10 minutes.... (story)
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cos when he kena accident haven die ma den the insurance agent visit him when he is dying and tat time he left the message n tell the agent to pass to the main leadOriginally posted by browniebaobao:salah leh..
how come the bangle was passed to mdm ong by the insurance agent?
should be the traffic police mah..
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good job nowcanyouaddinsomethingunimaginablelikethefatherjumpingoutofhiscoffinorsomethang
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u think tis is awat? might as well add in dragonball n wish the father back to life?Originally posted by praetor81:good job nowcanyouaddinsomethingunimaginablelikethefatherjumpingoutofhiscoffinorsomethang
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fwah the insuranec agent beri efficient hor?!Originally posted by RaTtY8l:cos when he kena accident haven die ma den the insurance agent visit him when he is dying and tat time he left the message n tell the agent to pass to the main lead -
Nevertheless, great story it is, good work
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if the agent efficient us slow, think my story koh yak liaoOriginally posted by browniebaobao:fwah the insuranec agent beri efficient hor?! -
Part 7...
Brother was furious that we did not told him about dad's death. "Have you regard me as part of the family!!!", after saying that, he walked out of the house. Mum just wept and for I didn't know whether to chase my bro or to console my mum.
A few hours later, bro return home. He didn't say anything and went straight into his room. "Mum, I know I am in the wrong. Please forgive me.",said my bro. Finally, for the first time, I saw mum' s smile since dad's death. "I would work hard and support this family mum."
My bro has finally grown up. When he was younger, he world party non-stop everyday. I wonder how did he get into U with those partying? At least, things have settled down, for now....
part 8 coming -
Originally posted by ¡ÚTearsofTheMoon¡Ú:
thank you
[b]Nevertheless, great story it is, good work[/b] -
where is the part with the ratOriginally posted by RaTtY8l:thank you
good work -
Originally posted by LinYu:where is the part with the rat
good work -
father die liao continue story got wat point? what's the point of telling us brother everyday clubbing still can go U?
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Part 8...
Father has left us. So theres only left bro, mum and myself in this house. Somehow, i started to feel bad. I never put myself in my dad's shoe. What if I had a son which hated me for whatever I do???
My bro soon found a job at an MNC. His pay was quite good and mum finally can sit back. He would often bring back his friends and they would chat whole night til the next morning. After some time, his friends does not come as frequently as last time. Then one day, bro would not come back to sleep!
Mum waited for him until 7am, he finally caome back. "Where had you been?!"
"Oh, I went my friend's house and chat whole night.", bro replied. "Mum, I am going work, I will explain when I come back ok?"....
upcoming, part 9 -
any1 got any idea for part 9? i ran out of ideas le lol
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Yea, brother was into MLM. That would unfold alot of surprises.
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i want story. i want story. i want story.
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Part 9...
That night, bro never came back. Mum could not sleep throughout the whole night. She was extremely worried about my bro. We received a call from the police. "Mdm Ong, your son Robert Ong was arrested for comsuming estacy pills."
My mum was devastated. What happen? Why did my bro take drugs? I could not understand why mus he do this at this time. Oh my god. My family is breaking up. But I got to be strong. I cannot fell now. My mum could only rely on me now.
Bro was sent to the drug rehabitation centre for 5 months. We visited him frequently. At fisrt, he could not get used to it and gradually, he became more cheerful and started to resume his joking self. Mum soon became more optismistic and I hope the mightmare that our family was over.... -
FUCK! Where's the MLM story?Originally posted by RaTtY8l:Part 9...
That night, bro never came back. Mum could not sleep throughout the whole night. She was extremely worried about my bro. We received a call from the police. "Mdm Ong, your son Robert Ong was arrested for comsuming estacy pills."
My mum was devastated. What happen? Why did my bro take drugs? I could not understand why mus he do this at this time. Oh my god. My family is breaking up. But I got to be strong. I cannot fell now. My mum could only rely on me now.
Bro was sent to the drug rehabitation centre for 5 months. We visited him frequently. At fisrt, he could not get used to it and gradually, he became more cheerful and started to resume his joking self. Mum soon became more optismistic and I hope the mightmare that our family was over.... -
mlm too common liao la, u wanna see mlm story sgforums got alotOriginally posted by newcomer:FUCK! Where's the MLM story? -
got point oso hor.Originally posted by RaTtY8l:mlm too common liao la, u wanna see mlm story sgforums got alot -
oie part 10! 10 mins up liao, faster leh.
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still haven got idea leh, mayb i end at part 10Originally posted by newcomer:oie part 10! 10 mins up liao, faster leh. -
oie! don't want lah! u started this u gotta end it nicely hor. wait limpeh ji pah ho le si ah!Originally posted by RaTtY8l:still haven got idea leh, mayb i end at part 10 -
Originally posted by newcomer:oie! don't want lah! u started this u gotta end it nicely hor. wait limpeh ji pah ho le si ah!
dun worry la i aso wanna giv it a good ending -
i hunger for more! faster OIE!Originally posted by RaTtY8l:
dun worry la i aso wanna giv it a good ending -
wah lanz... why all the bad stuff happen to ur family members only?
what about u? so heng nothing happen?
we wanna know more about u not ur family la