Angel (An NSF Story)
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Now mooku knows MC is naggy.Originally posted by M©+square:You know i'm not good with stories.
But if you want me to preach, i can.
Cheers
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Originally posted by MooKu:Now mooku knows MC is naggy.
Can arrange for appointment if you want to know more. HAhaha.
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dun wan. i still want my life (i'm allergic to nags)Originally posted by M©+square:
Can arrange for appointment if you want to know more. HAhaha.
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Erm.. Aunty Yun, when u going to post the final chapteR??
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nice story...haha..cant wait for the last chapter
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This is one of the best story i ever read on sgfourms!!!
Cheers man!!!
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Trying to download the song, but taking a very long time
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we are still waiting...
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please?
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I am dying for the next chapter!!!
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I cannot die! I still got many things to fulfil!Originally posted by geodome:I am dying for the next chapter!!!
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haha.. havent had that much time to lurk around.. but here i am, and for once i have time to read =D....
before i get sent to hell in 5 days..
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Hi Yun,
I'm one of the lurkers ard haha, but i must say yr story is really fantasitc, seem so real n link very well no missing contents.
thats y i decided to upz yr post n post a reply
Hope to c my nick at the ending of yr story.
btw when is the last chapter coming out? i wan to be in time to cathch the last chapter
cheers 
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Signed up to say its really an awesome story!
Keep up the good job!
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Great story, keep it up. Although I have never know any nurses, but the knowledge of other people winning the girl's heart touch close to me. For the feeling of knowing that she was attached was the greatest feeling I had ever felt, when all her close friends and my friends knew about it and I was the last to know until i saw them together
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Chapter 14
My mind sank into anarchy; I had to coerce my feet into walking – they have refused to accept commands from the brain. And I wasn’t thinking right – everything was negative, negative and more negative.
Perhaps it was rude of me to merely run off without bidding farewell, but the more I thought about it, the more it seemed like a replica of my past. I may be accepting failure graciously, but that doesnÂ’t mean I am able to have immunity to hurts. I am still flesh and bloodÂ… an average Joe off the street - I do bleed emotionally.
Then I saw Angeline, silhouetted against the light emitted from the lamppost.
My breath grew heavier, with every step I trend forward.
There was no escape for me this time; maybe I should just face my fear.
‘I apologize for running away without saying bye…’
‘Why did you run?’
‘I didn’t run away from you; I ran away from myself.’
‘Why do you even have to run in the first place?’
‘Because… I had to love an Angel, who has better choices outside me… I had to evade and sacrifice myself to a greater cause…’
I saw shimmering tears in AngelineÂ’s eyes; then she dashed towards me and threw me a hug.
‘Why do you think she wouldn’t choose you?’
‘That’s because I understand the theory behind giving the best for the ones you love. I know I am not good enough, but what matters is your happiness – not mine. I will be as equally happy if my Angel is similarly blessed by someone else.’
I felt my eyes becoming watery; I had to look at the night sky to stop the tears from rolling off. Simultaneously, I tried to shape a pseudo-smile, acting as a façade to hide my grief within.
‘Sometimes when we give up, we didn’t know we are so close to succeeding…’
Suddenly, my spirit lifted and I waited for her to continue.
‘…I think that you are the best; would you reserve yourself for me?’
Finishing her words, her lips came to touch mine as I held her hands and clasped it tightly. Kiss is a lovely trick designed by nature when words become superfluous.
Is not a kiss the very autograph of love? Hah!
And Johnny was so damn right – God is fair…God gave me his Angel!
And I knew I had won the battle.
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(Names have been changed to protect identity) -
woo!
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why cry?Originally posted by Patrik:
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awww.
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fwah.. i read chapter 1 nia, nv read liao leh..
so it's not all abt army la?
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Wah.... I think got more readers this time. Ok... Xie xie! Till the next story... see when I free lar.. tmd... shagged.
/me quickly count profit from sales of tickets.
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Hi Yun!Originally posted by Yunhaier:
Xie xie ge wei. yunhaier has upload an original song composition for this story of mine.
Composed by my good friend as well as my tudi.
Remember to right click and save as if download doesn't start.
The file will last about 30 days (Till maybe 13 Sep?), unless damn popular la.
For those who view this later and is unable to download the song, then you can PM me and request for it, should you come across this thread many months/years later. Yunhaier should still be here, unless I perish from ill health (CHOY!).
P.S: Names will be honoured at the end of the story. So you are are a lurker, you could drop one post... to be appreciated and thanked by me!
You can begin the download from:
Here
Cheers
I'm halfway thru your story..
now listening to the song through the earpiece...
silent night.. everybody is sleeping.. perfect for reading your story and listening to the song as I read.
no offence, but i think some notes he sang are too soft.. pronounciation not very zhun also. =x
It's not your singing ba?
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Originally posted by browniebaobao:Hi Yun!
I'm halfway thru your story..
now listening to the song through the earpiece...
silent night.. everybody is sleeping.. perfect for reading your story and listening to the song as I read.
no offence, but i think some notes he sang are too soft.. pronounciation not very zhun also. =x
It's not your singing ba?
dun mind post the lyrics? Of course la, this not done in studio one, unlike the other song in my previously story.
P.S: Nope, not my singing.
Cheers