Love story: Dark Clouds
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Wah....Originally posted by Yunhaier:Sorry ar, Marketing Strategy to boost AA's rating.
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Originally posted by Yunhaier:Sorry ar, Marketing Strategy to boost AA's rating.
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wow, yunhaier, i have only just read all this and i must say you have a talent.
Whether the story is true or not isnt important.
Its captured my imagination and I thnk I'm starting to become a hopeless romantic! aaaarrggggghhhhhh
looking forward to a happy ending
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Chapter 13
I finally reached. I became like a zombie; totally dead and lifeless. It was as if some part of me disappeared and never returned. The pain was excruciating. I wanted to yell, but my heart made no sound as though it was sucked into the black of hole of circumstances.
I shouldnÂ’t even have expected anything at all. We were such good friends right? Maybe good friends should always remain as good friends. Love has been around, but itÂ’s about us, the choice we made that made a difference. I can choose to love her, but doesnÂ’t mean that I have to be with her. Illogical? I called it respect.
‘Why are you giving excuse for your failure. You know deep inside, you don’t feel this way…’
I shook my head violently to dispel that thought. I was going insane every second.
‘STOP! STOP! STOP all these!’ I was screaming to myself.
Then, my phone rung and I had a chance to refocus my attention. It was a private number.
‘Hello?’ I asked and there was no reply. I knew it was Rain.
‘Anything you want to say to me before I go off?’
‘It doesn’t matter to me whether you chose him or not because my love for you is more than just possessing you. Since the day I knew you, never had I have the opportunity to make any choices – It’s always you who determine what we should do… when we should leave, when we should run, where to eat, who have to eat the peas… sitting by the swings… your letters or even going home or even going over to England.
Have I ever say ‘No’ to you?
NoÂ… because love had taught me to respect and be happy. Why? Because its YOU.
You made the choice.
The one decision I ever made for myself, concerning usÂ… is to love you. DonÂ’t have to say sorry because itÂ’s my decision to.Â’
I knew she was crying too.
(To be continued...) -
Final Chapter
‘What you want to eat?’ asked Paul as he glanced uninterestedly at the food stores. There was a large queue everywhere and Paul hated huge queue.
There was absolutely no contact with Rain since the day we last met. I knew she had gone over to England. My mind was tired of pondering. If I knew her story beforehand, I wouldn’t have led myself so far. It was a critical stab in my heart – a stab that I wouldn’t know how long it would take me to heal.
Have I regretted? Not at all. She has a special role in my life; she widened my thinking, taught me how to love and the priceless value of a special someone. It was bitter inside, but I knew the core was sweet. It was useless to have my girlfriend around me while her heart lies with someone else. I learned that having impacts in peopleÂ’s life served a greater purpose than one possible relationship. Our connections were like dark clouds - she was one torrential rain that devastated my land, but renewal was beautiful after her appearance, because the soil was rich and water was plenty.
I was the catalysis that made that happened - this simple dream that existed. I was the fleeting clouds.
Woman should never take man for granted.
I have to heal my wounds.
I need time.
I touched my tummy.
‘Chicken Rice please…’
~The End~
(Names has been changed to protect identity) -
How many times have we fall in love but never realize that a quiet feeling has claim home within some secluded corners of our heart? We resist to acknowledge the feeling because there are incomprehensible reasons pulling us back, like a footbrake.
How many times have we fall in love but never could we be with the one that we truly love even though feelings was reciprocated?
Karmic relationship has taught me that some relationships were never meant to be in the first place. Love has sunk in because of the astrological bonds in our soul – not because love will continue to blossom from previous harmonious relationship. Some people walked into our lives, left so much memories during that phrase, and recalling it is as though we returned back to a bushes of thorns – our painful growth, our past… our regrets.
There are so many things in love which I knew now, yet none of them could change any details of my helpless past. This is called the painful connection, for without the four of ‘them’… there wouldn’t be any yunhaier of today.
There has to be growth before enlightenment take place.
There has to be cosmic lessons before growth take place.
There has to be tears before cosmic lessons take place.
There has to be a beginning before tears to take place.
Personal note: I would have fcuking turn evil if I didn’t survive 01 crisis. My memory angel, you kept me intact and I know you will continue to do so. Hope you will come back – it’s not about missing you... love had been locked down. CloUdiSm theory states Fantasy Creature, I understand... but my wisdom will shield and guide me
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nice story .. i made a compilation to send my frens .. hope its alrite .. then i guess i shall credit u with ur nick at the end ..
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So do I get any money?Originally posted by Saint`:nice story .. i made a compilation to send my frens .. hope its alrite .. then i guess i shall credit u with ur nick at the end .. -
well done yunnie!!
was waiting for that saying..
did rain leave becos cloud did not ask her to stay or something or rather... i can't quite remember eheheh... -
Originally posted by jOhO:well done yunnie!!
was waiting for that saying..
did rain leave becos cloud did not ask her to stay or something or rather... i can't quite remember eheheh... Remember? Eh, I am a little confuse here.
Anyway she had to leave irregardless of whether Cloud had say or not.
Circumstances...
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wow nice story yun ! i'm speachless liao.. dunno wad to say after ur story.. it's very touching...
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Leaf's departure is because of Wind's pursuit.Originally posted by jOhO:well done yunnie!!
was waiting for that saying..
did rain leave becos cloud did not ask her to stay or something or rather... i can't quite remember eheheh...
Or because Tree didn't ask her to stay~
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there was a statement.. from another story, was it written by u...Originally posted by Yunhaier: Remember? Eh, I am a little confuse here.
Anyway she had to leave irregardless of whether Cloud had say or not.
Circumstances...
something like: did rain leave becos cloud did not ask her to stay, or becos ........................
i can't remember the rest... hmm. -
Originally posted by jOhO:there was a statement.. from another story, was it written by u...
something like: did rain leave becos cloud did not ask her to stay, or becos ........................
i can't remember the rest... hmm. Huh? Which one?
Is it the Wind, Tree and Leaf thingy? That one is an email - not written by mui. -
*Applause applause*
Thank you for a wonderful story.
Will there be anymore to hear from you? -
oh.. nbz.. ok sorree i was confused hahahaOriginally posted by Yunhaier: Huh? Which one?
Is it the Wind, Tree and Leaf thingy? That one is an email - not written by mui.
anyway, this story is much much better.
but hor, haiz ending is "sad" even tho, yes, cloud triumphed in a way that he knew the true feeling of love, in your opinion. -
A very good story. Well said and well told. Teaches us about what is love and growing up. To respect and be happy about loving a person. Well done YunHaiEr.
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sad ending. poor guy. big heart. same choice i will make. too bad its a sad 1. (-_-|||) but i must say that guy that mess up rain dont deserve rain at all. too bad good guys never gets the gal. whoever the cloud is. cheer up. rem this there are alot of us on this planet who know how u feel. :X so cheer up.
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Originally posted by AdAptAliS:*Applause applause*
Thank you for a wonderful story.
Will there be anymore to hear from you? Next time maybe?
Yunhaier very busy now. -
thanks yun for the story.... my heart goes out to cloud... guess sometimes the one that impact us most is not the one that is meant to be...
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heard that you have posted stories before,,, anyway for me to find those stories again? i searched in aunt agony but was only able to find threads up to page 18 only.. me interested to read read...
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hey... a great story! cheers, dude!
a beautiful ending which is true and does not attempt to be fake.. the whole story was very locally-flavoured which i find easy to relate to
and yes, i love the last chapter... i found great meaning in it
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thank you yunhaier for the touching story u had written..
well i learn something about wat's love....
well done..
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Good good goood story
>muack yunhaier<
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