Originally posted by Agenda:You know, if you quote names in a story you write, there is a large possiblity that you are interested in that fella in real life, i.e. Ashley?
Just now I went downstairs to buy breakfast but I also needed to go alter this new white jeans I bought yesterday but this white jeans hor.. is not trigger style de but is straight but more like bootcut so I need to go alter lor if not not very nice looking
Then I only had $50 note in my wallet so I don't want spend so I go withdraw money when I took my $20 and wanted to go into the market a man with a carousel blocked my path then I said nb cb la..
he say sorry boss then turn back to let me through.. damn, i felt so great then
then suddenly i saw the most beautiful girl ever then i wanted to follow her to see where she going when suddenly 2 cops came out of nowhere, they were chasing a man about 1.7m tall, thin and wearing a cap.. i wanted to grab a hold of the man as he ran past in as i am a good citizen but also because i wanna impress the girl
then i turn and grab the man but wow i grabbed the boobs of a filipino maid.. she suddenly screamed in some language alien to me then the fat cop fired at the fleeing man.. i don't why i shouted noooooooo!!! and tried to block the bullet but it still hit the man then by instinct i ran off then the 2 cops chased after me..
i hijacked a cabbie on the roadside and force the driver off and he was like knnbccb la
i drove to changi airport then took a disguise as a FBI agent then went on board.. i saw the most beautiful girl ever again then I decided to go talk to her and i found out that her name is Ashley.
what a beautiful name
then suddenly the plane went into turbulence and the oxygen masks came down and holy shit, there were snakes on the plane and this big cobra wanted to bite but with my ninja abilities i grabbed it and pulled it apart into 2
then our pilot died and i volunteered to land the plane, the police decided that in my valour effort, will not charge me.. i asked ashley if i could see her again she said that she will call me.. then smiled at her while she turned away and got on a cab..
then i thought, i never gave her my number!!!!
F[b]UCK!![/b]
sorry i don't know any girl by the name of ashleyOriginally posted by chanjyj:You know, if you quote names in a story you write, there is a large possiblity that you are interested in that fella in real life, i.e. Ashley?
And you must be living near me.. the round market![]()
harnor. I also say.Originally posted by club18:banzie story alot nicer.![]()
x2. wen i read title abt de gunshot, i was thinkin shoot bird ah?!Originally posted by popikachu:TMD i thought really got gunshot where....
Well, banzie story nicer!
BullshOriginally posted by jetabt767400:Nice primary school standard story line.
Content: 20/40
Composition: 15/30
Grammar and Language: 14/30
Still fail by one mark, cause all ur knn and such, sorry, teacher also cannot help liao...
Lols.

