Help! Do me a favour guys(Writing Novel)
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Ok ok, my bad...Originally posted by Marco_Simone:Gulf of Oman,the state of Oman is nowhere near Pakistan!
Then Oman is at where? -
Hmm... let me think first...
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It is better for you, to re write the whole story
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Yeah, like i said its a draftOriginally posted by allentyb:It is better for you, to re write the whole story
After you guys given your comments i will take appropiate action with the novel and rewrite if necessary -
do u need help with the facts?Originally posted by Evolution IX MR:Yeah, like i said its a draft
After you guys given your comments i will take appropiate action with the novel and rewrite if necessary -
Yeah, that'd be much might appreciated.
Cause you see, i noob on army matters but would like to contribute a armed forces novel -
your english too noob to write novels...Originally posted by Evolution IX MR:Yeah, like i said its a draft
After you guys given your comments i will take appropiate action with the novel and rewrite if necessary
please drop the idea before i give you more degrading opinions. -
Like i said, i dont use too much overpowering english on draftsOriginally posted by rathcycle:your english too noob to write novels...
please drop the idea before i give you more degrading opinions.
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its ok.Originally posted by Marco_Simone:OMG,your story is full of factual errors.
OMAN in Pakistan???
There are no PLATOONS in the air force also.
anything wrong just say "you think its so easy to write a novel you right one lor"
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Do you plan to publish this as well?
If you can even sell 10 copies, let me know -
You should go EASG server... Ping lower... I think i may have seen you before...Originally posted by Evolution IX MR:Nick4532, Gunnery Sergeant.Roams around Gamearena server #18 -
There's one very important thing you need to know, your story need to keep the reader captivated to your stories, you need descriptive words, words that are slightly more "cheem" and more indepth.
Facts need to be corrected, if you're actually planning to write a novel. If this is a composition or something, the readers will probably grumble a little but a novel? Heck, they will be using this book to wipe their ass.
Understand which group of readers you're targeting for. If you're targeting for those who are interested in dogfights, airplanes etc, you really need to give more info. If you're targeting those who have a slight inclination towards the subject, interesting facts, slight humor and plot twisting will be nice.
It seems that you're rushing through the story, readers will need to know more about the pilot, their life in their training (not something as mundane as repeated simulator trainings etc).
My best suggestions for you now is to read lots of best selling books and understand how they write it, why the readers will continue reading their books and learn how to form cliffhangers of your own.