Ok ok, my bad...Originally posted by Marco_Simone:Gulf of Oman,the state of Oman is nowhere near Pakistan!
Yeah, like i said its a draftOriginally posted by allentyb:It is better for you, to re write the whole story
do u need help with the facts?Originally posted by Evolution IX MR:Yeah, like i said its a draft
After you guys given your comments i will take appropiate action with the novel and rewrite if necessary
your english too noob to write novels...Originally posted by Evolution IX MR:Yeah, like i said its a draft
After you guys given your comments i will take appropiate action with the novel and rewrite if necessary
Like i said, i dont use too much overpowering english on draftsOriginally posted by rathcycle:your english too noob to write novels...
please drop the idea before i give you more degrading opinions.
its ok.Originally posted by Marco_Simone:OMG,your story is full of factual errors.
OMAN in Pakistan???
There are no PLATOONS in the air force also.
You should go EASG server... Ping lower... I think i may have seen you before...Originally posted by Evolution IX MR:Nick4532, Gunnery Sergeant.Roams around Gamearena server #18