I need critics on my new song!

• blue_kelvinsg

  2 Feb 06, 14:30

  take a listen and tell me how u find it?
  
  http://s32.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0UM4OFU3Y20TY31466YQ975S4M
• FBI

  2 Feb 06, 14:39

  not bad i can say, will sounds more better with drums.
• thousandisland

  2 Feb 06, 14:40

  it's not bad... can i take a look at the lyrics.
• ^spidee^

  2 Feb 06, 14:41

  Nice! Are you auditioning for Singapore Idol?
• blue_kelvinsg

  2 Feb 06, 14:42

  Originally posted by ^spidee^:

  Nice! Are you auditioning for Singapore Idol?

  yups. haha. but im enlisting soon. so again, i dun think so. ha.. sad
• ^spidee^

  2 Feb 06, 14:48

  Originally posted by blue_kelvinsg:

  yups. haha. but im enlisting soon. so again, i dun think so. ha.. sad

  Can defer?
• blue_kelvinsg

  2 Feb 06, 14:50

  dun think so. its silly to defer becus of sg idol rites? ha. can always join next time ma. bbut im not that fastastic also la
• ^spidee^

  2 Feb 06, 14:52

  Originally posted by blue_kelvinsg:

  dun think so. its silly to defer becus of sg idol rites? ha. can always join next time ma. bbut im not that fastastic also la

  Actually, why don't you give it a shot? Taufik was a NSF himself when he auditioned.
• S_T_F_U

  2 Feb 06, 14:58

  hmm... nice..
• ShutterBug

  2 Feb 06, 15:23

  Your chord progressions are acceptable, not bad. Good arrangement, very patterned but not overly predictable.
  
  Your voice is ok, but see if you can develope 'range' - or see where your break-point is.
  
  Song appeal; I'd say it sounds current, but a wee bit 'so so', in other words, does not hit me from take off.
  
  Overall, quite acceptable, but you need to work on DICTION. Pronounce your words clearly, don't sound vague.
  
  Keep it up, dude.
• blue_kelvinsg

  2 Feb 06, 15:29

  ha. yah. heh it will sound better i believe when its done in professional studio recording (:
• tt3

  2 Feb 06, 15:36

  gd...
• ShutterBug

  2 Feb 06, 15:36

  Originally posted by blue_kelvinsg:

  ha. yah. heh it will sound better i believe when its done in professional studio recording (:

  In a pro-studio, all the more you will have to work on your diction. Timing and pitch perfection will also be amplified. Every element in your composition becomes magnified.
  
  So, work on it. Polish it into a mirror shine!
  
  It's alreay good - make it commercial quality.
• blue_kelvinsg

  2 Feb 06, 16:00

  
• Master -_-

  2 Feb 06, 16:09

  Absolutely Horrendous
• blue_kelvinsg

  2 Feb 06, 16:39

  Originally posted by Master -_-:

  Absolutely Horrendous

  thank you
• newmanmback

  2 Feb 06, 19:36

  i also need constructive critics on my photos
  
  http://sg32.yousendityourself.com/EYUS!#$56SDJ
  
  
• laurence82

  2 Feb 06, 19:42

  u disappear till where liao?
  
  still got stalked by yunhaier?
• d3sT1nY

  2 Feb 06, 21:17

  cool.. i rather listen to u than taufik.. XD
• TwinTurbo_Supra

  2 Feb 06, 21:44

  nice.
  
  it was in G was it?
• Agenda

  2 Feb 06, 22:33

  Quite good, To a unknown person.. He may think its some professional singer's song
• blue_kelvinsg

  2 Feb 06, 22:59

  Originally posted by d3sT1nY:

  cool.. i rather listen to u than taufik.. XD

  why?
• blue_kelvinsg

  2 Feb 06, 23:04

  Originally posted by TwinTurbo_Supra:

  nice.
  
  it was in G was it?

  yups. but i did alternate tuning so it will not sound smiliar with ebgdaE (:
• de_middle

  3 Feb 06, 13:44

  Good, great work!!!
• Mao x 2

  3 Feb 06, 13:48

  Yeah... That's a good one.. Keep it up!