10 minutes.... (story)
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aiya mus write the main char good guy ma, wait bad guy no1 wanna readOriginally posted by Axelheat755:wah lanz... why all the bad stuff happen to ur family members only?
what about u? so heng nothing happen?
we wanna know more about u not ur family la -
faster continue your story lah.
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good guys finish last lehOriginally posted by RaTtY8l:aiya mus write the main char good guy ma, wait bad guy no1 wanna read -
u write bad guys ur thread will get more response
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eh..why no turn up for outing?Originally posted by Axelheat755:u write bad guys ur thread will get more response -
ya lor, why nv turn up? [put our aeroplane sia.
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wah wait i get flame sia
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oie where ur story? faster cont
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Where Where Where??
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Part 10... Grand finale...
5 months just pass like this. Bro has been releases from drug rehab centre. An soon, he found a job. I think he has relised his wrong and he will not touch any drugs again.
Things returned to its normal state and mum started to participate in some of the community centre activities. I was happy to see mum's smile, although there is a bit of sadness. I could see mum really love dad. I think it is time for me to forget everything and start everything again.
"Eeeeeee" *Crashed!!!*
I did not see the car coming.
*Crashed*
I feel nothing.
I could only see darkness.
I regret not forgiving my dad.
They say before a person dies, he could see his whole life just before he dies.
How true it is...
-End of story-
By Ratty81
Thank you for all the support
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all your total 10 part took less than 5 minutes to read. lol. maybe put more content next time.
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wait too long become too boringOriginally posted by rathcycle:all your total 10 part took less than 5 minutes to read. lol. maybe put more content next time. -
any stories on touching friendships?
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lol think no ba, i dun hav much experienceOriginally posted by OasisBlue:any stories on touching friendships?
btw is my ending allright? -
wait!.... wait!.... wait....Originally posted by RaTtY8l:Part 10... Grand finale...
5 months just pass like this. Bro has been releases from drug rehab centre. An soon, he found a job. I think he has relised his wrong and he will not touch any drugs again.
Things returned to its normal state and mum started to participate in some of the community centre activities. I was happy to see mum's smile, although there is a bit of sadness. I could see mum really love dad. I think it is time for me to forget everything and start everything again.
"Eeeeeee" *Crashed!!!*
I did not see the car coming.
*Crashed*
I feel nothing.
I could only see darkness.
I regret not forgiving my dad.
They say before a person dies, he could see his whole life just before he dies.
How true it is...
-End of story-
By Ratty81
Thank you for all the support .
you can't finish the story. where is the part on the rat. -
no rat laOriginally posted by LinYu:wait!.... wait!.... wait....
you can't finish the story. where is the part on the rat. -
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Originally posted by alexkusu:
yea its the end
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Originally posted by RaTtY8l:no rat la
anyway nice story -
thank youOriginally posted by LinYu:
anyway nice story -
wat outing?Originally posted by StarPuppy:eh..why no turn up for outing? 
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i feel the ending abit too sudden lei...
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wah cb...
can u cont the story in 3rd person view? like say how ur brother prepare ur funeral, how nice the curry tasted, how much white gold.... ya da. -
u die liao of cos everything end liao ma.
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nnnnnnnoooooooooooooo!!!!Originally posted by RaTtY8l:u die liao of cos everything end liao ma.