloud to england to bash up ex and win pretty rain's heart" fund ah? i chip in one buck -
Hmm.... Is it gonna be True Love - releases and not ask for selfish gains but bless her happiness in her life?
OR Love is blind - she'll will be happy only with you.
OR Could Tiao Lao si
Muster Yun, unleash your powers please.
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nice........... /me wait eagerly for the next part~~ cool~~
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im still waiting too..
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Ok... I will post everything on 17 April - which marks the One Month chase into the story.
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This is heart wrenching.....hope there is a twist to the ending.
Yun, not only are you a cool AA, your story rocks! You are helluva writer -
erm.. may i know is this extracted out from a novel? or.. is this true story? its a nice story..
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Fairytale ending would be perfect..
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oh no...heart broken Cloud
wat's next???
sits and wait
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coundown 1 day and 42 mins to 17th Apr for the final part of the story!
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Is this based, at least partially, on real life events?
This is great actually, it's like those soapy drama series, u know it's kua zhang, but u cannot stop reading....
Maybe someone else can start another "series" after this one end. From the tone of the story, should be ending...
BTW, pls dun make the gal get cancer/die in accident/got murdered/commit sucide/require organ donation hor..... -
come to think of it, the waiting time for each new chapter makes the whole story even more captivating. if Yun had written all in one shot, perhaps the effect might not be as good.
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Sorry ar, Marketing Strategy to boost AA's rating.Originally posted by Paperboat:come to think of it, the waiting time for each new chapter makes the whole story even more captivating. if Yun had written all in one shot, perhaps the effect might not be as good.