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Q: write about a time when you went for a holiday but it turn out to be disapointing...
Almost every inch was filled with clothes. That old luggage of mine was so full that it might explode anytime. I was trying my very best to make use of every single inch that the old luggage can contain. The thought of travelling outside my homeland for the first time is making me go crazy. The highly excited me was jumping around like a monkey which just could not wait for the time to depart for the vacation.
It was finally time to carry our big and packed bags into the van. My uncle double checked that everything required was brought along. This is the beginning of my journey outside my homeland for the first time. Rays of the sun shone down fiercely on my uncle's car while the then gentle wind of the air-conditioner caressed our faces.
The thought of the cool theme park, wonderful food and great climate Genting offered raced through my mind. i heard the air temperature of Genting is as cooling as the temperature in my uncle's car.
We passed the causeway which divided Singapore and Malaysia to take a break in a restaurant. The restaurant was quite dirty but as we could not find any other decent places to eat, hence we ate there. After eating, we continued our journey and were finally able to reach our destination, Genting.
After we booked in into a hotel room, I was stuck inside the washroom for quite sometime. It was not because of their washroom being nice, but due to a stomachache i was having. I felt very ill that day and my uncle brought me deleted a doctor. The search for a doctor deleted took quite a long time as we were unfamiliar with the place.
After the doctor's injection, i slept in the hotel and that was how i spent my first day outside Singapore. When i was asleep, my uncle went to the casino and without me as I was underage. Another reason was because I could not leave my bed and so he took the chance to go there
When I woke up, I felt so energized that I could take down a tiger! Maybe this energy was stored deleted when I was resting. There was one thing on my mind -- The Theme Park. I got into my outfit and went off to the hotel lobby without my uncle. The exit of the hotel was open and I saw something I had never expected.
Water drips from the sky down to the ground i was standing. This also means that the Theme Park will be close. I was so sad that i went back to my room and at last, called my uncle to wake up. I ask him what should we do now since we would not be able to enjoy ourselves in the Theme Park. He suggested the Arcade.
I then went to the arcade with my uncle and play there. There not nothing really special about the arcade and i was not in the mood of playing as i has miss the fantastic theme park i am dreaming about.
Soon dark started to fall and we went back to our hotel. The next morning, we went back to our home. This was the ever first holidays i ever went and with such a great disappointment.
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compo is out!!!
can help me check see got any gramma mistake or spelling mistake? i am sure got alot de...
comments are very welcome too!!!
Q: write about a time when you went for a holiday but it turn out to be disapointing...
Almost every inch was filled with clothes. That old luggage of mine was so full that it might explode anytime. I was trying my very best to make use of every single inch that the old luggage can contain. The thought of travelling outside my homeland for the first time is making me go crazy. The highly excited me was jumping around like a monkey which just could not wait for the time to depart for the vacation.
It was finally time to carry our big and packed bags into the van. My uncle double checked that everything required was brought along. This is the beginning of my journey outside my homeland for the first time. Rays of the sun shone down fiercely on my uncle's car while the then gentle wind of the air-conditioner caressed our faces.
The thought of the cool theme park, wonderful food and great climate Genting offered raced through my mind. i heard the air temperature of Genting is as cooling as the temperature in my uncle's car.
We passed the causeway which divided Singapore and Malaysia to take a break in a restaurant. The restaurant was quite dirty but as we could not find any other decent places to eat, hence we ate there. After eating, we continued our journey and were finally able to reach our destination, Genting.
After we booked in into a hotel room, I was stuck inside the washroom for quite sometime. It was not because of their washroom being nice, but due to a stomachache i was having. I felt very ill that day and my uncle brought me deleted a doctor. The search for a doctor deleted took quite a long time as we were unfamiliar with the place.
After the doctor's injection, i slept in the hotel and that was how i spent my first day outside Singapore. When i was asleep, my uncle went to the casino and without me as I was underage. Another reason was because I could not leave my bed and so he took the chance to go there
When I woke up, I felt so energized that I could take down a tiger! Maybe this energy was stored deleted when I was resting. There was one thing on my mind -- The Theme Park. I got into my outfit and went off to the hotel lobby without my uncle. The exit of the hotel was open and I saw something I had never expected.
Water droplets were dripping from the sky down to the ground I was standing on. This also meant that the Theme Park will be closed. I was so sad that I went back to my room and then called my uncle to wake up. I asked him what should we do at that time since we would not be able to enjoy ourselves in the Theme Park. He suggested the Arcade.
I then went to the arcade with my uncle and played there. There was nothing really special about the arcade and I was not in the mood to play as I had missed going to the fantastic theme park that I had been dreaming about.
Soon, it was evening and we went back to our hotel. The next morning, we started on our trip home. This was the ever first holiday I had ever went and was met with such a great disappointment.
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write about the slots machines
all the aunties on the right, left, in front, behind me all winning........me the oni one losing......knn............... -
gundams came and destroyed everything.
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thanks! anymore thing can contribute?Originally posted by FireIce:write about the slots machines
all the aunties on the right, left, in front, behind me all winning........me the oni one losing......knn............... -
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thanks! can you stop your nonsense?Originally posted by Ito_^:gundams came and destroyed everything.
lol
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You could rite about a water park in Malaysia where you ride down the water slide into an empty pool of concrete... That happened to me once... They begged my mom not to sue...
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lol...Originally posted by MohamedF:You could rite about a water park in Malaysia where you ride down the water slide into an empty pool of concrete... That happened to me once... They begged my mom not to sue...
but second day is raining, no themepark... close...
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ei, are u even of age to enter the casino ah?
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......Originally posted by FireIce:ei, are u even of age to enter the casino ah?
i 4got about this part when i posted above.......haha!
ya hor... i also forget...
but nvm lah dun care about the teacher...
since you give me something i cant you, i punish you by giving me another idea! lol -
ok i know what...
since if casino cannt..
then u go aracade...but the buttons are spolit
wasted ur tokens..
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am i even obligated to give u ideas in the first place?Originally posted by popikachu:since you give me something i cant you, i punish you by giving me another idea! lol
it's YOUR homework leh -
tats rite..nv talk back to
The Hottest and Coolest Moderatress in Singapore!
now this is what u get 
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so fierce....Originally posted by FireIce:am i even obligated to give u ideas in the first place?
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cannot cannot really cannot!Originally posted by popikachu:thanks! can you stop your nonsense?
lol
yup
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thats my line...Originally posted by Ito_^:cannot cannot really cannot!
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Perhap u go on the wrong time...next time do some research before travelling....
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Looks at why at the first place u are so enthusiastic about at the trip?
Perhaps can slot in your favourite singer who is supposed to hold a mini fans gettogether/qian ming hui at Genting. But turns out he or she had a bout of flu and thus had to cancelled.
But hold and behold, happens so that both you and your family stays at the SAME hotel as your favourite singer!
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How many words?
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but like this not disapoint liao lehOriginally posted by BÃ¥seline:Looks at why at the first place u are so enthusiastic about at the trip?
Perhaps can slot in your favourite singer who is supposed to hold a mini fans gettogether/qian ming hui at Genting. But turns out he or she had a bout of flu and thus had to cancelled.
But hold and behold, happens so that both you and your family stays at the SAME hotel as your favourite singer!
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500 words...Originally posted by Patrik:How many words?
I guess writing about those 3 days should be enough bah.
but my languge is horrible...
if you have saw my last compo i written on chit chat, you will know my english is really like dunno what like that...
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wu zun stays just next room.Originally posted by BÃ¥seline:Looks at why at the first place u are so enthusiastic about at the trip?
Perhaps can slot in your favourite singer who is supposed to hold a mini fans gettogether/qian ming hui at Genting. But turns out he or she had a bout of flu and thus had to cancelled.
But hold and behold, happens so that both you and your family stays at the SAME hotel as your favourite singer!
The rest of the story.... I hand over to you.
and when i was bathing, i heard a knock on the door
i opened the door, wearing only a towel around my mid-section and a towel on my head
he smiled sheepishly and asked to borrow pepper.........
i was so stunned tt the towel dropped. the one on my head.
i so disappointed bcos the mid-section one neber drop. knn. -
I think FI gave u the best bits.Originally posted by popikachu:but like this not disapoint liao leh